Welcome, Guest: Register On Nairaland / LOGIN! / Trending / Recent / New
Stats: 3,149,989 members, 7,806,879 topics. Date: Wednesday, 24 April 2024 at 06:02 AM

Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) - Poems For Review (4) - Nairaland

Nairaland Forum / Entertainment / Literature / Poems For Review / Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) (18498 Views)

NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta / Collaborative Poetry Competition Season One: ROYVER AND KRYSTALXXX WINS!!! / A Critique Of Poems Featured In Nairaland's "The Poets" Competition Season 2 (2) (2) (3) (4)

(1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10) ... (13) (Reply) (Go Down)

Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by OMA4U(m): 12:12pm On Oct 25, 2014
laykorn:

Haa,Jazaakallahu khayran big brother. At last,someone that knows I'm Sobur Adedokun and not laykorn.
Olyrid of facebook might be joining soon. It'd sure be great with him around too. And that going places.....you mean?

You know olyrid on Facebook? I mean poet Adelaja Ridwan?
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by Nobody: 12:19pm On Oct 25, 2014
.
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by OMA4U(m): 12:25pm On Oct 25, 2014
Wow! I'm astonished. Great poems from brilliant poets so far.

laykorn, I'm indebted.

Sigmundfreud, please choose another number, a specific one.

Tiyazman, please choose another number.

Chuksemi, c'mon. I'm expecting you.

THESE ARE THE POETS WITH NUMBERS:

1. KRYSTALXXX
2. ROYVER
3. LAYKORN
4. LORDTHUNDERBOLT
5. JIGSAWKILLAH
6. PHILTRUM
7. GIYAZZ
8. TEXANOMALY
9. IYABODEH
10. KAGARI
11. GOTTOBOY
12. SOSIQDUDE
13. AD30LA
TO BE UPDATED........

TOMORROW IS THE DEADLINE. 6:00 PM

Come in, poets.

Thanks
OMA
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by OMA4U(m): 12:27pm On Oct 25, 2014
laykorn:

He's my big brother lol. From different mothers sha ooo. He should be joining today,just that he still doesn't have an account.
You know him too?
He's a great poet. He's a poem-friend. Is he done with exams?
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by OMA4U(m): 12:49pm On Oct 25, 2014
We must indeed fan the embers!
Awaken the anthracite from the dead ashes
With a bag of bellows blowing
Fiery flames to unquenched inferno
Where lay the burning wax of sensational poetry

We must indeed fan the embers
Rekindle the low fire that burns on cold coal
Gulping down the elixir of poetic tea
Then forever, we refine crude words into brilliant
piece

What is life without a line or stanza to write?
What is poetry if demigods of pen's wearied mind
slip?
We, the harbingers of what pen can do
We pledge our allegiance to poetic statue
That we shall struggle to scribble
Even at the utmost dearth of poetry

OMA

1 Like

Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by Nobody: 1:55pm On Oct 25, 2014
OMA4U:
He's a great poet. He's a poem-friend. Is he done with exams?
No,he has a paper left. That doesn't stop him from running around sha. He's in Ife today.
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by Tiyazman(m): 2:57pm On Oct 25, 2014
OMA4U:
Wow! I'm astonished. Great poems from brilliant poets so far.

laykorn, I'm indebted.

Sigmundfreud, please choose another number, a specific one.

Tiyazman, please choose another number.

Chuksemi, c'mon. I'm expecting you.

THESE ARE THE POETS WITH NUMBERS:

1. KRYSTALXXX
2. ROYVER
3. LAYKORN
4. LORDTHUNDERBOLT
5. JIGSAWKILLAH
6. PHILTRUM
7. -
8. TEXANOMALY
9. IYABODEH
10. KAGARI

TO BE UPDATED........

TOMORROW IS THE DEADLINE. 6:00 PM

Come in, poets.

