Geoxpress vs illness ............tonight's entertainment..

Voting Criteria :
Opener - 1 point
Rhymes - 2 points
Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points
Punchlines - 3 points
Personals - 2 points
Flow - 1 point
Wordplays - 2 points
Closer - 1 point
Rules
- 20 lines.
- Deadline is 7pm, Thursday 30 October 2014.
- Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not
later than deadline date.
- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or
recycling.
- No complaining about votes.
- A no show attracts a ban.
- No unnecessary comments
- No smearing comments about any bar OR biting
accusations without proof.
- Whatever you feel is wrong with a bar or verse -
please put it in your vote. Vote and state what you
found wrong.
- If there's anything you need to say in defence of
your verse please save them for after voting's over.
- NO argument with established vets OR voters.
- Battlers should not interject between votes and
voters should just vote and leave it like that.
- Only vets and regular section posters are allowed
to vote.
Goodluck!!!

Checks. Would post soon.

bloody

Yeah Geo after you

Y'all are d0pe. .bt he lost 2 TeddyBiyasi(T.B) T.B is an ailment. .and his name is Illness, so get ma point. . .dig d rest
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. . .Now the grenades & bombs all set to hit the Gee/with a mighty force and a killing Spree. .I'd come with Fisher men tools. ."FISH HIM OUT" and then kill The "ILL"!!
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. . .C/o'd Max, the smart guy declined and the fool ranted. . .'He's ducking' quickly/i took my time, studied the Gee. .and knew he was gon' die! Not so long. .he went after "TEDDY" and got killed like "CHUCKY" Victims!!
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. . .Still on his pers!/his tactics is messed!. . .won't still turn on Jujes as a biitch in Skirts!/but I won't kill him, c'mon he already died by his "OWN HANDS!". .cus we all saw 'Illness vs T.B' and hw he got killed by Battling Himself!!/
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. . .I'd kill him ryy nw. .no Procrastination!/storm his hood. .with Me Goons like an Invasion!/kill his fams, den plant bombs in his brains @ his "UNAWARES" detonate with +20mm and blast it beyond his "IMAGINATION!!"
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. . .Never considered him being a threat!/hes a bitch. . .a FLIRRT!/but if he tries ta form Tough here. ..I'd come with two AK 47s, "CONTRACT MY MUSCLES!" and kill him & his goons in a "STRETCH!!"
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. . .AK47, Sniper. .which of them Hefty Toys!?/ok Scratch. . .lemme predict ur moves: you gon' say I lost 2 Max and Dark. .That and That. .den after dt Kr0ne? Fucck You! I knw ur errmove. .like the "OUTCOME OF UR EVERY BRAWL!!"/^^
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. . .I come with an army frm 3diff Countries! ! Beat him, diff body Languages. .that's Business!!/attack with a mass of 20 grenades and 20 bombs, and kill the Ebola Ill sets!/then wen I'm done, I'd get a finishing Grenade 2 beat both Ill and "ILL SCRIPTS" like I was attacking an NL REAL VET!!/
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. . .Come with Some ROBO and Big men/to have his faces shattered in Bits 'Em. .!/but let's be sincere. .this Is "NAIJA" and they say "HEALTH IS WEALTH!" Who the fucck would go for "ILLNESS?"
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. . .So nigg, forget, this is Catastrophe!/its no 'Draw' no Banga something! cus I'd come with 5more Grenades, Plant it on his door step. . .and boom the ill "GO DIE" like I'm referring to Japanese "PHILOSOPHY"!!!/
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NOTE
>>All personals are in the verse.
>>The head bears all impulses that determines ur state of mind.
>>Bye-laws are laws made by local Authorities.
>>Marcus Allback is an ex Swedish international.
>>Witches & wizards normally operate in the dark and he lost to Darkrebel.


