My period of vigour,virtue nd vibrance•
My period of dreams upon dreams
O`endless dreams were thou fufilled?
My period of exploiration
My period of strenght
My period of wishes upon wishes
O`endless wishes were thou met?
O`youth,ow I treasure dis period of mine
Wishin I remain so till thy creator calls•

How young I am in my youth
As old as my doubt
As young as my thought
How long will thou stay?
Heard of a period of wrinkles
Pray that thou befall me not
For in dis period I wish to remain•

My time of facin challenges
My time of winning battles
How vibrant I am in my youth
My youth neva grows old
Movin in circles like the howling wind
O`yes I shall be glad of another youthful call•

pearl~hapi:
lmao•u r jes a character•tnkz tho nd yes I shallreporttomymum

~3320~

I actualli wntd u guys to criticise nd comment on d poem•

pearl~hapi:
I actualli wntd u guys to criticise nd comment on d poem•

as a lover of poetry, i really find dis poem exciting, the words and the repeated patterns in d 1st stanza is crafty.
great work, keep it up.

masterpiecer:

as a lover of poetry, i really find dis poem exciting, the words and the repeated patterns in d 1st stanza is crafty.
great work, keep it up.

tnkz deary.

I love this. Just some minor rearrangements needed.

Are u a writter