kayemjay:

Checked your thread out. Very good job I must say. I am impressed. Saw some stuff you probably borrowed from me but it is fine. Work on your narratives, and try and be a little bit more real to life. One very important secret: Don't rush your narratives nor dwell so much on them. It has to be perfect. Lemme spoil your mood small: I rushed through your 4 pages in about 5 minutes. I could not really read the narratives but went straight to the dialogue. Work on that.

Great Dialogue though, very good dialogue. Plus, I really could not understand the plot of your story sha o. Maybe with time.

You have got some way to go, but it is not impossible to bench me. Please try and stun me. Well done.

Smiles, borrowed? Knocks myself if I did... Got a whole lotta experience with lines from great writers like your very own best, John G, to borrow from yours... I love your way of writing but to be candid, you write to impress not to improve... You kinda tell more rather than show in your writing, which is kinda weak to me for someone reading from Grisham.

My Plot, you will understand if you read my narratives well... My Dialogues, I watch how I use them. I use them when necessary...

I'm a big fan of you and also J. Grisham...

One Love Boss...

KingzPen:

I love your way of writing but to be candid, you write to impress not to improve... You kinda tell more rather than show in your writing, which is kinda weak to me for someone reading from Grisham.

One Love Boss...

Lol. Nice combo jab there. No need to banter words bro. Do finish your story and then, we can compare notes. And while you are it, could you take a little time from your very busy schedule and scrutinize AEWE and TCA? See if there were any improvements. Thanks for following though. Really appreciate it.

kayemjay:

Everyone is unique. I absolutely appreciate all the writers here. As a general rule, I DON'T READ any writer's work on NL Literature section because I do not want to be influenced by their content. As in, so that what I read doesn't make up what I write. But I know I should begin reading some. I love flow1759's work. Also Innosenduatall and DrNuell. Also read Onihaxy's stories. I know they are sexuality stories. I will try and read up. Asides from frank3:16, I am looking for someone to challenge me.

My favorite writer is the legend, pdude.

We are just two in my family. Me and my lil sister. She is 23.

My own question is........................................................ Awayu 2dae?

Toeyean1507: My own question is........................................................ Awayu 2dae?

Lol. My own answer is, I am fine and preparing to type tonight's updates.

kayemjay:

Lols. She's chosen to remain anonymous o, despite all my pleas to her. Will give you a clue though. She's on my NL profile page.

Oya start investigating. Maybe you should beg ShadowCorp to release James for you, so he can help. Lol.

after running through your profile's algorithm on my NotePadX and spying on all related documents,I have come to conclude and find out that she is no one but....




















Lucioustrish ,Mr Kevin John

I go good to act James part

SMALLPENIS:
after running through your profile's algorithm on my NotePadX and spying on all related documents,I have come to conclude and find out that she is no one but....
Lucioustrish ,Mr Kevin John
I go good to act James part

Lol. You try. Try harder.

Please guys, dont chew me raw.

My Boss has just dumped huge work on my table. Can I update tomorrow please?

Thank you.

kayemjay: Please guys, dont chew me raw.

My Boss has just dumped huge work on my table. Can I update tomorrow please?

Thank you.

Sure you can buh plz make it veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery lengthy as usual 2mao.

kayemjay:

Lol. My own answer is, I am fine and preparing to type tonight's updates.

. Yippeeeeeeeeee. *measuring cups of beans for cooking. *going to buy dat 'inspiration' take mix am. Nor blame me o. I'm only preparing maself for 'parathon' reading

kayemjay:

#1 Any color goes. I am weird like that. But I am more taken by feminine colors. My room is all pink, bedsheet, curtains etc. My living room is horseblood, etc.

#2 I am a junk person. I eat 'swallow' only if I have no choice. I prefer rice any time any day. But whenever I am hungry, I open my fridge and do kellogs. I am a fantastic cook by the way. Akwa Ibom blood.

#3 I have read A LOT of books. I mean A LOT. And I read anything readable, asides politics sha. I see a book, I pick it up, even children books. I owe it to my dad. I started reading James Hadely Chase from when i was 7. He would give it to me, once he was done and I would finish it. We had an intimidating library back then. Books from the ground to the ceiling. My dad was the Chief Accountant of a very popular insurance coy. So he read a lot.

#4 No competition about this. It is JOHN GRISHAM. I looove him. I have read Stephen King, Sydney Sheldon, John Sandford (prey series), Tom Clancy, and a few others but I find myself going back to Grisham. I have 10 of his books and hoping to collect more. I am currently re-reading The Firm.

#5 I dare say i speak AND WRITE yoruba almost better than I do english.

