She stood there with frozen tears

From all her years

Those bitter plea as he spoke his sweet

A faithful pain caressing her ears

 

Deep in thoughts, the mind lost

Fires cracking from heated frost

Her pains dissolved on a liquid purse

Another glance...another pain on her hands

 

Her meek heart betrayed his passion

His tears made her many mansions

Shattered lineage of broken inactions

Still hung on the pains of yester year's emotions

 

All that was ever said

Was just too late

In between her legs

Lay another head

Nice writeup...I like the fact that each stanzas are in quatrain and making use of plain English is superb, easy to understand by a lay reader.

noble4d:
Nice writeup...I like the fact that each stanzas are in quatrain and making use of plain English is superb, easy to understand by a lay reader.

thanks Bro. ..its plain English with deeper subtle meanings... that's how u write my works...so that people can come to love poetry you can see this works and others at www.thunderboltpearlz..com
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