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The hired assassins came right in with full force after eliminating
the gatekeeper. Tade was the leader of the troupe of this assassins sent to chief Davies
house in order to eliminate him and get the money there. They went into different rooms as
big as the house was, it was painted cream colour, with leather sofas in the living room
and a plasma television. There was also a center table bought from england that worths several thousands of naira, sound systems and great speakers also were in the living room. It was tiled and it was a shinning one. They searched each room and met the maids in a particular room. They brought one of them out forcefully and made sure they were all quiet so as not to make the operation easily discovered. It was an estate, the policemen were patrolling when they noticed that it might be robbery and hid themselves around, the assassination and robbery was on by then, not quite long gunshots were heard, the chief and his wife were killed in their room. This made the policemen come around to see what was happening then fire shoot out came up. The five guys noticed and started shooting the policemen that entered into the house till they got out with Shola, one of them carrying the neat white bag full of 20 million naira. The policemen started shooting when two out of those guys fell and died, shola was shot also by his hand and the bag was soaked of blood. They entered into the car and zoomed of with shola regarded as sholay by them in pain at the back seat of the car. The policemen couldn't go after them because more of them were already injured and some killed. The assassins escaped.


The assassins were sent by chief collins who was chief's business associate,they went to the same university to study when they were small but destiny made Chief Davies to get a good job through his rich dad then and he also started making his money and became rich also till he met hgis friend walking around still searching for employment oppurtunities and helped him. The promise was that they would be sharing the profit 70:30. Chief Davies so have the highest share but after many months that the family became best of friends, chief Collins started complaining of the money he was receiving as too small for him. It was chief Davies who built him the house he and his family ® living in and even one of his cars which was his first car, sportage. When he had been complaining about his percentage he was been given by his friend, Chief Davies thought about it but also knew about his bad spendings outside. He spends most of the time in club houses, this made chief Davies thought that he should not add to his percentage due to this lavish spending until he changes. It was the last business they went into that the profit was 20 million naira and made Coliins thought of eliminating him and his family so that he can own any amount of money earned.

The morning came when Tade called chief collins to tell him about the operation they went for when everything turned into a big quarrel.
'Hello chief, this is too inform you that the operation was bad' Tade said looking so dull.
'Bad?' He repeated and looked at his wife on seat so close.
'What happened?' He continued.
The policemen came now and killed two out of my guys and even sholay has been shot now!' He replied with his bad tune, he was very much in anger
'What! Policemen, how come?' He thought in his heart.
'So what of the money?' He said deeply in thought of what it might have caused
'The bag is here with me, you can come and pick it any time but you will add to the former money o. Like 10% of this 20 million' he replied
'2 million? How possible is that? After I've given you a million for this job?' He asked looking so angry. He stood up in annoyance and removed the cap on his head looking like a frustrated person.
'Does it matter? It doesn't. Two were killed and even one shot here now. If not for being a professional and having a doctor in this house what might have happened? He questioned.
'So meaning? 2 million? I will give you don't worry.' He replied and ended the call.
He moved closer to his wife smiling at her and told her that chief Davies had been eliminated. They were happy and celebrated.





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Olajumoke, the only child of chief Davies hurried back from school to the police station that was described to her by one of the maids that called her£ she was accompanied by Tolulope her best male friend who drove her down there due to her mood. Investigation was already on and the corpses were already moved to the mortuary. The policemen were questioning the maids when she arrived with her dressed in a pair of jeans looking so beautiful but depressed and has been crying all day. She arrived there and confirmed her parents were dead and fainted......

Hmmm..this seems good...but need a lot of professional touches. @OP,is this your first?