Nancydearie:
@Prettyspicey,that update was supberb,u are really a bunch of talent.Keep it up dear and may GOD continue to bless and inspire u IJNA!!! U guys should vote her for best writer for the month of December,she deserves it. Go girl!!! You are good. We have many talented writers on Nairaland.

Many thanks, Nancydearie and Amen to your prayers

rapmike:
PrettySpicey, I have to say, you positively astonished me, tastefully dishing out the action as its hot. Am really impressed.

However, you made a mistake somewhere, using death instead of dead. Will look for the place soon.

But thumbs up.

Wasn't looking to impress you or nobody but since you are and are astonished at same time, I guess that's a nice side benefit

And thanks for the noted error, I have taken care of it and hope there are no others.

Thanks rapmike

PrettySpicey:


Wasn't looking to impress you or nobody but since you are and are astonished at same time, I guess that's a nice side benefit

And thanks for the noted error, I have taken care of it and hope there are no others.

Thanks rapmike

You are welcome

PrettySpicey:


well, it was kinda real... in my head. I imagined I was whooping your azz and I thought of the many ways I'd want to knock some good sense into your big head... as big sis concerned ... well, the gun wasn't really part of the imaginative thought, I don't you to die of course ... but I imagined if it was a knock-out shooting gun and it hit you on the rear, it'd be EPIC!!! ... Glad I made the family proud

Hasta la vista, lil bro

So in other words,my stubbornness was your inspiration

@PrettySpicey, you never fail to deliver ... I flowed so easily with your chapter.. God bless, and more data to your phone .

JeffreyJamez:


So in other words,my stubbornness was your inspiration

Lol, you can like to brag... see im mouth

rapmike:


Now, now, play nice.

Its unfair to attack me like that, my eyes just spotted it. Besides, her delivery was indeed awesome, I can't beat that currently.

About me not joining, I get exams for school so I can't hop in, lolz.

I wish u d best on ur exams. BTW, I didnt attack u o, is just dat......

Sleekyshuga:
@PrettySpicey, you never fail to deliver ... I flowed so easily with your chapter.. God bless, and more data to your phone .

Thanks Sleekyshuga

PrettySpicey:


Thanks Sleekyshuga

Always welcome, dear..

LarrySun:
I'll write the concluding chapter of that first collaboration.

sir, when wil write the concluding chapter

So Rimi hasn't 'straffed' for 2 yrs?

Alright, my homie is about to get some action...


Well done pretty, that fight scene was awesome! You set the stage for those raging testosterone to be attended to.

PrettySpicey:


Lol, you can like to brag... see im mouth

you know it

Greatomotoy:
sir, when wil write the concluding chapter

I'll write it soon. We're still working on the current one. Thank you, sir.

LarrySun:
I'll write it soon. We're still working on the current one. Thank you, sir.

ok.

Wow! The story is getting hot

The great Mazi.

MaziOmenuko:
So Rimi hasn't 'straffed' for 2 yrs?

Alright, my homie is about to get some action...


Well done pretty, that fight scene was awesome! You set the stage for those raging testosterone to be attended to.

I trust you, no stone will be left unturned.

MaziOmenuko:
So Rimi hasn't 'straffed' for 2 yrs?

Alright, my homie is about to get some action...


Well done pretty, that fight scene was awesome! You set the stage for those raging testosterone to be attended to.

i was about to say dis, iknw say na yu go put confirm sex-scene there, no fall hands oh

kayemjay bad guy, how can u stop deer na. mazi den don burst ur bubble, Rim I don get he groove already.

Weldone Kayemjay,nice chapter there. (tho i expected a more detailed sex scene *coughs*)

Kayemjay doing what he knows how best to do. You are always on point sire.

Ghen ghen for the next writer....



Kay, that was a great work!


Now, the story has begun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is what I'm talking about joor. Kayemjay has done his thing, see d title sef 'Christopher' can u just imagine. u re always on point. BTW, Larrysun u did a brilliant thing in bringing these great writers together. May God bless u all.

Jennimma:
Weldone Kayemjay,nice chapter there. (tho i expected a more detailed sex scene *coughs*)

Queen! I fear u o. intimacy gini??

toykathy:


Queen! I fear u o. intimacy gini??

Nice story. better than last year's. IMO, Brown Dino is not much of a baddass. I can't wait to see what would happen to uche and tonia. I still don't get it how Mr Brown lost his fortune by losing a key
someone, enlighten me

Nice work, Kayemjay.

However, there was a place that was unclear.

"What brings you here?" Rimi asked

"Not at all Zaniab. Make yourself comfortable."

The transition from the question to the second statement was too fast, like something was missing.

Probably a sentence or two.

Yet it was good work, as usual from Kayemjay, writer of " An evening with Eva"

Christopher will be a wild card.

D9ty7:
The great Mazi.
I trust you, no stone will be left unturned.

Lol...I actually thought I was going to write chapter 7 after pretty had posted; I got my work ready to post and saw kay's chapter there. I had to remove my own straffing scene and rewrite some of the scenes.

I've updated chapter 8. I Don't trust my mondays so I had to do it today.

I've bn hearing abt MaxiOmenuko for sometym now bt i havnt read any work of urs. U re a very good writer and I'm sure my bestie Audreytimms will grab all d openins u left for d nxt writer and turn evrythn turnable. Weldone guys, we cant ask for anythn better. Audrey darlyn, we await ur delivery bt nt 2 worry, we gat ur back 24/7.
BTW D9yt7 I see u re writing d 17th chapter, waitin patiently.....
Happy sunday to y'all

Great work Mazi, you took me by surprise killing off bull, certainly did not see that coming, can't wait to see Don unravel.
Really intriguing.
Three thumbs up, lol.

MaziOmenuko, kayemjay, and PrettySpicey,
Wao, u are indeed wonderful.
More ink to ur pen.

wow
Audreytims
you have a very intrestinq piece over there. Your chapter really gave the true meaninq of discription. You really told us more about the live of everyone involved. Thouqh it was a lengty piece (the most lengtier, if thier is anythinq like that) . I really enjoyed it.


Would be lookinq up to read more of your stories.