What a nice thread!

@masterpiece, I'm rubbish at poems - so I admire your talent!

Okay, write a poem on Efe and Short Stories pls...

Jyde89: God bless your hand's bro, you made writing look like a piece of cake; may your muse alway's delight in you.

thanks alot, i recently took up writing and comments like yours is a huge support, thanks.

Efemena_xy: What a nice thread!

@masterpiece, I'm rubbish at poems - so I admire your talent!

Okay, write a poem on Efe and Short Stories pls...

Efe and Short Stories

She delight the sight of virgin sheets
hands, readily grabing any pen at sight
without a flicker of hesitance she sets to wtite
coma, hyphen, colon, semicolon, all sort of punctuations,
unevenly scattered amidst gathering of a thousand sentences
gradually turning into perfect syntheses

The nib of her pen is more crafty than an artist's brush
with a pallette of words, she paints like a Leonado da vinci
scenarios of fairy tales yet so convincing
short stories of euphoria, clourful like an aurora
samples from grandpa's favourite
she write with memories of him telling 'the tortise's birth rite'

Gestures and mannerisms she expresses to realism
her words are capable of turning into sight
you could virtually see the scene she writes
some in series of chronicles
some in extended sequels
short stories of Efe written in endless circles

^^ Wow!!

I'm speechless!

Thanks masterpiece - you've got raw talent.

This guy is good

masterpiecer:

Bokoharam and bomb

Kaboom! kaboom! kaboom!
resonated the deafening sickening sound
children scurried
women hurried
men, left in utmost dismay
entrapped in a terror display
i have seen this before
no, its not a deja vu
i use to watch it on CNN
i cant believe its already happening here
in our own dear country
leaving us in a state of endless fear
but the culprits are faceless
a name without a face
doesn't seem to make sence
Bokoharam
like the slaughtering of a ram
bloodily you have caused so much harm
how long will it take you to calm
when will you lay dowm your arms?
when you see a child without an arm
or a man who can no longer farm
begging for alms because you took away his palm
doesn't it ring an alarm?
were those the teachings of the Imam?
you are an epitome of doom
you, your bomb and its boom
soon you too will be doomed
we will sweep you out of this room
like the dust with a unified broom

Masterpiecer you are indeed the bomb
I don't mean of BokoHaram, the dumbs
Your words are like your working tool
That enlivens realities even to a fool
One lesson I have learnt from you is this
Be spontaneous you'll blow the world a kiss
Wait for 'the right time,' you'll surely end up numb
Literature I read so read my lips: you're the bomb!

bamto:
Masterpiecer you are indeed the bomb
I don't mean of BokoHaram, the dumbs
Your words are like your working tool
That enlivens realities even to a fool
One lesson I have learnt from you is this
Be spontaneous you'll blow the world a kiss
Wait for 'the right time,' you'll surely end up numb
Literature I read so read my lips: you're the bomb!

what else can i say?
@bamto, u made my morning already, i find ur piece very exciting and poetic, u too r 'the bomb', thank u so much

@masterpiecer
U re d bomb broda......Loving it so much. Pls keep it coming.

@ OP, you are great, we hope you will do us proud by winning an international award someday in the near future.

Please help me compose a poem for my wife titled: 'Olayinka'

Please wirte on HEARTBREAK. Thats what i'm feeling now

I would love to read something about 'PATIENCE'.

Kudos bro...This is really an enlightening thread. This is to hoping ur ink never runs dry...Well done...$ß.

[size=18pt]Bottombelle![/size]

Masterpiecer,you r really good,keep it up.ur family and friends would indeed be proud.write on:she stole my heart with a frown

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Agiliti:

hmm, you created account just so you can request poem..hope you're not a dude trying to get free words to chyke babe.
if you can prove it and OP doesn't reply you, i'll craft something extra special for ya

Thanx for d offer,bt I wld like masterpiecer to do that for me,and I know he would.

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U re really talented, i want u to write on 'becalina'

okay I am gonna give you two.I liking this so much
Pain and Love.

Masterpiecer,what's up with our poems?Ʋ r disappointing ur fans,Ʋ know

masterpiecer:

Idowuogbo and pidgin

"Do not speak vernacular"
those were the instructions of Mrs Betty
she had taught Queen's English for six years
grooming her students with proper lexicons
those effort proved futile

Mama had done her best
incultating it from infancy
the Mother tongue
just so her daughter,
will not only learn Oyibo

But Idowuogbo stood out
negleting both Mother tongue and Queen's
this is what she learnt from the area boys
the language of the Portuguese traders
now she speaks it more than the market women traders

Guy if u no tight, make i knw why.

ur poems are wonderful...wot a great talent here..pls write a poem for me on gracious sisters....

write a sonnet on my oga

Wow simply amazing. Someone has discovered his talent. Op i hope you are still on nairaland because i want a poem too.
It took the mods over 6 months to get this beautiful thread to the front page.

Me! Me!! Write a poem on: Ebunoluwa my love (let me warn you first, I go send am to my wife o! Ehen)

shevon: Me! Me!! Write a poem on: Ebunoluwa my love (let me warn you first, I go send am to my wife o! Ehen)

See dis one o

brokoto: pray tell, where did you see it?

bro u lack understanding.... Cant u see he used vernacular 2 replace pidgin

subscribing,I like.

@OP "Oga at the Top"

@OP "alomo"

masterpiecer:

Bokoharam and bomb

Kaboom! kaboom! kaboom!
resonated the deafening sickening sound
children scurried
women hurried
men, left in utmost dismay
entrapped in a terror display
i have seen this before
no, its not a deja vu
i use to watch it on CNN
i cant believe its already happening here
in our own dear country
leaving us in a state of endless fear
but the culprits are faceless
a name without a face
doesn't seem to make sence
Bokoharam
like the slaughtering of a ram
bloodily you have caused so much harm
how long will it take you to calm
when will you lay dowm your arms?
when you see a child without an arm
or a man who can no longer farm
begging for alms because you took away his palm
doesn't it ring an alarm?
were those the teachings of the Imam?
you are an epitome of doom
you, your bomb and its boom
soon you too will be doomed
we will sweep you out of this room
like the dust with a unified broom

hmmmm now this is a master piece

masterpiecer:

Bokoharam and bomb

Kaboom! kaboom! kaboom!
resonated the deafening sickening sound
children scurried
women hurried
men, left in utmost dismay
entrapped in a terror display
i have seen this before
no, its not a deja vu
i use to watch it on CNN
i cant believe its already happening here
in our own dear country
leaving us in a state of endless fear
but the culprits are faceless
a name without a face
doesn't seem to make sence
Bokoharam
like the slaughtering of a ram
bloodily you have caused so much harm
how long will it take you to calm
when will you lay dowm your arms?
when you see a child without an arm
or a man who can no longer farm
begging for alms because you took away his palm
doesn't it ring an alarm?
were those the teachings of the Imam?
you are an epitome of doom
you, your bomb and its boom
soon you too will be doomed
we will sweep you out of this room
like the dust with a unified broom

i didnt even bother to finish reading this...u are too good.may God grant you the avenue to reap the good and lucrative things that follows this talent.