e-Iceberg:
16 SHOTS AT STONE NIGGA!!!

u 'firestone'? u NIGGA LAME,& u FRAMING A SWEETER NAME dat is beta dan d BIGGER NAME/'Mr Flintstone'doesnt make u luk EITHER SANE or a gud rapper, so t's useless if hia,u AIMIN FOR BIGGA FAME!/

call him 'poor vendor'cz its punches dis BROTHER LACKS,buh lyk 'american footballers' he can come wit HUT ATTACKS/,yet he aint GAT WAT AH GAT,cz i cld slash his back into 4 den we rili see a 'QUATER BACK'!/(hot)

even ya 'current-flows' are getting no torrent-'volts' lyk jittery ATHLETES FEEL JERKY ABOUT POLES/(vaults)
&aint stil 'attractive' lyk MAGNETS REPELING AT SOUTH POLES,u'l tink i brng u puNches as small villages wen ma 'ARM LETS' DESCENDIN FAT BOUTS, YO!/(hamlet)

hey 'd!!ck' FFUCK-UR-RAP, culd CUT UR 'CAP'&av ur folks wailing, left wit 'OH-FIRESTONE'/ BERG gat u castrated? prolly cz 'ure below him&machos are rare',so u cldnt GO-'HIRE'-BROS/(higher)

YO NONSENSE OAF, i throw a 'back flip'&a thud on ur head, get balanced den u assume UR STUNTED' GROWTH/
wen it comes to lyricals am sure dis B!TCH LOVES NOTHING BUH 'PHUCK YA CLONE',wat heck! wen i remain 'ontop' lyk SWITCH OFF BUTTONS TO NOKIA FONES/

listen nxt tym dnt rant-ya-mouth, aint sayin u'l b an 'underwear' buh
icld make u pace&'pant'-about/&prolly u fagg-around dats y u dnt
'come straight' sure . .aint gat-ah-doubt/

u rap-gud? nah! buh seems dis lad-cool wen he faggs-nud(e)!/ 4 him it aint bad-too, i'l pay 4 u since its 'owe' u cap-fool/(o. .CAP'O')

ure 'last' buh hu u be-'first'? wetin u see-sef? fool, u copy my lines
be wen we hear u 'beat'-em/(bit)
respect wen u sight me,cz u'l knw u've SEEN A GEE, HE'S MYTHICAL
MEHN!/&if hiphop was an exam i'l b its '1st 3answers' am 'B-A-D' IN
LYRICALS DAMN!/

e-Iceberg:
16 SHOTS AT STONE NIGGA!!!

u 'firestone'? u NIGGA LAME,& u FRAMING A SWEETER NAME dat is beta dan d BIGGER NAME/'Mr Flintstone'doesnt make u luk EITHER SANE or a gud rapper, so t's useless if hia,u AIMIN FOR BIGGA FAME!/

call him 'poor vendor'cz its punches dis BROTHER LACKS,buh lyk 'american footballers' he can come wit HUT ATTACKS/,yet he aint GAT WAT AH GAT,cz i cld slash his back into 4 den we rili see a 'QUATER BACK'!/(hot)

even ya 'current-flows' are getting no torrent-'volts' lyk jittery ATHLETES FEEL JERKY ABOUT POLES/(vaults)
&aint stil 'attractive' lyk MAGNETS REPELING AT SOUTH POLES,u'l tink i brng u puNches as small villages wen ma 'ARM LETS' DESCENDIN FAT BOUTS, YO!/(hamlet)

hey 'd!!ck' FFUCK-UR-RAP, culd CUT UR 'CAP'&av ur folks wailing, left wit 'OH-FIRESTONE'/ BERG gat u castrated? prolly cz 'ure below him&machos are rare',so u cldnt GO-'HIRE'-BROS/(higher)