#6 When I become rich and God blesses me, I hope I can make it easier for writers to be acknowledged in Nigeria. Remember that way back it used to be parents pushING their children into football. Then later down the years, they began encouraging their children to go into music. This is because they saw how lucrative these ventures were. I would try and make sure that writing becomes so lucrative that parents begin pushing their children into.

#7 I plan to write another story after TCA. However, I am thinking of a Serial Killer thing and a detective trying to track him down. But, I want to finish my thread on sexuality section first. Maybe sometime in December or in the new year. Will keep you guys posted.

Love this. U are cool.
Am i right on this.
Kayemjay - Kayode Emmanuel Jaiye
Dat is to say........ u knw wat i mean. lol

sorry kay....wen did u start school(uni) and when did u graduate

Mhen,Kay z jst damn cool...I wantu b like u whn I grow up o

Nice write up bro ------ but i dey wait for your update o --- i nor dey comment but na because say you never update makes me comment o

Una well done o

God will make you bigger. Can't wait to see you resurrect sexuality again

Ehn ehn, stumbled on this 2days ago, nw @ dis juncture.... Make I ask my own question sha - When u wan marry mak we com chop rice?

SPSpecial:

Love this. U are cool.
Am i right on this.
Kayemjay - Kayode Emmanuel Jaiye
Dat is to say........ u knw wat i mean. lol

Naaah. Kayemjay = KAY-EM-JAY = K-M-J = Kevin - Monday -John

Broz kayemjay we be broz o nto akwa ibom.i rily enjoy ur story .more grease to ur **** .ma question is
1.mention the 1st indegenous man to go to school in 9ja?50marks
2.how many mosquitoe is in ur area?25marks
3.wat r d namez of d 2 people dat shakes hand wen u on a nokia phone?25marks

Bluestarry: Broz kayemjay we be broz o nto akwa ibom.i rily enjoy ur story .more grease to ur **** .ma question is
1.mention the 1st indegenous man to go to school in 9ja?50marks
2.how many mosquitoe is in ur area?25marks
3.wat r d namez of d 2 people dat shakes hand wen u on a nokia phone?25marks

What sort of question is this.

drsolob2:
What sort of question is this.

na question and answa question

Bluestarry: na question and answa question

Lwkmdfh*.... Som peeps can ask questn sha! Ce as I dey go via odas comments yle forgettn to ask mah own questn!! Dats by d way sha! @kay, thx for representin wia ah cm from!

Skimpledawg:
Lwkmdfh*.... Som peeps can ask questn sha! Ce as I dey go via odas comments yle forgettn to ask mah own questn!! Dats by d way sha! @kay, thx for representin wia ah cm from!

broz abeg blackberry d ping?coz ma bb na blackberry and na microsoft

Bluestarry: broz abeg blackberry d ping?coz ma bb na blackberry and na microsoft

Story for the witches.... na Desktop I use dey ping oo bros

Kay, dont tell me you want to use a whole year to write TCA. u never complete d work wey ur oga gave you?

Which kind thing be this nah - abeg if you wan close this post abeg do jare - since last year you never finish this story - na so so Nairaland ladies you dey carry up and down for VI

.........??

Happy to be at this juncture..... i like ur work

MrNiceGuy5: Which kind thing be this nah - abeg if you wan close this post abeg do jare - since last year you never finish this story - na so so Nairaland ladies you dey carry up and down for VI

You know that the guy has a life sha. So keep that in mind.

MrNiceGuy5: Which kind thing be this nah - abeg if you wan close this post abeg do jare - since last year you never finish this story - na so so Nairaland ladies you dey carry up and down for VI

Bros na so e pain you reach?! Wait sef, which one dey pain u?! d update abi d so so nairaland babes wey im dey cruise with?? Tell us ooohh!

Chai! Na this kind comment ah suppose reply say "how e take affect the price of garri 4 market?!" btw ur username suppose be MR HARSH GUY1 no be Mr nice guy 5

Dont forget kayemjay is also a worker... Dis guy is trying lets wait and see why he has not been updating before u nail him.....still i follow

Lollz: Bros na so e pain you reach?! Wait sef, which one dey pain u?! d update abi d so so nairaland babes wey im dey cruise with?? Tell us ooohh!

Chai! Na this kind comment ah suppose reply say "how e take affect the price of garri 4 market?!" btw ur username suppose be MR HARSH GUY1 no be Mr nice guy 5

E nor concern me , anything wey you talk na you get your mouth . We read a lot of stories here on nairaland and they don't delay like this . KEJ own too much . As e dey carry woman up and down dey pain me join .