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A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by Nobody: 2:09pm On Sep 28, 2013 |
Ok, i wrote this song down and i'm about to put it on studio record,but i got this uneasiness on my first rap verse,i don't think it's really good so i decided to post it here and allow other Hip Hop fans and heads to judge....coment if it's good or not and if you have any suggestion you may go on and suggest,criticise it! I really need to make it perfect And please don't steal it :> Legoo! RAP VERSE Rhymes in my mouth i wanna spit it out blazing in my tongue gotta take it out money overpouring yeah me cashing out be like i'm breaking records oh lord i got more cash me flying higher,to apex met an Angel,we had sex felt like a miracle,best i ever had girl so fresh make a brother wanna spend evil haters hear my rhymes and go deaf me be like Jesus Christ,my holy self bread getting large,i'm so blessed motherf0ckers wan' try,they all dead me baddest,unu don't reach so heartless.me f0ck the beat your biatch,handling my diick y'all haters,psychos or freaks *chuckles* this niqqa was born to lead and i swear imma gon' lead Tally ho! Me killing this beat Three biatches on my right me eating thou meat Why you hating why you hating on this niqqa oh! o: they hating coz he getting cash haters get pained,talking barbash while we stash cash in the calabash yeah me f0cking biatches i don't even know their faces see her give me head oh my god i love these ladies she taking of her clothes she taking of her jean these niqqaz watch illegal they need PG Checking on the lines making sure i get it right London chicks hitting on my profile and i be getting girls Bleep it money rules case closed moherf0ckers!!! ......................................................................... Please don't fail to like it if you like it And also criticise IT! But most importantly,advise me and correct me on where i went wrong #WaitingForYou 1 Like |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by sushieater: 3:05pm On Sep 28, 2013 |
I came from TIME, nigga i saw ur END before ur pops popped em THINGS.. ETT Mehn! Don't really know what to say, I can't call it wack cus I can see that you're still thinking about bitcches, fucck, and shiit like that.. So, i don't expect you to pen down some deeper shiit.. There's always a room for improvement but it comes gradually, so hang on, you'll get there soon.. The thing is, can you really flow well in the booth? Trust me, it's really really important in this music business |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by Nobody: 3:40pm On Sep 28, 2013 |
sushieater: I came from TIME, nigga i saw ur END before ur pops popped em THINGS.. ETTC'mon! Is it wack?? |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by sushieater: 4:09pm On Sep 28, 2013 |
god_of_music: C'mon! Is it wack??Mehn! I don't know what to say, it's somewhere between wack and good.. It's an Ok verse if your song is going to be a commercial hit cus nobody has the time to listen to whatever you're rapping about, just give them a hot beat and hook, then you're good to go.. but if it's going to be a real rap song, then I am afraid to say that it's not up to par.. Your lines were so basic, you need to put in more effort.. Hope you understand where I am coming from? 2 Likes |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by philfearon(m): 4:13pm On Sep 28, 2013 |
If you can,download the song "syllables" by Eminem ft Jay Z,Dr.Dre and 50 Cent...Listen to what they said on the track about rap... Here's a cue,Eminem said that rap aint about lyrics anymore,its all about a hard beat with a Catchy Hook!! ... As to you lyrics,normally,you tried,it was almost perfectly laid... 1}But as an upcoming Rapper,who has nothing yet,saying things you dont have will take you no where! 2}.We are in Nigeria,not America..Saying things like "biatch biatch" "fu.c.k f.u.ck" dont work here...It doesnt spell that you are original..Its something more of a Nigerianized American! 3}Speak the language{not mother tongue} people understand...The language here is what appeals to people,e.g current trends,or something people dont know about;and not what appeals to;You want to please People with your raps,not the other way round..... 4}Try to infuse pidgin English in your rap,it is Naija's language: Unless you want to remain an underground rapper,not Commercial...... 5}Try and be original...No matter what anybody tells you,my brother,Originality Alwayz Pay....."A" in the Capital! 2 Likes |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by philfearon(m): 4:15pm On Sep 28, 2013 |
