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| Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 10:00am On Dec 16, 2013 |
Recently I tried to make a story on my adventures in the West of Africa but I did terribly bad at that mainly because of my extremely busy schedule. That piece is still unfinished. For a while now I've been devouring the awesome works of Nairaland's fiction experts and this got me thinking that it wouldn't be a bad idea if I reciprocated. I'm an amateur so please as you read through your criticisms would go a long way in helping me perfect this skill. Having said all these, permit me, please, to pick up my pen as I kick off.... Nice reading... |
| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 10:04am On Dec 16, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 10:25am On Dec 16, 2013 |
Please how do I modify my topic? I just noticed a typo in the ''calls''... |
| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 4:07pm On Dec 16, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 4:24pm On Dec 16, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 4:36pm On Dec 16, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 4:43pm On Dec 16, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 6:33pm On Dec 16, 2013 |
So readers, how is it going? Your comments on the story please as this will encourage me to continue... Merci  |
| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 9:26am On Dec 18, 2013 |
Oops... No comments? Ok.. I'm continuing anyway.. |
| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 9:36am On Dec 18, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 9:52am On Dec 18, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 12:33pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 12:39pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 12:44pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 12:49pm On Dec 21, 2013 |
Hello readers (if there are any), Your comments would really be of help to me you know... Why do I have 63 views (still counting) and no comment? E no good ooo.../lolz/ Make una try na... Point at the errors/lapses, comment on the story line/arrangement, etc.. I hope to see your comments when I come back to continue in the evening... |
| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by bigoduni: 2:31pm On Dec 24, 2013 |
i started reading this today, bros TONYE001 weldone oo 1 Like |
| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 2:47pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 2:48pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
bigoduni: i started reading this today, Thanks for your comment... Read on please and hesitate not to correct me in my flaws.../my humble request/.. Seasons greetings... |
| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 3:13pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 10:56pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by Lucentbeauty(f): 11:15am On Dec 29, 2013 |
I dont know what to say lol,marvelous,unbelievable,wow . Never thought of how a mad man thinks,well in his case he wasn't really mad. You describe things with a finesse that leaves me guessing to the end. I laughed when I heard they needed a virgin to appease the gods,I was like oya all virgins into the forest to hide. More ink to you pen,more MB to your fone/device,more wisdom and knowledge from God. Am ready and prepared to hear more from the land in the North where the skies are black and the seas dry-The Land of Ama. Following... |
| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 9:42am On Dec 30, 2013 |
Lucentbeauty: I dont know what to say lol,marvelous,unbelievable,wow Big thanks to you for your nice comments... Trust me, a lot did go down up there at Ama...and beyond... I'm updating immediately.. |
| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 9:48am On Dec 30, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 10:13am On Dec 30, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by Lucentbeauty(f): 3:10pm On Dec 30, 2013 |
You study what? |
| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 6:38pm On Dec 31, 2013 |
Lucentbeauty: You study what? I'm a Human Physiologist... Why?... |
| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 7:02pm On Dec 31, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 7:09pm On Dec 31, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 7:23pm On Dec 31, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by TONYE001(m): 7:30pm On Dec 31, 2013 |
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| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by Lucentbeauty(f): 5:32pm On Jan 02, 2014 |
TONYE001: Curious,nice update.....opens dictionary...there are some words here I need to comprehend... |
| Re: Who Calls The Rains? by alphalpha(m): 1:42pm On Aug 07, 2014 |
abeg complete the story |
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