welcome to the world of poetry.Here,we will be discussing about poems and its uniqueness to our society.
write and show your innermost creativity, outmost skills and dexterity for us to praise,criticise and translate.

Hmmm! spending its usefulness,
wailing up and down like a hungry tree,
blowing breeze to thy who she loves.
The smell of it tempting,
custody of it a thunderstorm.
she is boas,dancing to the rhythemic muzic of her love ones,
"where is she?" the poor will ask,
struggling, huzzling and striving to have her.
Raindrops flowing from the innocent eyes,with the stream,no difference.
Them,even though they lost their shoes,will never giveup to have her.

A place to claim, no stress.
A class to be,no wreck.
A shelter to have,no pay.

home,on mind.
If thee rejected above,returns.
If thee cried above,on rescue.

Talent and productivity, home needs.
building so still and tall,promote unity.
Home it is,home to be.

Just like a floor
I am trampled upon
Just like an option
I was ignored
I garnered my bane
I remembered every misery
I know what they don’t
They saw the debris of a tumbled building
I saw a weak part that caused it
They saw a burning building
I saw the small fire that caused it
even a small lighter can burn a bridge
Even a small stone can fall a building.

Your writeup is good,your use of words is simple.great work

Oga mi you are Excellent. I hail your pen.

Hahahahaha so dis thread has resurrected. I remember those days I use to write primary school poems...but now Noble is a big boy.

@Taiwo notin do u

NARRATIVE POEM

Title: You are my Rose

style: blank verse with simple language .

Stanzas: Three quatrain and Two tercet.



The world gave birth to beautiful roses
Those, with different mission
I rang around the garden
Aw! was hard to have one.

The sun so bright
That blooded me
Never relent even I lost my shoes.

I was in thought, that rip my heart
Then, I realized there was raindrops
Flowing through my eyes.

With the coat of courage
I walk along the desert
sail through the ocean
searching for my rose.

Fortunately, I found her
As beautiful as an angel
As gentle as a dove
As kind as a mother.

You are my Rose


Who can translate above poem?

a, The theme

b, Figure of speech

c Appreciation (each stanzas).


It will be fun friends.....