it's a Gud literary act and I thank God it made frontpage.....
as for me God sees all our tots n watches us oh.....

nice one damex... fortunately all these rapture ish cant be true, because if it is really true... trust me, no one will be raptured. the mind is like a bag, everyone carries his and only him knows what inside. evil is necessary for survival and that why we have our conscience which serve as a check to extent of evil one can commit just to survive.

frank3.16:
nice one damex... fortunately all these rapture ish cant be true, because if it is really true... trust me, no one will be raptured. the mind is like a bag, everyone carries his and only him knows what inside. evil is necessary for survival and that why we have our conscience which serve as a check to extent of evil one can commit just to survive.

Sorry, are you really a christian?

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Nice story.


What I love most about it is, it didn't end the way I thought it would (Nollywood), you put in a different twist that I've never heard of b4.

I feel the story wasn't captivating at the point the last elder(according to hierarchy) was telling his story.

I think you should also make it into a Novel, going into details of how each men including Bola existed outside and inside the church, you could portray Taiwo as making the loudest noise during church service and another elder attacking church members based on the way the dress or other trival matters.

My personal opinion, I b science student so my advice isn't a professional one. Sorry!

Keep it up

Wonderful! I enjoyed the originality of the story. Imagine that happening in real life....that awkward moment when you realised you've spilled your guts for nothing! Lovely piece!

Some improvement is still needed in your grammar and sentence structure but apart from that you did great damex!

www.nairaland.com/1542684/seen-wifes-son. Please check my work and leave a comment about your thought

May christ give us d grace 2 make it.AMEN

Lol! Had to relay this story to my room mates... Keep it up... I pray I don't miss the rapture ooo.............

Ollyfad: Y d pastor no talk im own na,nyc story.go nd cntinue d link o

hahahahaha na d pastor own 4 sweet pass hahahaha

May God grant us d grace 2 live a rapturable lyf. Amen

Fabulous!!! May God help me (plus OTHERS) 2 make Heaven in Jesus Name, Amen! *Meanwhile,I suspect dey must hav been connivance btwn Elder Bola& d Pst.*

Praise da living Jesus!!! we made it to the front page!!! Damex you will celebrate this one with me o...cow slaughtering tinx.

[color=#000099][/color] I pray to God that my family members and i make HEAVEN IN JESUS NAME

This is probably very simple but something has been perplexing to me.

The OP's moniker shows nobody but when he's requoted, the name changes to diff other names. What's d trick Why can't I click on the nobody's moniker to see other stories

hottadiva:
This is probably very simple but something has been perplexing to me.

The OP's moniker shows nobody but when he's requoted, the name changes to diff other names. What's d trick Why can't I click on the nobody's moniker to see other stories

The account has been deactivated that's why you couldn't click on the moniker.

Seunvense:
The account has been deactivated that's why you couldn't click on the moniker.

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Great!!Thanks a lot @Seunvense

hottadiva:
. Great!!Thanks a lot @Seunvense

U welcum sis