She was every man’s dream,a sultry nightmare
that you knew the very moment you met her
would never come true. I saw her that beautiful
sunday morning in church,as she walked in with
her three sisters,she stood out,shone infact. My
eyes traced every step as she stealthily searched
for a pew to sit. I could not take my eyes off
her,not even for a second for fear that she’d
dissapear from me forever,leaving me
catatonic,wondering if i had really seen her or
she was just a figment of my imagination.
During offering i waited till i saw her stand up
before i stood up myself to head to the altar,our
eyes met,it must have been for a second or less
before i quickly averted my eyes so she would’nt
think of me as rude for staring,i was convinced
she caught my stare,her dark scintillating eyes
bore into my soul,leaving me bare and aloof,not
an inkling of idea about what had just
happened,it felt like an hour or more,just the
two of us,standing there staring at each
other,searching for the faintest hint of
familiarity. I made way for my seat in a gawky
manner,mixed emotions trailing my stride. I tried
vehemently to replay it in my head,’did she
really notice me’?,’or have i just embarassed
myself’?,’could it be that i was imagining
things’?. I quickly shrugged off the negative
ideas forming in my head,the edges of my lips
feigning a smile.
Throughout the mass i could not stop thinking of
her,how perfect she was,her slim but curvy in
the right places body,clear chocolate skin,oval
beautiful face with succulent inviting lips,she
was an embodiment of the true african woman.
The priests’ voice thundered off on my deaf
ears,her angelic voice would be the only one fit
for them,i thought with mischief. I was
dazed,smitten with love at first sight,her aura
seemed to envelope the church,it resonated on
everything i saw from then on, the opaque
stained glass that adorned the church windows
caught my eyes,oh how beautiful it seemed,why
had i not noticed it before,the straight lined
rays of sun that were shooting through the
ventilation holes ,the engraved writings in italics
on the wall,the very high ceiling,and the
emotional statue of christ nailed to the cross
with blood seeping from his hands and sides all
seemed out of this world to me that very
moment. Even the slow whirling of the tall
ceiling fans amazed me. My eyes seemed misty,a
tiny tear escaped the corner of my right eye,i
quickly searched for my handkerchief and gently
wiped the lone tear off taking care not to draw
any attention,the woman sitting beside me gave
me a reproachful stare,i was looking straight
ahead pretending not to notice that she was
looking at me.
After what seemed like an eternity the mass
ended,i joined the first set of congregation to
troupe out,i stood between the giant pillars and
waited for the other members to come out,my
eyes sharp and bulging so as not to miss her
when she came out. I was almost giving
up,frustrated that maybe i had somehow missed
her when i saw her again,she was smiling,talking
with another girl that i recognized was her
sister. Can i ever be able to convey in words
what came over me that moment,the sight of her
brought forth an immense feeling of fear and
apprehension,time stopped,my heart beat a
million times in my head as blood rushed to my
face turning me red,every crevice of my being
tainted with unrivalled affection for this
stranger,who was killing me so fast without
knowing it. I opened my mouth to say something
but my tongue went dry and the words that
formed in my head spiralled into different
directions like shattered glass. A mad man’s
thoughts would have been more coherent that
very moment,i could not keep my mind in one
place,i tried unsuccessfully to compose myself…

MizMyColi: Is it just me?
or is anyone else tired of very Long and INCOMPLETE Posts?

Oh!, maybe he's copying and pasting typing the second one.

*sigh*...Is this guy related to Andyblaze?

Oh well, i'll like to see how this ends...

MizMyColi: Is it just me?
or is anyone else tired of very Long and INCOMPLETE Posts?

Oh!, maybe he's copying and pasting typing the second one.

I didnt wana respond,but i feel compelled to,quite frankly u are a M0ron,creative writing n intelligent discussions are dyin in dis country cuz of pple lyk u,go n play wit ur kind abeg,build a sandcastle or sumtin,just dnt cum bk here.

fabiano09:

I didnt wana respond,but i feel compelled to,quite frankly u are a M0ron,creative writing n intelligent discussions are dyin in dis country cuz of pple lyk u,go n play wit ur kind abeg,build a sandcastle or sumtin,just dnt cum bk here.

Ignore this guy completely@MizMyColi

Okay Sir.
My self control tank is filled above average.

