1. I Had jst finished writin my diploma exams in unilag...glory to God I passed. I was gonna be stayin ahome 6mnths.

2. what to do what to do?? I faced chatting online like twas gonna fetch me money...den I met dis gal

3. amazin personality,fantastic talker(if dr is a word like dat) she was exactly like me....she cud talk fire

4. all the gist (mostly abt ha bf) I luv hearin abt d bf gist, boys gist to be precise(for sum weird unknown reasons) am nt gay cos...

5 I was also dating buh I got bored, Ii wantedtd to meet nd hear sumfin new...she was amazing tho, she was d kinna gal dah kals me nd instantly I strt laffin. baq to d story...

6. come to fink of it, frm all d gist u'l fink she loved him...mayb she did buh pple get tired I guess or mayb dey were jst messin wif eachboda

7. I forgot to mention, I was double datin den nd frm d whole gist gist shii, she knew nd I was tagged, d bad boy alrdy(dat feeling is awesome)

8. we strtd gettin too close,i wasnt ready for a nos 3 buh u knw gals,u neva can tel wen its a "i like u as a frnd" or "i like u as a...i rilly like u

9. I played along nd didnt push ma luck, since she knew I was datin 2gals alrdy. I jst contd to enjoy my chat wif ha...

10. and then she strtd gettin too crious, she ewud go all "y didnt u reply ma msgz" "u'r ignorin me abi"

11. am like wtf is dis?? is she teasin me or rilly catchin feelings?? heheheheh. as a gentle bad guy,i'll apologise.

12. someday, she came out clean "i rilly like u nd wud want us to date" I LOL whyn me well...she ansd "am crious"

Let me know my flaws in the writeup...part 2 coming up tonigh

Waitin for part2 sire

13. iav 2gf's was havin a hard tym maintaining em nd dis1...issokay as a bad guy....i no go run.

14. shortly after, she dumps d douchebag(he was treatin ha like shii) nd we hit finz up, we strtd dating

15. I was officially d baddest guy eva liveth, 3hot gals, only me....hehehehe
(i wud get #100 cal card nd spnd 3mins on each of em evry nyt to say g.nyt) Lmao

16. jst after sum mnths...she wnts me dumpin d oda gals for onli her(iad jst received ma 1st Mouth Gig,on our 1st meeting...I wntd more)

17. easiest decision of my life....anifin for a bj....to make matters worse,she strtd kallin regularly

18. in no tym iad fights wif d oda 2gals, dey left me(she lukd d most promisin one tho)

19. we did al kinds of stuff dey do in porn movies (b4 u judge me,ow do u knw wat dey do dr) :p

20. booooooom! she gains admission, wahala, no1 is safe (i wasnt gonna be safe) *sigh

21. I misd d part were she cheated on me( God punish seyi were eva he is) LOL I let dat go cos I wasnt losin aniways....

22. she settles in sch, gains popularity nd admirers strtd fkockin aroun ha(gimme a min to cry)

23. she met paul (God pls punish him too) hez abt goin to serve...straffs ha nd dumps ha(dey dated 1&half mnth)

24. she breaks up wif me.

25. begs to cme baq to me. she meets nifemi, u sure knw wats gonna hapun nxt LOL

26. I accptd buh.....i forgot..ha frnd ad a huge crush on me....i....u knw...okay...(i be virgin o)

27. I accpt her buh, sum1 was stil in d equation.....

ayodeji230:
Let me know my flaws in the writeup...part 2 coming up tonigh

Well, there are lots of flaws. But then I don't know if you're writing for fun or if you intend to get serious with writing. Or, even, if you intend to get serious with writing but for pulp journals and campus stuff.

Take a look at my two interventions below which cover paragraphs 1 - 3 only. If you intend to get serious with writing you might adopt the second. Otherwise, the first might do.

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1. I had just finished writing my diploma exams in Unilag - glory to God I passed. I was gonna be staying at home for six months.

2. What to do? I faced chatting online like it was going to fetch me money. Then I met this gal.

3. Amazing personality, fantastic talker. She was exactly like me. She could talk fire.

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It was not long since I finished writing my diploma examinations at the University of Lagos. The results had just come out and, thankfully, I had passed. Now, I was uneasy about the prospect of staying at home for six months. I threw myself into online chat as if it was some money-making endeavour.

It was during my second day at the cyber café that I met this lady. She was fair, of average build and well proportioned. She had an amazing personality and was a great person to chat with. She was like me in several ways.

I don't really know much about writing I just wrote it for fun..i would appreciate it if you can groom me with the do's and dont's of writeup..i have some stories coming up too I don't really know much about writing I just wrote it for fun..i would appreciate it if you can groom me with the do's and dont's of writeup..i have some stories coming up too