okada stop na here...
wooo!!! Guess am late, ma car broke dwn on d way *winks*
walks into the thread and hails evry1,..double twale 4 anoda boss here @D9ty7

cheryluv wat a nice story u got here mehn am already in love wit d story...*mor grease 2 ur elbow ma'am

#following

9ce one,still following ...

Cheryluv pls update, welldone once again following u already like twitter. Love in d air!!!

Hehehe...rili love ur last update.

I‘ll kom bk when d story is hot

Don't leave your thread, make it lively. Always be active even when you don't update, let pple know the thread is still very much alive.
You know what I mean right?
see you later at the top.

D9ty7: Don't leave your thread, make it lively. Always be active even when you don't update, let pple know the thread is still very much alive.
You know what I mean right?
see you later at the top.

mehn lyk dix guy...u dy give hope 2 dix thread

Tarh! You no do well lyk Diego Costa did today o. Why I no dey see you for my thread again?

Onemansquad:
mehn lyk dix guy...u dy give hope 2 dix thread

I heard u've bought a brand new Chrysler300 is that true? Why e dey breakdown.

Onemansquad: okada stop na here...
wooo!!! Guess am late, ma car broke dwn on d way *winks*
walks into the thread and hails evry1,..double twale 4 anoda boss here @D9ty7

cheryluv wat a nice story u got here mehn am already in love wit d story...*mor grease 2 ur elbow ma'am

#following

Hope its not what am thinking. Anyways welcome here, Cheryluv dey dish it as e dey hot.

D9ty7: Tarh! You no do well lyk Diego Costa did today o. Why I no dey see you for my thread again?

no b so na bros ah jst dy obsav sumtinx 1st ...bt ah miss dat ur story ooTHE UNDERCOVER AGENT]

nice story, subscribing.....I love the way you illustrate the dialogues.

Emzypaz literally dragged me here....

I can sight my bosses in the house, D9ty7 et al , I pay obeisance

Well done ma'am Cheryluv...you've got a nice concept.... Just some corrections though....
Can I proceed? **whispers "Yes"**
Don't worry, they won't make you cry

Please, personal pronoun, I , is always written in uppercase, as in, "I" anytime, any where...

I also noticed some shortened words like "msg" for message, I don't think it's right for a write-up, except, of course when you're writing out a chat conversation...

What else??

It haf finish jare...for now..

I must commend your use of punctuation marks, brilliant ma'am!!
God bless.
Finally, is this a true life story or fictional? You didn't specify...

I hail!
[quote
author=dammygoody]Emzypaz literally dragged me here....

I can sight my bosses in the house, D9ty7 et al , I pay obeisance

Well done ma'am Cheryluv...you've got a nice concept.... Just some
corrections though....
Can I proceed? **whispers "Yes"**
Don't worry, they won't make you cry

Please, personal pronoun, I , is always written in uppercase, as
in, "I" anytime, any where...

I also noticed some shortened words like "msg" for message, I don't
think it's right for a write-up, except, of course when you're writing
out a chat conversation...

What else??

It haf finish jare...for now..

I must commend your use of punctuation marks, brilliant ma'am!!
God bless.
Finally, is this a true life story or fictional? You didn't
specify...[/quote]
Let me come to her aid, from the title I think its a true life story but am not cheryluv. Let her come and defend herself.
I rest my case!

D9ty7: I heard u've bought a brand new Chrysler300 is that true? Why e dey breakdown.

Hope its not what am thinking. Anyways welcome here, Cheryluv dey dish it as e dey hot.

bros y u dy tok lyk dix na ..u wnt spoil shw *winkx*

D9ty7: I hail!

Let me come to her aid, from the title I think its a true life story but am not cheryluv. Let her come and defend herself.
I rest my case!

Alright!

D9ty7: I hail!

Let me come to her aid, from the title I think its a true life story but am not cheryluv. Let her come and defend herself.
I rest my case!

lol...actually itz fictious

dammygoody: Emzypaz literally dragged me here....

I can sight my bosses in the house, D9ty7 et al , I pay obeisance

Well done ma'am Cheryluv...you've got a nice concept.... Just some corrections though....
Can I proceed? **whispers "Yes"**
Don't worry, they won't make you cry

Please, personal pronoun, I , is always written in uppercase, as in, "I" anytime, any where...

I also noticed some shortened words like "msg" for message, I don't think it's right for a write-up, except, of course when you're writing out a chat conversation...

What else??

It haf finish jare...for now..

