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Re: Heart Burn by Ishilove: 8:23pm On Oct 31, 2012
Lose the typos and spelling errors. Do something about punctuations.
Re: Heart Burn by Mynd44: 8:33pm On Oct 31, 2012
Ishilove: Lose the typos and spelling errors. Do something about punctuations.
yes ma
Re: Heart Burn by DonaldGenes(m): 11:47pm On Nov 12, 2012
Another jobless Op
Re: Heart Burn by Mynd44: 6:30am On Nov 13, 2012
Donalð Genes: Another jobless Op
Unlike your thread which has joblessness written all over it, this is the literature section
Re: Heart Burn by TrishaP(f): 4:38pm On Apr 08, 2015
Mynd44:
You are not just another raindrop in the cloud
Or another teardrop in the eye
Neither are you another weave in my fabric
You are my world
My love
The single most important thing in my life
My world revolves around you
And my sanity depends on you
You are my life and world
You are the beginning
To a life which I want no end

when you left me you made a scar
which can never heal
death dealt me a blow
from which I cant rcover
you were taken from me
and I was left souless
lifeless and void
empty and cruel
without a heart
and without care


The reaper left me without you
he came and separated what should not have
and my life has been turned round
no more smiles when the rain fall
the sun rays turn darkness
freshly cut grass lost their smell
and food lost taste
bread turned to stone
and butter turned lime


I wish I could have gone in your stead
I wish I was the one taken
I wish I was the one in the beyond
I wish I was in the void with you
I wish I could turn judgement
make yours mine
and make mine yours
my life would have been better
my smiles longer
and my mentality stable

let the truth be heard
I love you and miss you even if it has been years
and too many winters has passed
I still want you
feel you
and hear you around me
I know you are up there
watching and waiting
just as I am waiting, so are you
I miss you ID and thats the truth

I know it's a little awkward digging into this topic,..but..this particular poem is amazing. I came here to peep and to steal lines. Ciao! grin

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Re: Heart Burn by firestar(f): 6:11pm On Apr 08, 2015
TrishaP:

I know it's a little awkward digging into this topic,..but..this particular poem is amazing. I came here to peep and to steal lines. Ciao! grin

Tsk... tsk... tsk...

I want an invite to your wedding.

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