YO NONSENSE OAF, i throw a 'back flip'&a thud on ur head, get balanced den u assume UR STUNTED' GROWTH/
wen it comes to lyricals am sure dis B!TCH LOVES NOTHING BUH 'PHUCK YA CLONE',wat heck! wen i remain 'ontop' lyk SWITCH OFF BUTTONS TO NOKIA FONES/

listen nxt tym dnt rant-ya-mouth, aint sayin u'l b an 'underwear' buh
icld make u pace&'pant'-about/&prolly u fagg-around dats y u dnt
'come straight' sure . .aint gat-ah-doubt/

u rap-gud? nah! buh seems dis lad-cool wen he faggs-nud(e)!/ 4 him it aint bad-too, i'l pay 4 u since its 'owe' u cap-fool/(o. .CAP'O')

ure 'last' buh hu u be-'first'? wetin u see-sef? fool, u copy my lines
be wen we hear u 'beat'-em/(bit)
respect wen u sight me,cz u'l knw u've SEEN A GEE, HE'S MYTHICAL
MEHN!/&if hiphop was an exam i'l b its '1st 3answers' am 'B-A-D' IN
LYRICALS DAMN!/

e-Iceberg:
16 SHOTS AT STONE NIGGA!!!

u 'firestone'? u NIGGA LAME,& u FRAMING A SWEETER NAME dat is beta dan d BIGGER NAME/'Mr Flintstone'doesnt make u luk EITHER SANE or a gud rapper, so t's useless if hia,u AIMIN FOR BIGGA FAME!/

call him 'poor vendor'cz its punches dis BROTHER LACKS,buh lyk 'american footballers' he can come wit HUT ATTACKS/,yet he aint GAT WAT AH GAT,cz i cld slash his back into 4 den we rili see a 'QUATER BACK'!/(hot)

even ya 'current-flows' are getting no torrent-'volts' lyk jittery ATHLETES FEEL JERKY ABOUT POLES/(vaults)
&aint stil 'attractive' lyk MAGNETS REPELING AT SOUTH POLES,u'l tink i brng u puNches as small villages wen ma 'ARM LETS' DESCENDIN FAT BOUTS, YO!/(hamlet)

hey 'd!!ck' FFUCK-UR-RAP, culd CUT UR 'CAP'&av ur folks wailing, left wit 'OH-FIRESTONE'/ BERG gat u castrated? prolly cz 'ure below him&machos are rare',so u cldnt GO-'HIRE'-BROS/(higher)

YO NONSENSE OAF, i throw a 'back flip'&a thud on ur head, get balanced den u assume UR STUNTED' GROWTH/
wen it comes to lyricals am sure dis B!TCH LOVES NOTHING BUH 'PHUCK YA CLONE',wat heck! wen i remain 'ontop' lyk SWITCH OFF BUTTONS TO NOKIA FONES/

listen nxt tym dnt rant-ya-mouth, aint sayin u'l b an 'underwear' buh
icld make u pace&'pant'-about/&prolly u fagg-around dats y u dnt
'come straight' sure . .aint gat-ah-doubt/

u rap-gud? nah! buh seems dis lad-cool wen he faggs-nud(e)!/ 4 him it aint bad-too, i'l pay 4 u since its 'owe' u cap-fool/(o. .CAP'O')

ure 'last' buh hu u be-'first'? wetin u see-sef? fool, u copy my lines
be wen we hear u 'beat'-em/(bit)
respect wen u sight me,cz u'l knw u've SEEN A GEE, HE'S MYTHICAL
MEHN!/&if hiphop was an exam i'l b its '1st 3answers' am 'B-A-D' IN
LYRICALS DAMN!/

