Well done Calismart

Ciela:
Well done Calismart

Thanks dear

I know isn't easy to type but regular update will be good nd make d story ve interesting.

I would have loved to update this evening but due to some circumstances,i just can't do so.
Bear with me guys,i will make up for this tomorrow being sunday.

EPISODE 14


David came out from his room
and headed to the dinning to
have breakfast.
As he sat
down,he glanced at his
wristwatch and muttered
something,shook his head and stood up.
Sonia saw this
and edged closer.

"Sir,you are leaving.you didnt
touch your food"Sonia said
gently.

"I'm running out of time.I need to be at the meeting this
morning in the next fifteen
minutes"He explained.

"But,sir,missing breakfast is
not actually good.It is always
advisable to eat breakfast in the morning,no matter
what.Please sir,eat your
breakfast"Soniasounded like a
newly married wife.

Just then,Angela emerged and
went up to her husband.
"Darling.She is right.please
come and eat your food.The
office and meeting can
wait.your health is more
important to me"she said as
she took him by the hand like a baby and led him back to the
dinning table.
Sonia watched carefully as he
chew and swallowed the
food.She smiled and left.
David ate in a hurry and left for the meeting.

:::::.***:::::

"Sonia.i hope you are doing
what the baba told you to
do?"Sonia's mother asked over the phone.

Sonia had called to tell her how the plans has been going.

"Yes mum.for these past two
days,i made sure i put the
liquid into his food and i always ensured he ate
them"she replied in a low
voice,to prevent even the walls from hearing.

"Good.don't make any mistake
o.be careful o.remember the baba said it will back-fire if you
don't do it well as he
said"She clarified.

"I know mom.that is why i
called.Today is the third
day.Remind me the things he said i must do today.I dont
want to make any mistake
o.It's like i forgot some of the
things he said i should
do"Sonia explained.

"Haa omo mi o.listen very well.make sure you put it in his
breakfast and dinner.and then
pour a little of it into his
bathing water.Then apply it on your palm
and rub his head with itThat is all.please be careful
o"She instructed.

"Alright mom.i will try my
best"Sonia finally said and dropped the call.

She had succeed only in
putting it into his breakfast
this morning.She wondered
how she can rub his head with
her palm.
The
bathing water case can never
be a problem.She prayed to get
lucky.But she was scared.The thought of everything
back-firing was even scarier
but she was determined to
play this game to the end.She was beginning to reasons why she should do it.She needed money.If everything goes as planned,money would be hers.
And moreover,the thought of the revelation of paul's death was another thing she never wanted another person to hear.

:::::.***.::::::

"Honey i'm hoooome"David's voice echoed as he
returned that evening from
work.
Sonia's heartbeat increased as she was set to
carry out her final operations.
She successfully applied it into
his food and bath water.
Now,the only thing left was to
rub his head with her palms.She applied the liquid on
her palm and stayed in a place
where she knew David would
pass through after bathing.

As David approached,she
composed herself and started looking at the paper in her
hand as if she was reading
it.
As he came closer,she look at
his head and said.

"Oh sir,there is a little soap on
your head"She came closer and David stopped,lowering his
head for her to clean out the
soap as she volunteered to.
She smiled within herself as
she rubbed his head with the liquid.she rubbed it all over slowly,with pleasure.

"Its okay now"she said.David
left.She felt like jumping up out of excitement but controlled herself.She remembered Angela and how she took her like a junior sister.

"Oh lord,i didn't mean to do this.I am so sorry for whatever happens next"Sonia murmured as she ran to her room with tears running down her cheeks.

Nice job. Y tears running down her check? Her evil plans are working out.

EPISODE 15

"shine bright like a diamond"

"shine bright like a diamond....."

Angela tossed on her bed.The
phone kept ringing.She peered
at the screen,It
was "Sweet mother" calling.
She
tossed again from one side of
the bed to another.She was still enjoying her sleep.It was the
ringing phone that woke her
up.She glanced at the clock
hanging on the wall.It was
5.25am.

She wondered why her mother could be calling so early that morning.

"Good morning mum"She
finally spoke into the phone.

"Angela.Angela are you
alright?"Mrs uwa asked from the other end of telephone.

"I'm alright mum.I hope there
is no problem"Angela asked
curiously.Her mother's voice
didn't sound normal.

"Angela.i had a dream that's why i called you"Mrs uwa said
with a shaky voice.

"A dream?"Angela asked
yawning.

"Angela, i had a dream.you
were travelling by a bus,sitting very comfortably on your seat
and then a lady came out from
nowhere and started dragging
the seat with you..The seat that
you paid ticket for.What baffled
me was that everybody in the bus kept quiet as if they
didn't see what was
happening.Then she finally
pulled you out of the fast
moving bus and you fell down
on the express road.Immediately,i woke
up"She narrated with a deep sigh of confusion.

Angela heaved and yawned
again.
"Mama,it's just a dream.It's
only a dream.Don't worry okay? I'm fine"Angela said.

"No no no. Angela,my dreams
are not just dreams.I hardly
dream and when i have one,its
usually a revelation because it
later comes to pass.Angela,youmust pray hard.Pray real hard
because i sense danger"Mrs
uwa warned.