Thanks
OMA
No.7 then. . . And pls mention me with GIYAZZ, not Tiyazman. This is just an alternate account. Thanks
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by GIYAZZ(m): 4:41pm On Oct 25, 2014
Tiyazman:
No.7 then. . . And pls mention me with GIYAZZ, not Tiyazman. This is just an alternate account. Thanks
I'm back! Taking over from here Tiyazman, go rest now. . . cheesy
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by Nobody: 5:33pm On Oct 25, 2014
texanomaly:


Lol...a girl can't give another girl a compliment? You have nice legs. grin
thanks dearie dear. grin kiss

1 Like

Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by Nobody: 5:58pm On Oct 25, 2014
iyabodeh:
thanks dearie dear. grin kiss

*instantly moves 4 posts to Romance. Topic: same sexes and compliments*
Heheheheh

1 Like

Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by texanomaly(f): 6:30pm On Oct 25, 2014
iyabodeh:
thanks dearie dear. grin kiss

You're welcome. kiss

laykorn:


*instantly moves 4 posts to Romance. Topic: same sexes and compliments*
Heheheheh

tongue

2 Likes

Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by GIYAZZ(m): 8:13pm On Oct 25, 2014
Guys do not derail, this is not the Chatroom, if you wanna chat and compliment yourselves, you head to the Chatroom. Bye!
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by Nobody: 8:58pm On Oct 25, 2014
GIYAZZ:
Guys do not derail, this is not the Chatroom, if you wanna chat and compliment yourselves, you head to the Chatroom. Bye!

Hehehehehehheeheh-them go join hand beat you commot for here. GIYAZZ is working now?
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by GIYAZZ(m): 9:16pm On Oct 25, 2014
laykorn:


Hehehehehehheeheh-them go join hand beat you commot for here. GIYAZZ is working now?
Lol, nobody for here fit try me na! Are they mad?? angry

Yes o. . . He's now working grin
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by Nobody: 9:21pm On Oct 25, 2014
GIYAZZ:
Lol, nobody for here fit try me na! Are they mad?? angry

Yes o. . . He's now working grin

They are not mad,they are just ladies. Don't worry you guys will see on stage. Hope you get paired with one of them anyway.
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by GIYAZZ(m): 9:27pm On Oct 25, 2014
laykorn:


They are not mad,they are just ladies. Don't worry you guys will see on stage. Hope you get paired with one of them anyway.
I pray o! grin

Lol, these girls sha. . .
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by Nobody: 9:31pm On Oct 25, 2014
GIYAZZ:
I pray o! grin

Lol, these girls sha. . .
We're derailing aren't we?
They'll sue us for derailment.
*runs and commot from thread tonight
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by GIYAZZ(m): 9:47pm On Oct 25, 2014
laykorn:

We're derailing aren't we?
They'll sue us for derailment.
*runs and commot from thread tonight
*follows him and runs away!* grin
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by kagari: 10:22pm On Oct 25, 2014
Dont really know what this is all about, but since its poetry, i dont think i got comparisons
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by kagari: 10:27pm On Oct 25, 2014
FOLLOW YOUR HEART
.
The beautiful one,
is born not,
but a beautiful smile,
is borne in my heart.
Tears brings smiles,
smiles brings laughter,
laughter brings joy,
joy brings love,
love comes from the heart,
follow your heart

1 Like

Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by gottoboy(m): 1:19am On Oct 26, 2014
LIFE'S JOURNEY

To be successful in this Life, thats what everybody Crave For.
Survivor of the Fittest, you'll sweat blood iϞ times of Labour.
The Lazy Once will Lay Low, Why the Strong once will Pickaxe.
The 'Path to Success' isn't Straight α​t all it got small corner patterns ℓιkε Zigzag.
Well your determination differs, so don't be carried away by Chit chats.
No 11
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by Nobody: 4:42am On Oct 26, 2014
Registered:
Krystalxxx: 1
Royver: 2
laykorn: 3
lordthunderbolt: 4
JigsawKillah:5
philtrum:6
GIYAZZ:7
texanomaly: 8
iyabodeh: 9
kagari: 10
Awaiting OAM4U's confirmation:
gottoboy:11




feenah12 come and pick 12 ooo
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by Nobody: 4:44am On Oct 26, 2014
gottoboy:
LIFE'S JOURNEY

