Title: PASSION(life)

description: talk about the life around you. The things you love doing.


Criteria

Creativity - 2 points

Flow - 1 point

Imagery - 2 points

Rhyme Scheme - 2 points

Consistency/Topic - 4 points

Lit Elements/Metaphors - 2 points

Vocabulary - 2 points

EMOTION - 2 points
Rules

- 20 lines.

- Deadline is 4pm. 5th,
December 2014.

- Verses should be posted by both
battlers on or not later than
deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching,
feeding or recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- A no show attracts a ban.

- No unnecessary comments

- No smearing comments about any bar OR biting accusations without proof.

- Whatever you feel is wrong with a bar or verse - please put it in your vote. Vote and state what you found wrong.

- If there's anything you need to say in defence of your verse please save them for after voting's over.

- NO argument with established vets OR voters.

- Battlers should not interject
between votes and voters should
just vote and leave it like that.

Goodluck!!!

Alright
Checks

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Following...

I'm cursed and blessed, a hustler till death
Even with money, I'll still murder for wealth
See, I'm obsessed with it, I ain't even tryna stop it
Take the glock, cóck it, gimme the cash or I pop it
If it ain't that, it's either cards, dice or football bettings
I know I lust after the juice, but begging
Has never been an option, I've got 3 siblings
And a mom, I care so much, sometimes I skip feeding
That's jus what my passion is, the fashion is
Getting money out of bîtches where the action is
Breach the street peace, and I'm out there hustling
Caught a chick tryna run, I'm out there struggling
Her purse won't come off, I had to bottle her
I sold gold for cheaper prices, hence I got popular
I'm with this fly chick, cos I'm finna get doe up out her
Telling about herself, but nothing I no about her
Screw love, I'm only in for the gain
Gonna pay me to tear your pûss? I'm in for the game
It's not bringing doe gee? Count me off it
Robbed my first boss till he drove me out of office
This is the life I'm living, nigga blame me not
I grew up where your money talks, niggas battle to stay on top
Each tryna make me drop, I tied my timbs
Ima run this street, else I wont die in peace
Why won't I love money? I wasn't born with a silver spoon
See I moved exactly the way I'd seen dad do
Put Niggas thru, to see what I saw
And I won't stop, till I have it all, with double to back it up
A Scarface product, the world is mine
Fûck the girls I like, but still not satisfied
Till I'm Bill Gates dream, twice richer
But till then, say hi to my 9 meter

Open for votes...

Kr0ne
guykhena
ibime
coogar
emaprince
kim

MVGT = jigsawkillah

Mvgt - Jigsawkillah


Sosiqdude, why didn't u complete ur verse. I enjoyed the imagery and concept but by weight, u can't compare that with Jig's. Try next time