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| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Justiceenams(m): 6:13pm On Oct 20, 2013 |
Firestar ur pen light up my star ur work nd me attached yet,glue i pour on my back closer i fear is far in heart i wish we 1 myself i fear 2bad 4giveness 4rm God i ask this seed i plant in ur heart to grow nd make me laugh bewarned b4 u land beneath i post my past. 1 Like |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Justiceenams(m): 6:28pm On Oct 20, 2013 |
. MY PAST Sometimes we do sh*t make her feel it not because we want it but cause she earned it this we do frowning not cause she is`nt pretty but we ain`t happy dem,we`r stocked in this sh*t Bro,do you feel me? we once loved this,felt it but lies and denials kill feelings you know,they call us bitches saying "we ain`t sh*t" while we count our losses yet,they feel they lossed everything OUR STRENGTH,SPERM THEY`VE FORGOTTEN man,they`re f*cking bitches thats why they could`nt see it the break-up was before the dating just waiting for the right timing so the bitches dont take in much injuries dont twist this sh*t ladies are different from bitches. |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by firestar(f): 10:26am On Oct 23, 2013 |
...-_-# klilnt... Klilnt. Oh hard element. What track shall you play? iTill. iShear. iPlough? Or a composite 'iSlay'? |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by timpaker(m): 2:03pm On Oct 23, 2013 |
[b]Tied by the tree side Lost and forgotten; with a pitiful gaze and a shout For help - at the hole twelve inches wide A zillion ant and hungry rats sprouts In his body, he felt the tickle of pain Scratching the surface of his skin It increases as multiple bites drain His strength, each striking dins His flesh between their teeth; their maws dazed him - hundreds rushed to his face To his nose, ears and mouth, and the rats - with their paws runs roughly and ravenously like cats frenzied chase Gently, his blood drips, drowning and dyeing Many ants and rats The horror of him dying Made him pee, sh!i!t and fart A shout, an echo, made the bush birds tweets As they flew from tree to tree He's face suddenly goes numbed just like his feet "Death make this quick and set me free!" A prayer well said - rats left to his neck from his nose And bit deep into his esophagus; His last thought before he fell into comatose Was the ride in the school bus....  THE END =======>  [/b] |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 4:39pm On Oct 23, 2013 |
justice, don't douse the blood fire already, this ain't a place for remnicising about past this is a place for war  Tim, way to go... i felt the pain in his body, so cry nomore, for he deserved it |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Joshthefirst(m): 4:41pm On Oct 23, 2013 |
It begins again. Smh. |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by timpaker(m): 5:16pm On Oct 23, 2013 |
princesa: I don't think so. Its more like a true story. It happened to my school son's elder brother back in the days. The horror is what I interpreted into this poem. #noMoreBloodyPoems-I-Quit Cheers! |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 5:17pm On Oct 23, 2013 |
Joshthefirst: they started it  |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 5:19pm On Oct 23, 2013 |
timpaker:my apologies and condolence |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Joshthefirst(m): 5:54pm On Oct 23, 2013 |
timpaker:my condolences |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Justiceenams(m): 10:17pm On Oct 23, 2013 |
[quote author=princesa]justice, don't douse the blood fire already, this ain't a place for remnicising about past this is a place for war Tim, way to go... i felt the pain in his body, so cry nomore, for he deserved it [/quote@princessa thats noted. |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by badmusace(m): 6:00pm On Oct 24, 2013 |
"Kaka came to visit father today 'Tonight we end our land dispute', they both say They hugged, father nearly lifts him up his feet Soon they begin to devour, in merry, drinks and meat Later, uncle excused himself to pee And he returns, locking the front door and holding the key Father was busy telling those tales he tells us in bed And he didn't know when uncle swung the axe and off with his head! Mother screamed and tried to fight, but she was pregnant, Uncle was the fortified elephant, mother the helpless ant A strike to the belly and three to the face Was enough to keep her mute and lifeless The white walls once adorned with homely soot and mud Was now smeared grey and red with blood All these happened so sudden and quick As it took a while for my legs and thoughts to pick Then I grabbed Abdul and raced out the backdoor, We burst into the kitchen but Abdul fell to the floor I looked back to see him escaping Uncle's grasp narrowly As he throws himself in the large oven never used by we 'Oh what a smart boy' I quietly mutter, But he wasn't! Mama had just used it for tonight's dinner And uncle gently sealed the oven and laughed merrily Abdul's screams and the smell of suya will forever hunt me No time to mourn, as I burst into the embrace of the nightly air I ran as fast as I could, but every second brought uncle's steps near And then suddenly, the earth rose and I dropped down The last thing I saw was Uncle's axe coming down..." 'And that's all I can remember doctor' I say after the incident which is about 3weeks after. The female nurse looks very manly, and her legs...she needs to wax... And then it became clear, but I could hardly scream, when in mid air, behind the doctor,'she' raised her axe! 1 Like |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 6:14pm On Oct 24, 2013 |