I must commend your use of punctuation marks, brilliant ma'am!!
God bless.
Finally, is this a true life story or fictional? You didn't specify...

tnx 4 d corrections..i ll tk note of dat

Onemansquad: okada stop na here...
wooo!!! Guess am late, ma car broke dwn on d way *winks*
walks into the thread and hails evry1,..double twale 4 anoda boss here @D9ty7
cheryluv wat a nice story u got here mehn am already in love wit d story...*mor grease 2 ur elbow ma'am

welcome squad...a seat was reserved 4 u

I hope you've come with many updates....

cheryluv: welcome squad...a seat was reserved 4 u

Woo tnx ...let me sit close 2 da boss @d9ty7

Bae i dey follow your bumper to bumper , seems you are from Uyo .me 2 sha

cheryluv: tnx 4 d corrections..i ll tk note of dat

You're welcome ma'am

cheryluv: lol...actually itz fictious

I though as much
Please, kindly state it on your introductory post...it isn't compulsory though....

I laughed at them and sat down on the seat.
"You like him, abi?" Sandy asked.
"Like who? Girl, no start o! He's just a friend," I replied.
"I hear. Friend with extra benefits," Esther added, giggling.
"Daisy, if you like Charles, I suggest you let this relationship thrive harder. He has never dated a girl before in this school, although he's every girl's dream. I wont lie..I even had a crush on him once. He wont break your heart," Sandy said, sounding like a marriage counsellor.
"Whatever!" I said and ended the discussion. Girls can be really jealous of each other. I liked-liked Charles ...and I didnt want any thing to come between us. I even joined the debate and press clubs so as to spend enough time with him after school during club meetings.
After school, Sarah was already waiting for me outside my class.
"Daisy? Your sis is outside," a boy at the backseat yelled across to me. I went outside.
"School's over, arent you coming home?" she asked.
"Oh God! Sarah, the debate club has a meeting today. I cant follow you home," I said.
"Girl, I dont want Mummy's trouble when I get back home abeg. Just do and let's go," she said.
"Sorry. I am not coming with you. See you at home!" I said and walked back to my class. After the club meeting, Charles walked me home. We lived in an estate. Keke napeps were not allowed inside the estate for security reasons, only taxis. Charles lived in the same estate at F-line, while I and my family stayed at D-line. He paid for the taxi and walked me to my house.
"What did your sister come to tell you?"he asked, as we strolled along.
"It's nothing. My sister and I...are just fighters."
"Is she your only sister?"
"No, my other sister's in the university. You've not met her before."
"Hmm..but I will one day,"he said and laughed.
"Charles, you can start heading home now. My house is just close by. Dont want my mum to..." I began.
"I understand. See you at school tomorrow darling," he said and gave me a peck on the forehead before saying 'bye' and heading off. Anytime Charles came close to me, I felt so loved. Dont know whether it was his gorgeous face..or his kissable lips..or the sweet scenting cologne he sprays.
When I got home, Lillian was in the parlour watching her favourite channel on DStv: TELEMUNDO.
"Welcome darling," Lillian said.
"You're home again?" I asked laughing.
"Just for the weekend," she replied, her eyes glued to the tv.
"I hear..if they show 'Someone's watching' from now till Thursday, you wont only stay for the weekend," I teased and headed for my room. I met Sarah in the hallway.
"Hmm..so you're back abi? What was that embarrasment you gave me in school?" She began.
"Sarah, abeg abeg abeg! I am tired. Just leave me alone, I said to her. It was the first time of me really standing up to Sarah like that. But i had had enough of her high-handedness. I was in SS2 for crying out loud.
"Oh...so now you even have guts abi? Are you crazy? You dont have respect for your elder ones again abi?" she asked me.
"Do you deserve respect?" I asked her. Before I knew what was happening, Sarah landed me a slap on my cheek. I was dazef for seconds, and immediately I returned the slap.
"What fell down?" Lillian asked from the parlour.
"Daisy, you slapped me?" Sarah said, sounding like a Nollywood actress. She pursued me into the kitchen. I decided that I wasnt going to apologize, afterall, she started it. I picked up the jug of water on the kitchen counter and baptised her with the water. Sarah carried a tray of glasses and threw it at me. I dodged and the tray and glasses fell behind me and shattered into pieces. Before I knew it, Sarah pushed me and I fell backward on the pieces of broken glass. The last thing I heard before I passed out was Lillian yelling at Sarah.

5naira: Bae i dey follow your bumper to bumper , seems you are from Uyo .me 2 sha

yeah I am..hw did u guess?

