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| Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by TemitopeDaniel(m): 5:57am On Oct 28, 2014 |
Thanks to almight God for this talent, I worship you. Though, I have never learnt this, I feel it that I have the ability to do so. Never keep your talent! You can use your talent to change the world! →KiP cOnNeCtEd← Temitope Daniel |
| Re: Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by TemitopeDaniel(m): 6:00am On Oct 28, 2014 |
Dedicated to all the poets on NL, God bless you. I'm a real novice, if there's any error or what I need to know, please tell me and I won't feel offended. MY LOVE 1) I had the puissance, I shut my eyes at every problem and followed my heart, I thought I had just one chance, Loving her with all my heart, Never did I give up, I gave it a lot of stretch, Then, I noticed it was no longer bracing up, I had a dream in sketch, My feelings for her made me start giving up, I loved my dream, even right from creche, I looked into her eyes every moment I had the oppurtunity, Neglecting what I was meant to thrash, I never gave up on my ability, As well didn't want my dream to crash, My attitude was no longer in conformity, Her love was like a wave that gave me a bash. 2) Her grin did get my eyes widened, I couldn't tell if mine ever moved her, Moving near her makes my heart gladdened, My days of reckoning was getting near, I whisked to my feet and told her what I felt, She walked away and left me on the spot, I cried that my heart would melt, I felt as if she just let out a shot, My behaviour started to become preposterous, My life was as if I wouldn't go far, She never knew what she did was disastrous, I started being a drunkard in a bar, Her love had deluged my life, And my story changed completely, I wished I could kick her out of my life, But I knew it wasn't so easy. 3) I kept on drowning in this river, She was not around to bring me out, I was stranded because I had no helper, Weeping because I thought I wouldn't get out, Going deeper as I walked out into the cold air, Amalgamating various odours, Weeping because I had no one there, My bawl was enough to shut doors, I raised my head and saw the eyes flashing in the dark, I was dazzled because I felt my end had came, To fight for myself was a great lack, I felt it was a dream, or even a game, The light came from nowhere, I saw her standing before me, I widened my eyes to make the vision clear, She walked closer and hugged me, I froze because my heaven was becoming blue, I looked around and it was only we two, She smiled and said I love you, My grin was enough to tell her I loved her too. Temitope Daniel 1 Like 2 Shares |
| Re: Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by Nobody: 6:01am On Oct 28, 2014 |
Following bumper to bumper..  |
| Re: Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by TemitopeDaniel(m): 6:03am On Oct 28, 2014 |
hayurmidey:Lol! U remain my guy forever. I am a novice on this forum oh, wanna learn how to write poem Welcome bro, a big thank you. |
| Re: Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by kingphilip(m): 7:33am On Oct 28, 2014 |
TemitopeDaniel:u go get there boss make the ogbonge people wey de around here come put some spice to am |
| Re: Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by LogoDWhiz(m): 10:40am On Oct 28, 2014 |
Wow! This is awesome. Feeling u bro |
| Re: Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by Nobody: 10:02pm On Oct 28, 2014 |
Why don't you join us at the NL Collaboration Competition. You're a dab hand. |
| Re: Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by TemitopeDaniel(m): 3:39am On Oct 29, 2014 |
laykorn:Laykorn... I just laid and wrote that. My first time of writing poem... Not good at it at all. |
| Re: Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by TemitopeDaniel(m): 3:40am On Oct 29, 2014 |
| Re: Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by TemitopeDaniel(m): 3:41am On Oct 29, 2014 |
kingphilip:Thanks so much KingPhilip.. o dey expect them.. |
| Re: Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by Nobody: 5:29am On Oct 29, 2014 |
TemitopeDaniel:Can I send you a pm? |
| Re: Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by TemitopeDaniel(m): 6:37am On Oct 29, 2014 |
| Re: Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by LogoDWhiz(m): 12:57pm On Oct 29, 2014 |
| Re: Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by TemitopeDaniel(m): 5:50am On Nov 26, 2014 |
My poem.. Update coming soon. |
| Re: Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by Nobody: 8:26pm On Dec 24, 2014 |
Hi TemitopeDaniel, I am not a novice but I am not a pro. If you intend to sell your works of poetry (like I intend to) then you have to add some things. A link to my 4-poem collection below, hope it helps. www.nairaland.com/2058105/4-poem-poetry-collection |
| Re: Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by Nobody: 8:45pm On Dec 24, 2014 |
Laykorn sir, Why have you refused t view/ comment on my poetry collection?  www.nairaland.com/2058105/4-poem-poetry-collection |
| Re: Temitope Daniel's Collection Of Poems. by TemitopeDaniel(m): 12:23pm On Oct 17, 2015 |
THE WOMAN.
As people will call her, womb-man,
The mother of many nations,
Given as a gift to the man,
The last being of creation,
Created from the rib of the man,
Just to be with him in all conditions,
Cold without muffler or heat without fan,
She is there, full of emotions! A woman, full of passion, A strong feeling of emotion, With gentle heart like an egg condition, Created to have full submission, She's perceives her merchandise is good, Her lamp does not go out by night, She stretches her hands to distaff, And her hand holds the spindle. Who can find a virtuous woman? Not the killer of every Samson, The chased of every Elijah, The future-killer of every Joseph, The headache of every David, And the finisher of every Solomon. Not the dream killer, Or destiny chaser! Who can find a virtuous woman? The one beside every Joseph, The one beside every Zechariah, Devoted like Sarah, Loving like Ruth, Giver like the widow, Full of mercy, like Esther, Who can find a virtuous woman? The one with unfading beauty (1Peter 4:3) Temitope Daniel Abimbola 2015 |
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