HIS FINAL BURIAL

.......Against Krone a rough man/ Geo came with a tough plan/ buh wasn't only cuffed, hanged/ he also lost one of his arms..... for spitting Offhand!!!/

Way am peeling glads/ portrays the meaning that/ since Geo wanna see stuff I really gat/
......bullets'll make him run out of shape moment I fire from all Cylinders!!!/

.......Ely got him bodied and bagged!/ till his blood littered the paths/
........infact the records I gat/ showed he suffered a 'Max killing' similar to the 'IS attacks!!!'/

............and even at that/ Geo shud know my tactical moves are hard to find/
And am not a goon he shud whyne/cos when I drive in with my host of rhymes/ I'll fix a staring on his head and quickly control his state of mind!!!/

..........he'll be tossed up high/ till he yells and scream why/ he has failed once to die/
But in this time??...... my punches'll definitely suit him since the last bout was a tie!!!/

..........this ffool's not a guy/ reason Ill is winning/
So if Geo wants to speak 4 himself...he must be silly/
......cos diz punches we seeing/ 'll build a roadblock in his mind so no way in this brawl can Geo... express his feeling!!!/

........his counter skills are minor/ so'll rip out his eyes and fry all/ this uncivilised bingo cannot fight raw/ cos nigga too LOCAL and shud be laid down like BYE-LAWS!!!/

.......lemme not talk about his rhymes yor/ cos it's clear he was dreamin/ when he swore to hv me beaten/
......buh funny all thru that meeting/ nobody saw the dawg bite, what he did was all bark like he played for Sweden!!!/

.........my punches sick damn!/ so Geo be left in disdain/ and when I pick them/I mean my hit men/ we'll throw Geo inside a pit here and watch him 'go down' faster than.....'settled excreta in a sewage system!!!'/

.........hole up don't get it twisted!/ I saw rebel eat u up like pizza/ buh aside those punches that were bizarre/ we already know u won't 'make it thru the Dark' even if u 'party with witches and wizards!!!!'/

Please your votes are needed here...
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Coogar
Fuckyouhard
Gottoboy
thunderstorm
007Bruce
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icekidd
captainflash
kr0ne
elymaxiimus
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wrongturn
youngdanaval

Damn! Thank God I finally dropped...Mehn I was having a bad network! Sorry guys

Illness:
Damn! Thank God I finally dropped...Mehn I was having a bad network! Sorry guys

no problem

..........this ffool's not a guy/ reason Ill is
winning/
So if Geo wants to speak 4 himself...he
must be silly/
......cos diz punches we seeing/ 'll build a
roadblock in his mind so no way in this
brawl can Geo... express his feeling!!!/

Damn! Illness is ill: something like a sick virus

Rhymes/flow - geoxpress

opener - tie

AOC - illness

W - illness

Geoxpress, your verse is weak

007Bruce:
Damn! Illness is ill: something like a sick virus

Rhymes/flow - geoxpress

opener - tie

AOC - illness

W - illness

Geoxpress, your verse is weak

Lol. .ok

Nice from both glads

OPENER = geo's is generic. Nd i feel illness could do better with the "offhand" idea.... TIE

RHYMES = TIE (you both rhymed below average)

FLOW = illness took this easy

METS = ILLNESS (edged slightly)

PUNCHES = ILLNESS (smoother nd cleaner with delivery. Hence increasing the effects of his punches... Geo needs to work on flow nd delivery)

PERSONALS = this coulda been a tie. but this was a checkmate :

ok Scratch. . .lemme predict ur moves: you
gon' say I lost 2 Max and Dark. .That and
That. .den after dt Kr0ne? Fucck You! I knw
ur errmove. .like the "OUTCOME OF UR EVERY
BRAWL!!"/^^
nice! GEOXPRESS

W/P = ILLNESS( edged slightly. Nd also better delivery)

CLOSER = ILLNESS( edged a lil bit. Geo's too was good, but illness was just classy...)

MVGT = ILLNESS... You've really upped your game

nice showing by both..........

more votes please guys

<<<<MY VERDICT>>>>



OPENER = TIE

RHYMES = TIE

FLOW = ILLNESS

METS = ILLNESS

PUNCHES = ILLNESS

PERSONAL = GEOXPRESS

WORDPLAY = ILLNESS

CLOSER = ILLNESS

MVGT = ILLNESS...

verdict

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rhyme-tie

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opener-tie
flow-illness
personal-xpress
aoc- illnes
vgt-illness

I'm just gonna be direct,no time to explain
Opener - Geoxpress
Rhymes -Illness
Similes/Metaphor - Geoxpress
Punchlines -Illness
Personals - Geoxpress
Flow -Illness
Wordplays - Illness(tho that suit&tie been over-played )
Closer -Illness

MVGT - Illness (from his verse you can tell he came really prepared,Geoxpress did well also,nice one).