Angela was reluctant to saying
anything.
Her mother's dreams comes into reality though but only one case gave her doubts.Her little sister was taken by unknown gunmen few months after her birth and they never heard anything about her again.She felt her sister could be dead;if not blood and destiny ought to have brought them together again but her mother kept saying that her lost daughter was still alive,that she dreams of it.
Angela openly doubted the possibility of her still being alive.

She also remembered how
her mother had told them she had a dream where her
aunty,her mother's sister had
an accident and died.Her
mother had told her sister
about it and asked her to
pray.They too,prayed over it.Few months later,her aunty
died in a ghastly motor accident.

Angela became scared.She clasped
her hand together and
muttered something.

"Angela.You must come over so we can pray over this.Tell David
about it.I'm very sure he would
allow you come"Mrs uwa said
before finally hanging up.

Angela got up immediately and
went up to David to tell him about it.
David granted her the
permission without wasting
anytime.

The pastor Angela and her
mother visited,told Angela that she must fast for seven days
(6am-3am) and at the end of
the fast,she must come for
prayers.Becauseof this,she
stayed over at her parents
place as instructed by her mother.
The pastor didn't
actually explain the dream but
he only said he sensed danger.
"Great disaster"

Now this is getting interesting, full of suspense, breathtaking...

Please i would love it if u help point out areas where i need to improve.Its really gonna help me

Hp Sonia is nt angela's missing sister ooo.hmmmm

typical nigerian movie line, a person will be fetish and pious at the same time. Who is she deceiving? God! No no, u can serve two masters, it is either you love one and hate the other. You cant serve God with Mammon says Jesus.

typical nigerian movie line, a person will be fetish and pious at the same time. Who is she deceiving? God! No no, u can serve two masters, it is either you love one and hate the other. You cant serve God with Mammon says Jesus.

pretydiva:
Hp Sonia is nt angela's missing sister ooo.hmmmm

same thing in my mind

pretydiva:
Hp Sonia is nt angela's missing sister ooo.hmmmm

dah part got me thinking along d same line

HMMMM NYC STORY BT PLS UR UPDATE IS 2 SHORT

pretydiva:
Hp Sonia is nt angela's missing sister ooo.hmmmm

hmmo.that part got us all thinking the same thing...lolz

Eliasog:
typical nigerian movie line, a person will be fetish and pious at the same time. Who is she deceiving? God! No no, u can serve two masters, it is either you love one and hate the other. You cant serve God with Mammon says Jesus.

Yea.you are right

ACHIEVABABE:
HMMMM NYC STORY BT PLS UR UPDATE IS 2 SHORT

Thanks.
I will see to the complain

Hmmmm

Guys please pardon me for the way i'm going with the episodes.
I'll be making updates regularly from on sunday.
Tuale!

The power of prayers,Sonia u will hear it.Thanks for the update

calismart, are you.O Godwin on Facebook?, reply asap
coz your work's been posted without so much as any credit going to you as the writer, no acknowledgment or "culled from "or anything of that nature

tushwitch:
calismart, are you.O Godwin on Facebook?, reply asap
coz your work's been posted without so much as any credit going to you as the writer, no acknowledgment or "culled from "or anything of that nature

I'm calistus chidubem ojiako on facebook.Please tell me the name of the copy cats.I dont know what i have done to those people o.
Just few weeks ago,i stopped two facebook pages from posting this story.
Pls if its a page,tell me the name of the page.If its just someone sharing it on his/her timeline,pls tell me name of the person

great story more ororo to ur elbow......plz be more frequent in ur posting

7 days away frm her home? Calismart wel done nd nyc wrk

Aipete2:
Omo to pupa toleji to ni barca to tun ni chelsea. Thats so nice na

Na Ekiti u dey abi?

Bevy12:
I don't watch nigerian movie not to talk of old ones. I watch korean or american.

Who's pocket are u enriching?

donkizzydaboss:
great story more ororo to ur elbow......plz be more frequent in ur posting

welcome bro.thanks for the ororo.lols
I'm working on the updates.i gonna kip dem coming from on sunday.pls bear with me

Ciela:
7 days away frm her home? Calismart wel done nd nyc wrk

Thanks sis

Calismart:

I'm calistus chidubem ojiako on facebook.Please tell me the name of the copy cats.I dont know what i have done to those people o.
Just few weeks ago,i stopped two facebook pages from posting this story.
Pls if its a page,tell me the name of the page.If its just someone sharing it on his/her timeline,pls tell me name of the person

idk who to believe tho
his name's Omokpo Godwin

tushwitch:

idk who to believe tho
his name's Omokpo Godwin

I've checked his profile and i found out dat almost everytin on his timeline is from my facebook page.like i said earlier at the beginning of this thread,i posted the cooked up version of this story on the page.just ten episodes and so,some copy cat admins took it up.
But here,i decided to change everything in the story.even the plot,sequence,name and everything changed and improved.
Thanks for notifying me dear.I appreciate.

Calismart:

I've checked his profile and i found out dat almost everytin on his timeline is from my facebook page.like i said earlier at the beginning of this thread,i posted the cooked up version of this story on the page.just ten episodes and so,some copy cat admins took it up.
But here,i decided to change everything in the story.even the plot,sequence,name and everything changed and improved.
Thanks for notifying me dear.I appreciate.

okay then....good job