To be successful in this Life, thats what everybody Crave For.
Survivor of the Fittest, you'll sweat blood iϞ times of Labour.
The Lazy Once will Lay Low, Why the Strong once will Pickaxe.
The 'Path to Success' isn't Straight α​t all it got small corner patterns ℓιkε Zigzag.
Well your determination differs, so don't be carried away by Chit chats.
No 11
Kudos to the poet that sneaked in at midnight and dropped his bomb. Welcome on board. OMA4 should update with your name soon.
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by noble4d(m): 1:33pm On Oct 26, 2014
Wow! Its going to be an interesting competition. Thumbs up to you dear poet.

Noble cares smiley
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by noble4d(m): 2:06pm On Oct 26, 2014
Dedicated to the participants and great poet.

Ottava- Rima
abababcc

Suddenly did the poet begin their fast run
Over slippy ground you see them fly and leap
The honey heart blooded under the hot sun
Verily its territory they want to keep
Haters pounces, eager getting the job done
The poet elapses in a really big heap
Haters sleeps as night takes over from the day
Will the poet see its territory become prey?

1 Like

Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by sosiqdude(m): 2:07pm On Oct 26, 2014
The thoughts of my future torments my mind
For I look young and innocent but wo! I'm wild
Lazy and corrupt, on a speed lane to hell, the road is wide
Drunk with alcohol and drunk with pride
I envision for me a wretched life, because every helpful advice I bind

12
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by AD30LA: 2:19pm On Oct 26, 2014
noble4d:
Dedicated to the participants and great poet.

Ottava- Rima
abababcc

Suddenly did the poet begin their fast run
Over slippy ground you see them fly and leap
The honey heart blooded under the hot sun
Verily its territory they wanted to keep
Haters pounces, eager getting the job done
The poet elapses in a really big heap
Haters sleeps as night takes over from the day
Will the poet see its territory become prey?
Nice octave bro....I intend to participate, i wish you will too but if you won't please do stay with us. Your comments will be highly appreciated
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by AD30LA: 2:30pm On Oct 26, 2014
Here's my entrance poem, a cinquian isn't bad I hope.

Number,
During my slumber
I'll have thought it's rubber
But now, it's knowledge i have better
Integer.

The number is 13 smiley
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by OMA4U(m): 2:48pm On Oct 26, 2014
Laykorn, Thanks.

Chuksemi, c'mon. I'm expecting you.

THESE ARE THE POETS WITH NUMBERS:

1. KRYSTALXXX
2. ROYVER
3. LAYKORN
4. LORDTHUNDERBOLT
5. JIGSAWKILLAH
6. PHILTRUM
7. GIYAZZ
8. TEXANOMALY
9. IYABODEH
10. KAGARI
11. GOTTOBOY
12. SOSIQDUDE
13. AD30LA
TO BE UPDATED........
DEADLINE. 6:00 PM

Come in, poets.

Thanks
OMA
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by gottoboy(m): 4:41pm On Oct 26, 2014
Okay
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by firestar(f): 4:51pm On Oct 26, 2014
Patch, pattern, plain...
Sea, geyser, fountain...
Valley, bypass, mountain...
Wax, total, wane...

State of mind: Sane
Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by Nobody: 5:15pm On Oct 26, 2014
firestar:
Patch, pattern, plain...
Sea, geyser, fountain...
Valley, bypass, mountain...
Wax, total, wane...

State of mind: Sane

Why don't you choose a number?

(1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10) ... (13) (Reply)

NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta / Rhymes / The Last Monkey In Idanre

(Go Up)

Sections: politics (1) business autos (1) jobs (1) career education (1) romance computers phones travel sports fashion health
religion celebs tv-movies music-radio literature webmasters programming techmarket

Links: (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10)

Nairaland - Copyright © 2005 - 2024 Oluwaseun Osewa. All rights reserved. See How To Advertise. 33
Disclaimer: Every Nairaland member is solely responsible for anything that he/she posts or uploads on Nairaland.