arabanibaba: this is so cool and i enjoy it so much i just consult the oracle and your ifa name shall be oworinsogbe

Clemzy16: Lovely story it is. . .
Definately a front page material. Let's call on the MOD's in this section to move this to the front page.

DNA1: Interesting story...waiting 4 ur next book....u av really inspired me to complete d book i started several years ago.....

But d epilogue seemed as if u RUSHED it...
Besides why did u kill our dear Nike and Tunde..
Waiting for your reply.

zubike01:

Thanks DNA i hope to read the story i inspired you to complete.

An epilogue is usually just used to bring closure to a story. It helps reveal the faith of a character after all the events that occured in the story.It shouldn't be expected to take thesame form as the main chapters of the story.

I didn't kill NIke and Tunde the story said nothing is really known all we have is speculations all we are sure of is that she had a son. We can't confirm if they died or just decided to go their separate ways and leave their son in an orphanage. Its a tragedy dear...

Hugs hugs hugs

DNA1:

ah! Tragedy ke.
Biko Zuby do something for your numba one fan na....why did u allow ogunshola and princess to live happily ever after, and then u are leaving tunde and nike just like that! No oooo.....no be so ooo.....try adjust am abeg...

zubike01:

DNA my number one fan. How would you have preferred it to end? Remember the curse can't be broken she has accepted it. If you can Come up with some creative suggestion that would prevent Nike and Tunde from dying but ensure that their son still grows up an Orphan.Then i would be willing to tweak it a little. Ok....

Ladywilyms: Woah! This is really a nice job
wat abt getting a powerful man of God 2 pray n break d curse then live happily?

zubike01:
Nike is a Santeras a divinity i find it hard that she would choose to walk that path after her encounter in Valley of flames ministry. Tunde is a thief with no respect for religion, culture and human life. i didn't think it would be fair for him to have a happy ending. Never the less getting a power man of God to break the curse would make all the suspense meaningless. The joy of suspense is the inability to predict what comes next.

DNA1:

hahaha, Zuby is dat wot u think?
The suspense in this story is already strong..... So nothing can water it down....Let me show u something....

Dis is not the way the story came across to me, and i'm sure, one or two of ur readers will agree....
Firstly, u portrayed Nike as a fighter, and if anyone should have a happy ending after all the trouble, it's her. Seriously she has to be delivered from the curse.
Secondly, u portrayed Tunde as a criminal that was ready to start a new life, but it could still make sense to make the curse kill him, if you really want a tragedy.
As for ogunshola, he ought to have died since he FAILED his mission.
And the son of tunde and nike can always be put in an orphanage, so that nike can start a new life.
Infact if u want to end the story in such a way that u can write part two, then u should make the child inherit some part of the curse.

I hope this helps, as a writer i know the two most difficult parts to adjust in stories are the beginning and the end.... So i'm not suggesting you change the ending, I'm just registering my ideas....it might help u in ur next story or something.... # just thinking.#

DNA1:

hahaha, Zuby is dat wot u think?
The suspense in this story is already strong..... So nothing can water it down....Let me show u something....

Dis is not the way the story came across to me, and i'm sure, one or two of ur readers will agree....
Firstly, u portrayed Nike as a fighter, and if anyone should have a happy ending after all the trouble, it's her. Seriously she has to be delivered from the curse.
Secondly, u portrayed Tunde as a criminal that was ready to start a new life, but it could still make sense to make the curse kill him, if you really want a tragedy.
As for ogunshola, he ought to have died since he FAILED his mission.
And the son of tunde and nike can always be put in an orphanage, so that nike can start a new life.
Infact if u want to end the story in such a way that u can write part two, then u should make the child inherit some part of the curse.

I hope this helps, as a writer i know the two most difficult parts to adjust in stories are the beginning and the end.... So i'm not suggesting you change the ending, I'm just registering my ideas....it might help u in ur next story or something.... # just thinking.#

DNA1:

hahaha, Zuby is dat wot u think?
The suspense in this story is already strong..... So nothing can water it down....Let me show u something....

Dis is not the way the story came across to me, and i'm sure, one or two of ur readers will agree....
Firstly, u portrayed Nike as a fighter, and if anyone should have a happy ending after all the trouble, it's her. Seriously she has to be delivered from the curse.
Secondly, u portrayed Tunde as a criminal that was ready to start a new life, but it could still make sense to make the curse kill him, if you really want a tragedy.
As for ogunshola, he ought to have died since he FAILED his mission.
And the son of tunde and nike can always be put in an orphanage, so that nike can start a new life.
Infact if u want to end the story in such a way that u can write part two, then u should make the child inherit some part of the curse.

I hope this helps, as a writer i know the two most difficult parts to adjust in stories are the beginning and the end.... So i'm not suggesting you change the ending, I'm just registering my ideas....it might help u in ur next story or something.... # just thinking.#

Clemzy16: hmmm... I so so AGREE with you. *hides my face*

zubike01:

lol hide or no hide i see you

Ormorlehwah: Wow! Dix is a gr8 job. Tanx we appreciate dis. Short verses bt mighty.

zubike01:

Thanks the young star didn'tt know anyone was reading it thats why i stopped would update it for you.