If you can,download the song "syllables" by Eminem ft Jay Z,Dr.Dre and 50 Cent...Listen to what they said on the track about rap... Here's a cue,Eminem said that rap aint about lyrics anymore,its all about a hard beat with a Catchy Hook!! ... As to you lyrics,normally,you tried,it was almost perfectly laid... 1}But as an upcoming Rapper,who has nothing yet,saying things you dont have will take you no where! 2}.We are in Nigeria,not America..Saying things like "biatch biatch" "fu.c.k f.u.ck" dont work here...It doesnt spell that you are original..Its something more of a Nigerianized American! 3}Speak the language{not mother tongue} people understand...The language here is what appeals to people,e.g current trends,or something people dont know about;and not what appeals to;You want to please People with your raps,not the other way round..... 4}Try to infuse pidgin English in your rap,it is Naija's language: Unless you want to remain an underground rapper,not Commercial...... 5}Try and be original...No matter what anybody tells you,my brother,Originality Alwayz Pay....."A" in the Capital! 1 Like |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by Nobody: 4:54pm On Sep 28, 2013 |
sushieater:Ok, I appreciate...I noticed it too...I'm working on it now |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by Nobody: 4:56pm On Sep 28, 2013 |
philfearon: If you can,download the song "syllables" by Eminem ft Jay Z,Dr.Dre and 50 Cent...Listen to what they said on the track about rap...WOW!!! I'm definately gonna put down on my mind....thanks a million |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by Nmeri17: 11:23pm On Sep 29, 2013 |
Owky how bout these: life aint fair its ebony but death is even darker i tied the middle belt to my waist and sagged my pants black boys be popping condoms. I be sealing contracts if you're from a poor background can i say yo state of origin is poverty... |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by Nobody: 8:15am On Sep 30, 2013 |
Nmeri17: Owky how bout these: life aint fair its ebony but death is even darkerI don't see the rhymes buh you tried. |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by Nmeri17: 9:48pm On Sep 30, 2013 |
These are just random lines from the song. Do u wanna see the rhyme part ;-D |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by Nobody: 10:25am On Oct 01, 2013 |
Nmeri17: These are just random lines from the song. Do u wanna see the rhyme part ;-DYeah, show me |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by nickz(m): 10:02am On Oct 02, 2013 |
,too much on sex,if you intend on making it (blowing) in nigeria.you need very strong punches that are incisive with a bit of humour,don't get carried away by the lilwayne,2chainz and dreezy song you listen to..................5.5/10.......and the tone of your voice has a big factor on the style of rap you wanna choose.......... 1 Like |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by Nmeri17: 10:02pm On Oct 02, 2013 |
I actually wanted to post my lyrics on here but as i brought my rap book out, i just chickened out. Imagine posting such lines on a forum as public as nairaland |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by Nobody: 1:03pm On Oct 03, 2013 |
Nmeri17: I actually wanted to post my lyrics on here but as i brought my rap book out, i just chickened out. Imagine posting such lines on a forum as public as nairalandYou afraid they may steal it Oya PM me the koko. |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by dazekid(m): 9:46pm On Oct 03, 2013 |
frankly your lines are whack...the only thing that can save you is your delivery...if u can flow then your are good to go... |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by dazekid(m): 9:48pm On Oct 03, 2013 |
talk about stacking cash in a calabash... now that's a whack ass line...it ain't a necessity to rhyme.. |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by dazekid(m): 10:02pm On Oct 03, 2013 |
ma niggaz got ma backs and I aint talking bout spinal cords u talking mavado I'm talking bout Michel kors flow so good y'all owe me all the applause don't get ma shii now that's the true meaning of a clause.. I was tryna make it rain now the streets be flooding... tryna make it pop now the champagne's pouring when we in the club none of ma niggaz ordering eat your chicks pus.y now or mouth be watering.... now that's how u drop... I just put this up after reading or post and its not half good for my studio material... 1 Like |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by Nmeri17: 11:15pm On Oct 03, 2013 |
How about mine @dazekid? Your username is whack tho. Jus saying |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by Nobody: 11:43pm On Oct 03, 2013 |
dazekid: ma niggaz got ma backs and I aint talking bout spinal cordsActually I know that's wack...it wasn't even good to me sef |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by Peterwizzy: 2:35am On Oct 04, 2013 |
philfearon: If you can,download the song "syllables" by Eminem ft Jay Z,Dr.Dre and 50 Cent...Listen to what they said on the track about rap...Gbam! 1 Like |
Re: A Nairalander's Rap Verse [rate My Lyrics] by dazekid(m): 10:13am On Oct 04, 2013 |
Nmeri17: How about mine @dazekid? Your username is whack tho. Jus saying Lol...blame it on the auto correct...it was meant to be kidDaze but was swapped....didn't see it as an issue tho coz I go by dazekid too...history,,,sentiments and shii... .. @god.of.music...if u get into a booth,,this flows may sound like the bomb if you have a great delivery so I'd just say as you work on your ryhmes,work on your delivery as well coz it goes a long way... |
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