^this here is blood so thrilling welcome back to the pack finally, there's a pen-king who's willing To ignite the fire of the darkside back |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by timpaker(m): 6:20pm On Oct 24, 2013 |
@badmusace: Jheez!!!! That was horrible What a story... Awesome 1 Like |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Joshthefirst(m): 6:24pm On Oct 24, 2013 |
I'm all maxed out By these last bouts Of blood and horror tales But we shall stand We shall hold back This new and hopeful surge With a sword in one hand And a shield in the other The men of old shall rise Once again we shall open our eyes And rise up. Reality breaks forth. |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Joshthefirst(m): 6:30pm On Oct 24, 2013 |
Rooooooaaarrr! This men of old shout They rush to enforce a victory won With a melodious song Skald song It puts a romance in our bones As we listen. Skald song. Fearless men of old Chased out the last cold With the new warriors bold Picture it in your head We stand in glorious dread We are unstoppable We have the victory. Then we sing and dance for joy And we hear thee sweet skald song. |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by badmusace(m): 11:22pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
princesa: ^this here is blood so thrilling !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by badmusace(m): 11:24pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
timpaker: Thanks man! loved ur piece on the dinner ish nd that inspired from real life. How do u guys learn to write so good? |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by timpaker(m): 7:02am On Oct 26, 2013 |
badmusace: Learn to write so good? Chairman, you're 'gooder'  Seriously, I love your imagination and style of writing Your only demerit is that you are too bloody  Your poems are very good |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 1:35pm On Oct 26, 2013 |
badmusace: hehehe...sorry, just that on this thread, i assume a different personage. welcome back though.  |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by badmusace(m): 6:15pm On Nov 07, 2013 |
princesa: Lol! Pardon my blue pen It was still in search of blood to make it bleed. Thanks for this blooded welcome rug. Now, time to unleash in scribbles, my hellish deeds! |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by badmusace(m): 6:20pm On Nov 07, 2013 |
timpaker: Lmao! U wey sabi all those complex poetic forms...I salute oh Actually, the poem was inspired by an itty bitty part of a novel I once read by Khaled Housseni 'And The Mountains Echoed'! Author of 'Kite Runner' |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 10:36pm On Nov 07, 2013 |
badmusace: are you planning on waking the dark side again?  |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by badmusace(m): 10:15pm On Nov 30, 2013 |
princesa: I can't too much light here |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 10:31pm On Nov 30, 2013 |
badmusace: oh i see, no streak of anger in you, only love and flowery things? tis okay, some days are like that......  |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by badmusace(m): 10:39pm On Nov 30, 2013 |
princesa: Yes o unicorns gently galloping with a backdrop of colourful rainbows! |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 10:56pm On Nov 30, 2013 |
badmusace:...and a blossoming garden of red and white roses. Beautiful |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by badmusace(m): 12:58pm On Dec 01, 2013 |
princesa: Haha! U gerrit! |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by teddyskillz: 12:14pm On Dec 13, 2013 |
You guys should check out http://tdysword. for more poems |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by ayd91(m): 11:08am On Dec 18, 2013 |
Calling on all poets to join us in celebrating Christmas by creating a collection of Christmas poems. Submitt your works here, help spread the word. https://www.nairaland.com/1560012/red-poetry-touch-christmas |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by timpaker(m): 2:01am On Dec 25, 2013 |
[b]Poetry form: Ottava Rima The ottava rima stanza in English consists of eight iambic lines, usually iambic pentameters. Each stanza consists of three alternate rhymes and one double rhyme, following the a-b-a-b-a-b-c-c pattern. Go, a little more, a little bit more.. Its a snake-like bend just take the chance Damn who's coming; swerve, veer & ignore The curse after - time may need to enhance its tiny legs like one healed off by fatigued sore... Few boring blink beams its last before trance Then came a maddening & thunderous honk Bang!!! Both tires screeched to a metal junk From one silent fuss emerged huge cloud of smoke And the scent of regret pollute the air Choking everyone even the bystanders who came to poke When there was truly a smoke with fire there Extinguishers frantically hissed at trapped folks As they jostle for survival there and here A four year old soaked in sweats of blood Crawled out crying severely burnt by hot rod Her mum stolled out unharmed but not dad The smell and gore of roasted meat and a helpless cry Troubled the hapless kerosine-crowd- too bad Dead souls liters the sunny but smoky sky Confused; and empty air cannisters of sad Bystanders lays on the road with teary eyes The other bus was engulfed with rampaging hell The yells, torments and pain all desist to tell[/b] Dedicated to the victim of road accident at Enugu/Okigwe, 23rd Dec. 2013 04:23pm 1 Like |
| Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Kaycee7(m): 11:47am On Dec 25, 2013 |
We wish you a Merry Christmas, We wish you a Merry Christmas, We wish you a Merry Christmas, And a Happy New Year. 1 Like |
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