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Nice! Keep it up

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Don't just read. Leave a comment telling me what you think. It would be really appreciated.

Nyc piece...kip it coming

Love it. More grease to your elbow

Interestin...

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@Spendblex, Luscioustrich & Oyestephen thanks 4 ur comments, really appreciated.

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Welldone! mobsync

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Nice one dear though there're lil mistakes

Splendblex: Nice one dear though there're lil mistakes

Yes, I too can see that (that's what I get for editing in a noisy classroom) but I'll edit it tomorrow. I'm presently reading for two tests tomorrow. Thanks for the observation.

Mobsync:
Yes, I too can see that (that's what I get for editing in a noisy classroom) but I'll edit it tomorrow. I'm presently reading for two tests tomorrow. Thanks for the observation.

it's ok,wish U d best!

Edited. Hope it's better now?

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Mobsync: Edited. Hope it's better now?

yea,welldone!

@spendblex and others, thanks for taking your time to read through my novel but frankly, I've lost interest in it. Besides, I have my semester exams coming up next year January and I have alot of catching up to do. Thanks once again for taking your time to go through it and for the advice and comments...peace

U mean u're not gonna continue wit d story It was interestin u knw

I don't think so. Besides, it looks like we are the only people reading it. Me, the writer and you. I may post a story some other time though. Maybe after i get a laptop, itz stressful typing with a phone.

Mobsync: I don't think so. Besides, it looks like we are the only people reading it. Me, the writer and you. I may post a story some other time though. Maybe after i get a laptop, itz stressful typing with a phone.

it's ok,i understand. Hope u get a laptop soon

Slight change of plans, I would continue the story. Don't think it's a good idea to leave half a novel half finished.

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Good job,don't be discouraged please...keep it up!

Splendblex: Good job,don't be discouraged please...keep it up!

Ok, thanks for the encouragement.

Ur story is really gud, keep it up,I ws engrossed in it dat I 4got 2 type a few words of encouragement, pls keep dem comin ok? I really hate 2 stp half-way readin, it makes me wonder wat wl happen nxt n I hate dt, sori abt d fone tin, do gt a laptop n success in ur exams

I wish you the best in your exams Mobsync.
I'm beginning to wonder, must everyone that Joe meets die? Please keep it coming.

Chirolechick: Ur story is really gud, keep it up,I ws engrossed in it dat I 4got 2 type a few words of encouragement, pls keep dem comin ok? I really hate 2 stp half-way readin, it makes me wonder wat wl happen nxt n I hate dt, sori abt d fone tin, do gt a laptop n success in ur exams

thanks, 'll upload on Thursday. Been having tests since last week

j-slimz:
I wish you the best in your exams Mobsync.
I'm beginning to wonder, must everyone that Joe meets die? Please keep it coming.

thanks. And for the question, it's not everyone Joe meets that dies. Atleast, Mr Burr isn't dead yet

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