Albeit, It'll be in-order if someone reminds him that a creative writer, who seeks to engender meaningful discussions among intellectuals of varying personality types, based on the topic of his writ knows how to cut out un-necessary ruminations and fantasizing, in addition to words that depict him as highfalutin and garrulous

OP, ...............

Well,
Let me accord Tallesty the respect.

Tallesty1: Ignore this guy completely@MizMyColi

MizMyColi: Okay Sir.
My self control tank is filled above average.

Albeit, It'll be in-order if someone reminds him that a creative writer, who seeks to engender meaningful discussions among intellectuals of varying personality types, based on the topic of his writ knows how to cut out un-necessary ruminations and fantasizing, in addition to words that depict him as highfalutin and garrulous

OP, ...............

Well,
Let me accord Tallesty the respect.

hmmmm, what can I say?

@Op, wake up, its just a dream....
*hands him a glass of water *

MizMyColi: Okay Sir.
My self control tank is filled above average.

Albeit, It'll be in-order if someone reminds him that a creative writer, who seeks to engender meaningful discussions among intellectuals of varying personality types, based on the topic of his writ knows how to cut out un-necessary ruminations and fantasizing, in addition to words that depict him as highfalutin and garrulous

OP, ...............

Well,
Let me accord Tallesty the respect.

...lol...You are one in a million.....

MizMyColi: Okay Sir.
My self control tank is filled above average.

Albeit, It'll be in-order if someone reminds him that a creative writer, who seeks to engender meaningful discussions among intellectuals of varying personality types, based on the topic of his writ knows how to cut out un-necessary ruminations and fantasizing, in addition to words that depict him as highfalutin and garrulous

OP, ...............

Well,
Let me accord Tallesty the respect.

My dear stop tryin to impress me,its embarrassing,what u wrote,cant comprehend it,am nt of a fan of obahiagbon,speak plain english. The story u are gushing abt hapnd to me sum time ago,i just felt lyk writing abt it to let go of her or see if sum oda pple hv xperienced sumtin similar. So stop analysing n checkin for errors,mrs #itooknow.

Someone should help me with summary please

Houseofglam7: @Op, wake up, its just a dream....
*hands him a glass of water *

Nah,true story,i neva saw her again,buh her face still tugs at my soul,it lingers foreva.

cheryl1: Someone should help me with summary please

Read it dummy! i promise u'l enjoy it.

fabiano09:

Read it dummy! i promise u'l enjoy it.

Its not by force to read your BORING story
And please dont call me dummy again

MizMyColi: Okay Sir.
My self control tank is filled above average.

Albeit, It'll be in-order if someone reminds him that a creative writer, who seeks to engender meaningful discussions among intellectuals of varying personality types, based on the topic of his writ knows how to cut out un-necessary ruminations and fantasizing, in addition to words that depict him as highfalutin and garrulous

OP, ...............

Well,
Let me accord Tallesty the respect.

choi dis grammatical eluelu is highly gbragbacious

fabiano09:

Nah,true story,i neva saw her again,buh her face still tugs at my soul,it lingers foreva.

Na mammy water I swear!

Oya! wear cloth make we go church.
Deliverance tins.

cheryl1:
Its not by force to read your BORING story
And please dont call me dummy again

hehehe ugly duckling

MizMyColi: LoL Hun.
Goodevening.

...Good evening, ma'am...how is every every??..

Houseofglam7:

Na mammy water I swear!

Oya! wear cloth make we go church.
Deliverance tins.

lolz i lyk am lyk dt,no deliverance in my church o,na catholic

Chai chai chai... I'll like to see how this gonna end! Hahahaha

MizMyColi: LoL Hun.
Goodevening.

for ua mind now u de claim kinko dey claim van damm for gramma
Dos days wen ma sista dey agidingbi grammar skul u no fit try me
Btw I checked dos ua grammatical eluelu in dictionary BELIEVE U ME I no see am
Which dictionary u de use

temigracie: ...lol...You are one in a million.....

You are everywhere just like MTN

chimerase2: choi dis grammatical eluelu is highly gbragbacious

Easy bro

lolz....here goes another poet... good work ....i think you will be appreciated more in the poetry section...do they have those here

fabiano09:

hehehe ugly duckling

Ok