At least one more update before I go to bed....
By the way the last update was wow! Plus it was lengthy. Maybe the longest you've posted so far.

CONTINUATION
I opened my eyes slowly. It didnt feel like home.
"She's awake," I heard a voice say.
"Oh..thank God! Darling, how are you feeling?" my mum asked. I had a bandage wrapped around my forehead and my right arm. My leg hurt real bad and the pain was so severe. I couldnt even answer my mother.
"She will be OK. Lillian was fast enough. If she had lost any more blood, it could have been a different story. We were able to remove the pieces of glass lodged at the back of her head. Hers is a miracle," Dr. Grace, our family doctor said.
"You'll be alright dear," Lillian said.
"What really happened? Why would Sarah do something like this to her own sister?" my mum asked.
"Mummy, I dont know. I just heard a sound like something had fallen from the corridor. When I askes what fell, none of them answered me. I ignored it. Then I heard the sound of glass breaking. I ran to the kitchen and saw Daisy on the floor in a pool of blood around her head. I had to rush and get a taxi after I called you and Dad," Lillian explained.
Just then, the door opened and Dad came in looking very angry and pulling Sarah by her ear into the room.
"Owwwwwww!!! Daddy na..my ear o!" Sarah protested.
"C'mon, will you shut your evil mouth before I shut it fpr you?!" Dad yelled, landing her a slap.
"Just see what you did to your sister. Let me just tell you, those glasses you broke, your pocket money for two weeks will be used to buy them," my Dad said. Sarah looked like someone that had just been released from prison. She was badly beaten up.
"Daisy, I'm sorry please. I didnt know you were going to land on the glasses please," Sarah said. I just hissed and turned my face away. This wasnt the first or second time that I had landed in hospital cause of her. It wasnt even the third or fourth time.
"Daisy, she's apologising," Lillian said.
"I've heard," I murmured and closed my eyes.
"So, Doctor, when will she be discharged. She will be here for two weeks or so. We stopped the bleeding but we are not sure if there are still pieces of glass stuck at the back of her head. We need to observe her," Dr. Grace said.
"Two weeks?!" I asked in shock.
"Daddy, exams start next week," I added.
"Sweetie, you can write your exams in hospital. Right now, your health is important, OK?" Mum said. They stayed with me in the hospital till I slept off, so I didnt know when they left.
The next day, some of my classmates came to the hospital around 2:30p.m to see me, along with my class teacher, Mrs. Essien. Of course, Sandra, Esther and Charles were among them.
"So sorry about the accident, Daisy. I hope you will get well soon," Mrs. Essien began.
"Accident?" I asked, confused.
"Yes. Your mum said you had an accident last night. You have to be more careful on the road at night," Esther said.
"Oh..yeah. The accident," I murmured. Later, when everybody went out to see the doctor, Charles came back inside my ward.
"Sorry about the accident, OK? Get well soon," he said, stroking my hair.
"Charles, I didnt have an accident," I blurted out.
"What?" He asked.
"So..what happened to you? You were committing suicide?" He joked.
"Sarah threw me on pieces of glass. I had glass lodged at the back of my head."
"JESUS!!!" Charles said in shock.
"Why would she do that?"
"I'll be here for two weeks. Mum said I would be writing my exams here."
"Ehya! Will I still see you when you are out of hospital? My birthday is on 23rd July, after the exams," he said.
"I will be out before then," I said.
"Good. So you will attend my birthday party?" He asked.
"If I dont attend, who will?" I said laughing. Charles bent down and gave me a deep kiss on my lips. I held him tight savouring every moment of the romantic kiss, while his hands roamed around on my body relaxing on my thighs.
"Charles, get...going. Anyone can...come in," I murmured to him in between kisses. He released me then.
"OK. I'll come back and see you during the weekend. Just to help you revise for the exams. Hope you dont mind?" He asked.
"That would be really nice, Charles," I said.
"Bye,"he said, as he walked out. I licked my lips again to make sure I wasnt hallucinating. Yup...the minty taste of his tongue was still on mine..so I wasnt hallucinating.

D9ty7: At least one more update before I go to bed....
By the way the last update was wow! Plus it was lengthy. Maybe the longest you've posted so far.

the one i posted after was the longest

Will continue tomorrow..need a rest. By the way, keep dos comments coming. Itz really encouraging

Nice 1

nice one cheryl.. i can imagine d relationship btw daisy n ha sis..my sister and I were always at loggerheads too..although i no land for hospital sha ooo

cheryluv: yeah I am..hw did u guess?

from d plot, so do you stay in uyo

Nice update