Ok. . .Dark, close the thread.

I can't pick a clear winner here. Geoxpress ruined his punchlines from his setups tho he was better in rhymes while illness beat him by punches. But some of geo's rhymes are horrible tho. How wud u rhyme skirt/ mess and flirt with stretch? They don't rhyme at all.
Metaphor is tie, I like that going after teddy line and 'make through the dark lines. they're nice and quotable! The personals and wordplay weigh equal to me, and while Geo took the opener, illness takes the closer

Mvgt- - tie

Wrongturn:
I can't pick a clear winner here. Geoxpress ruined his punchlines from his setups tho he was better in rhymes while illness beat him by punches. But some of geo's rhymes are horrible tho. How wud u rhyme skirt/ mess and flirt with stretch? They don't rhyme at all.
Metaphor is tie, I like that going after teddy line and 'make through the dark lines. they're nice and quotable! The personals and wordplay weigh equal to me, and while Geo took the opener, illness takes the closer

Mvgt- - tie

wrongturn, you don dey wrong-turn again abi... It's an understatement to say those don't rhyme AT ALL... They're are'nt perfect rhymes but they rhyme....
Stretch/skirt/flirt/ .... Mess/ good

Wrongturn:
I can't pick a clear winner here. Geoxpress ruined his punchlines from his setups tho he was better in rhymes while illness beat him by punches. But some of geo's rhymes are horrible tho. How wud u rhyme skirt/ mess and flirt with stretch? They don't rhyme at all.
Metaphor is tie, I like that going after teddy line and 'make through the dark lines. they're nice and quotable! The personals and wordplay weigh equal to me, and while Geo took the opener, illness takes the closer

Mvgt- - tie

Wrongturn let's battle 20lines u game?

ELYMAXiimus:

wrongturn, you don dey wrong-turn again abi... It's an understatement to say those don't rhyme AT ALL... They're are'nt perfect rhymes but they rhyme....
Stretch/skirt/flirt/ .... Mess/ good

lol! stretch and skirt don't rhyme o. skirt rhymes with flirt/shirt/church/curse

Illness:
Wrongturn let's battle 20lines u game?

no!

Just seeing this. Illness vex this time o. Chai!
Geoxpress has good ideas but the way he delivers his punches self eh. Na wa. You tried, I swear, but work on ur build-ups

Sickness GMV

Wrongturn:
lol! stretch and skirt don't rhyme o. skirt rhymes with flirt/shirt/church/curse

slant rhyming is allowed....
You don't have to rhyme perfectly all the time..... Cos some words might not fit in. Hence the need of slant rhymes...
Sketch rhymes slantly with skirt n flirt......
On vocals you could even bend em to sound the same...

and dares TAMING THE MAD TURN/ i'm
BLAZING THE WACK NERD/ cos PLAINLY HE'S
AWKWARD/ so like' NAZI IN CAR SPORTS/ this
battle is a "German ride on KRAD " . . . . . his
NAME SPELT IN BACKWARDS

here's your opener against dark...

Mad turn/ wack nerd/ doesnt rhyme perfectly with awkward/ car sport/ they are slanted.

Turn/nerd/WARD/SPORT

Its the same with geo rhyming stretch/skirt/flirt...... Shikena..

ELYMAXiimus:
and dares TAMING THE MAD TURN/ i'm
BLAZING THE WACK NERD/ cos PLAINLY HE'S
AWKWARD/ so like' NAZI IN CAR SPORTS/ this
battle is a "German ride on KRAD " . . . . . his
NAME SPELT IN BACKWARDS

here's your opener against dark...

Mad turn/ wack nerd/ doesnt rhyme perfectly with awkward/ car sport/ they are slanted.

Turn/nerd/WARD/SPORT

Its the same with geo rhyming stretch/skirt/flirt...... Shikena..

they do bro. No need to argue, just ask. Nerd/word/sport/heard/learn/heart/ward/

please let's respect other peoples thread ..take this lecture somewhere else and observe the proper battle etiquettes

just vote and leave ...please

Thread Closed*******

ILLNESS WINS.................,

Wrongturn:
they do bro. No need to argue, just ask. Nerd/word/SPORT/heard/learn/HEART/WARD/

.... I hope you correct yourself before someone else does..... Especially the HEART... /ha:t/