CAPO-FIRESTONE:
LEGGO...................... .../............................./.................... [I SLIT-DIS-SCALLYWAG gullet n HIT-DIS-BERG wif LIGHTNING-BOLT.am quick 2 snap is neck xo he wul b dead b4 a blink of an EYE/I.lyk an honest cop i burst him 4 biting lyn xo i lock is ass behind bars."ICE" death is inevitable lyk a sentence prisoner 2 die by "HANGING"...PUN=[EYE/I][1 BAR]...................../.... ................./....................................[lyk "ares" i TRASH-DIS-BERG liv him lifeless as i SMASH-IS-CHEST.i force my fist in2 is throat n mk him bleed 2 death.got him cova in is own "BLOOD" lyk he is wearing a "RED JERSEY".I end dis wack LOW-LIFE dat BLOW-PIPE wif SLOW-PUNCHEZ dat "CRIPPLE" him.i hit/heat is spine leaving him wif a dislocated back bone,..[PUN=internal:RED JERSEY/BLOOD]....hit/heat][2 BAR]........../............................./.............../............................,...../.............../[IF berg doesnt bliv in d saying "WAT GOES AROUND CUM AROUNDZ" den let him throw a "BOMERANG" n watch as is head is gona get chop off.he is very slow lyk a donkey xo even if i tie is dick 2 a train he stil wul nt b fast in sex.Dis ICE is a SILLY-THUG jst forming tough but ama BULLY-BERG lyk a baby[3 BAR]....................,./..................................../.....................................|[I CRUSH-IS-SPINE wif punchez n PUNCH-IS-BONE mking is LIFE-LINE decreases.I insert memory card in2 is brain n format is tot xo he wul nt tink straigth.Even if berg CRACK-IS-SKULL he stil cant drop a dope lyn.i BREAK-IS-VOCAL cord xo making Ice "SPEECHLESS"[4 BAR]............/................................./.................................|[Lyk "ALSPHALT" i "BOOST" my lyn wif "NITRO" xo am fast in kiling him wif a punch.even if he is made up of "NEON" he stil wul nt SHINE-BRIGHT lyk d chinese special EMPIRE-LIGHT.i diss dis lad wif my fist i slay him 2 piecez|[PUN=BOOST/NITRO][5 BAR].............../............................................../...............................|[Watch me get rid of him xo i dump dis buddy/body lyk a used pad.i hit ICE-GUT xo he wul nt b able 2 stand up rite.NINE-SHOT on is chest berg is a goner.if we eva c is "PICZ" on a poster den u must knw it Ice "OBITUARY".got his well wisher singing gud bye song 4 him "BERG DIS WORLD IS NT UR OWN U JST A PASSER BY"..|PUN=BUDDY/BODY..][6 BAR].........................../........................../..................................|[I cut is "BLADDER" xo he wil b "PISSING" out shit!d only time we c him on TV must b wen berg is wif a banner above is head saying"HELP ME AM BEGGING-4-ARMZ" dis dude is a poor pauper.Lyk an HOLY-PRIEST i CAST-OUT-ICE wackness out of him lyk am exercising a demon.i BLAST-IS-DICK wif a bomb[7 BAR]......./................................/......................................................|[Lyk "SUPERMAN" i beat him wif no stress.lyk "HORROR MOVIE" i hunt berg down.he wil tel u all ba2ling me his is worst "NIGHTMARE".i bash is teeth in xo he can chew is wordz,i empty PACK-OF-PUNCHEZ on is chest n liv him lame.dis dawg/dog is WACK-WIF-CLUTHEZ cuz he cant walk straigt...|[PUN=DAWG/DOG][8 BAR]..............[AM DONE]..........

mikuz: Criteria/ Rules :
Rhymes - Berg
Similies/ Metaphors - Berg
Creativity - Capo
Punchlines - Capo
Vocab - Capo
Wordplay - Berg
Flow - Berg

Berg wins.

DawgChainz: Opener:BERG multies:TIE (bergs multies makes more sense tho') creativity:BERG punchlines:CAPO metaphor:BERG Wordplays:BERG(Both had puns but CAPO's own was wack....even my kid sister can think of such) flow:BERG Closer:BERG (BERG takes my vote)!

B'am0r:
Am i free to verd here?