JIGSAWKILLAH VS ICEKIDD

Voting Criteria :

Opener - 1 point

Rhymes - 2 points

Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points

Punchlines - 3 points

Personals - 2 points

Flow - 1 point

Wordplays - 2 points

Closer - 1 point

Rules

- 20 lines.

- Deadline is 4pm, Saturday 6 September 2014.

- Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- A no show attracts a ban.

- No unnecessary comments

- No smearing comments about any bar OR biting accusations without proof.

- Whatever you feel is wrong with a bar or verse - please put it in your vote. Vote and state what you found wrong.

- If there's anything you need to say in defence of your verse please save them for after voting's over.

- NO argument with established vets OR voters.

- Battlers should not interject between votes and voters should just vote and leave it like that.

- Only vets and regular section posters are allowed to vote.

Goodluck!!!

Hehe. Checks

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Im gone maim this aasshole/ call me a bad chef
when i dish him pain and ago/ny Signing up for a
tourney that promises to bring heat, shows that
Ice's brain is shallow/

every of my punch would wreck you/ put cyanic
acid in a syringe and have a nurse inject you/ If he
say he dealt with Saw, its in his dads firewood
factory, that's why they named him Locksley, cos
all he does is share wood/

Your blinder than a night driver without head
lamps/ in a dark street, your more useless than a
man without legs, hands/ Your head is too flat, too
much head pans/ i heard that's the best you ever
had, it was even your dead dad's/

We've seen how this male ducks, he's Drake im
Common/ he's an ABA made, he's fake and not
tough/ he's one I'd brake and run on/ Take his
sister to her dad's room, and on her face I cum on/

As soon as I left, his mom rushed in/ took some
cum from it/ inserted it in her ppuss, hoping to get
a son from it/ Dreaming of a win against Jigs?
Fool come off it!/ you who waylaid hens, and tell
your niggas you've ffucked a chick!/

You're destined for coffin/ when i let slugs fly/ me
and the girl of your dream are having sex all night/
Sorry i damaged your ego/ and ravaged your
people/ but the truth is, you so filled with wastes
than garbage disposal/

NL gone witness a dancing head in the gallows/ i
dropped lead in his ankles/ His shadow ran away
from him! I'mma Brock, while you is the effing
fandango/

He's stuck in this puzzle/ failures such as him
never gets a normal burial, so he gets tucked in a
burrow/ His firewood never bring sales cos he's a
castaway, Robinson Crusoe/

Im Tyson is this bout/ this Samuel Peter is fighting
with his mouth/ call me Vitali Klitchsko, one strike
and he is out/

Lastly fool/ you could bag me too/ cos 2 wack gees
could/ but yous a coward, a nigga with no attitude/
You ain't worthy of living, so i cut off your arms
and tongue, and chucked you in the same place the
coffin of your daddy stood/

Jig's mom gets d1ck from young dudes, she's a b1tch MILF,/
So i'm cutting of her bre@sts, so jig can cry over spilled milk/
This nigga've been callin me out/
Its a dream come true for the bitch, u'l be crawling after the bout/
cos i'll let my guns speak. Comin with ranting 9's/the gay/ wouldn't escape when they nag/
but if he does i've got niggas planting mines/
watch 'ice Kid'nap his a$$, and make him history/
help him be free and put an end to his misery/
He couldn't 'bear' the 'pain' if his name is T-grizzly/
the 'coward' came to the battle wit 'bravery'/
but his lines are full of fakery/
he's broke, he couldn't get 'dough' if he worked in a bakery/
I'll drop your dead body like a louzy under taker/
i murder fakers/
and trouble makers/
Feed you the vultures, they eat you like buttered muffins/
Cos i don't play boy. I hate ragamuffins/
guykhena a stretcher/ whooped him, he'll neva win in this sector/
so if i hear that jig's got class, then i concore he's having a lecture/
cos i'm sure i'll be winning/
by the time 'elvis has left the building'.
AndWeOut

Mikuz. I and JigsawKillah has dropped

Una no wan vote?
ELYMAXiimus
Ojoawo
Iamaromolaeran
YoungDaNaval
007bruce
Mikuz
e.t.c

am not impressed with this battle and its paining me i aint in this tourney ...anyway


opener/ both were weak but icekidd edged ...icekidd
rhymes/ tie
similes/metas.....jigsaw
flow...jigsaw
punchlines... jigsaw
personals...none
wordplay/pun....jigsaw ..i saw the sherwood locksley thing though it was weak but at least you did and icekidd didnt
closer..i preferred jigsaw

mvgt jigsaw...



please jigsaw i dont understand this ...Im gone maim this aasshole/ call me a bad chef
when i dish him pain and ago/ i dish him pain and ago??

man thats incorrect grammatically .....if you wanna go far in this tourney avoid errors like that...

goodluck

Did Kid not write the full amount of lines?. . . cos his verse way shorter.

Jigsaw throwing jabs but it's enough to win thís cos the flow is sweet whilst it looks like Ice did not write enough lines.

MVGT: JIG

More votes please :


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Please vote on this.
Thank you!

Smh

Mvgt - Jig

Thanks voters : JigsawKillah wins this and qualifies for the second stage.