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COLLECTION OF MY POEMS by heayey(m): 3:42pm On Nov 21, 2014
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Collections of My Poems

You are welcome to read them at anytime...

"Heayey"
Re: COLLECTION OF MY POEMS by heayey(m): 11:59pm On Dec 25, 2014
MY DREAM

oh,i wish my dream comes true
I'll be gracious if all i see comes real
oh God, i have faith in you
As my destiny awaits me

for every step i take in life
i believe it's a path to glory
for every move i make in life
i believe I'm very close to sucess

i so value my dream
and I'll not let myself down
I'll follow the direction of my dream
in order to live the life that I've imagined.
Re: COLLECTION OF MY POEMS by heayey(m): 10:58pm On Dec 27, 2014
IF I HAD THE CHANCE

if i had the chance
i'd change the world in glance
and most people will be in trance
cos everywhere is gonna look like france

if i had the opportunity
i'll turn my estate into a big city
people will come study there like a university
and within will be a free facility

if i had the brain
i'll discover the cure for pain
such that people won't need surgery for a sprain
and let not people suffer in vain

if i had the power
in my community,i'd be like a tower
and be a tower of strength for those that are lower
to bring about a period that allows youth to flower.

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Re: COLLECTION OF MY POEMS by heayey(m): 12:20am On Feb 15, 2015
NOT ALRIGHT


Everything around here is not alright
Everyday we struggle and fight
we hide our feelings and thoughts.
And pretend but it really hurts.

Deep down is the depression
Our sadness is filled with aggression
our younger ones cant even cope
And still we linger upon hope

We all think. this mystery will end some day...
As we are growing older everyday
when there is nobody left to trust
This life is really unjust.

Here lies the uncertainty of life
Every young man needs a wife
having nothing to build a family
Eventually they might not live happily.

The poor are fighting for survival
while the rich are fighting for revival
This life is full of drama.....
We are bound to live with good or bad karma

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Re: COLLECTION OF MY POEMS by heayey(m): 12:42am On Mar 03, 2015
IN MY COUNTRY


In the Land of Nigeria
Its not easy to have a career
Every good and bad in the area
Its as a result of the barrier

Nobody knows tomorrow
I don't want to live in anyone's shadow
People dance away their sorrow
Just to avoid going down below

Every youth go to hustle
Searching stuffs on Google
Politicians mission is to embezzle
And the Government will always fumble
Re: COLLECTION OF MY POEMS by heayey(m): 3:28pm On Aug 17, 2015
TIME

Time fly and waits for no one
Always make use of your time
Never let time make use of you
Always spend your time well


Time moves very fast
Time wasted can never be regained
Only if you use your current time well
Then, you can balance with time


Time is extremely essential
Buy yourself time to achieve your goals
Buy yourself time to change your life
The greatest regret is not making good use of your time


Time never stops for anyone
Everyone have their own time to spend
One day our time will stop
And Others will continue on their time
Re: COLLECTION OF MY POEMS by heayey(m): 1:25am On Sep 11, 2015
THE JOURNEY OF MAN

On my journey to conquer the world
i can't wait to hit the road
its a long way down there
So many Obstacles waiting out there

i'm having the least of opportunities
but i venture into the world of possibilities
Carrying on so much responsibilities
and partaking in every available activities

i'm leaving behind my past
if i don't want to come last
then i focus on my future
and begin this life adventure

i've spent so much time thinking
every now and then believing
life is all about surviving
but there is more to it than surviving

I'm having a great enthusiasm
and i'm full of optimism
My emotions are buried deep down
and my goal is not letting myself down
Re: COLLECTION OF MY POEMS by ilotriouzAY(m): 10:26am On Apr 19, 2020
Good
Re: COLLECTION OF MY POEMS by cassyrooy(m): 5:21pm On May 05, 2020
heayey:
MY DREAM

oh,i wish my dream comes true
I'll be gracious if all i see comes real
oh God, i have faith in you
As my destiny awaits me

for every step i take in life
i believe it's a path to glory
for every move i make in life
i believe I'm very close to sucess

i so value my dream
and I'll not let myself down
I'll follow the direction of my dream
in order to live the life that I've imagined.
If you want to talk about dreams, how unique is yours?

Everyone's got dreams too.
Find a way to make the dream seem believeable, find a way of delivering your dreams in an unknotty way.

I believe you can do more than you're currently doing.
Re: COLLECTION OF MY POEMS by cassyrooy(m): 5:28pm On May 05, 2020
heayey:
IF I HAD THE CHANCE

if i had the chance
i'd change the world in glance
and most people will be in trance
cos everywhere is gonna look like france

if i had the opportunity
i'll turn my estate into a big city
people will come study there like a university
and within will be a free facility

if i had the brain
i'll discover the cure for pain
such that people won't need surgery for a sprain
and let not people suffer in vain

if i had the power
in my community,i'd be like a tower
and be a tower of strength for those that are lower
to bring about a period that allows youth to flower.
To be frank, those lines that ended with ‘trance’ and ‘France’ isn't good enough.

When writing, you want to do something surreal, something that can live in people's mind beyond the letters and pages of your work.

Like I've said, unknot your ideas gradually, it doesn't matter if they're in longer stanzas. In fact, stop looking at the numbers of lines that you write, just write.

But be clear enough and avoid trying to rhyming words that may not show actual reality.
Re: COLLECTION OF MY POEMS by cassyrooy(m): 5:36pm On May 05, 2020
heayey:
THE JOURNEY OF MAN

On my journey to conquer the world
i can't wait to hit the road
its a long way down there
So many Obstacles waiting out there

i'm having the least of opportunities
but i venture into the world of possibilities
Carrying on so much responsibilities
and partaking in every available activities

i'm leaving behind my past
if i don't want to come last
then i focus on my future
and begin this life adventure

i've spent so much time thinking
every now and then believing
life is all about surviving
but there is more to it than surviving

I'm having a great enthusiasm
and i'm full of optimism
My emotions are buried deep down
and my goal is not letting myself down
Yet another junk, but with great potentials.

You keep rhyming words but the ideas you're trying to write about just never comes out.

You have to realize that poetry isn't the simplest form of writing, in fact, it can be the hardest depending on your skill set.

Take your time, focus, be calm and see how best your can develop your works to be much more better.

This isn't near beautiful at all.

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