Topic: Alone In The Forest!
Description: You were among a few victims that have been kidnapped and somehow u managed to escape, only to find out you're alone in a thick forest. Tell ur experience in the most imaginary way. The horrors, fears and misery. Yet, there must be a way to draw the attention of people nearby. . .if possible
Remember: You have no mobile phone or any means of communication and worst. You don't know where you are!!!


Criteria

Creativity-- 2 points

Flow- - 1 point

Imagery- - 3 points (formally 2, but due to the topic I made it 3)

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points

Vocabulary-- 2 points

Emotionn - 2 (necessary)

Rules (must be strictly adhered to)

- 8bars/16Lines...

- Deadline is Sunday Dec 7th 8pm

- Verses should be posted by both contestants on
or not later than deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or
recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- No dissing of opponent

- No unnecessary comments

Good luck!

Check

Caught up in this bullsshit, blindfolded and veiled from seeing the one behind that crooked voice/
The "shutup and give me your family's contacts". . . the irritating refrain of "hail Duke boys"/
And heavy arms, with arms like Hulk's hurting the weaker gender/
Anger and fury emboldened my heart on a silly agenda/
Untill the clouds married the dark/
The head belt helped chop 'em fat ropes. . .
I sneaked and walked on my toes through the clanging grass/
In company of screeching and cranked up twitters/
By heartless birds of preys, I yelled for help till my voice was lacking bass/
Thitsty, then sucked the dripping waters from these leaves with striking 'semblance to yoyo bitters/ blaaaaaah!!
Hisses of serpents, the mocking laughter of Hyenas and that disturbing zephyr that moved majestically behind/
He was the the echoes of my fading voice got me weak as bunches of thin canes interwoven/
Rained curse words on my abductors, as if it'd help cop a free mind/
Rather attracted wild beasts, as I ran till my skin was broken/
Into the deep bushy darkness, already knew I was lost/
Sore footed I laid on cursed dusts/
The best souvenir, bless these legs which carries me/
But apologies, in case I live, if you asked me "how did you survive?" I'd sarcastically reply in Swahili!!






Sorry for the delay tho

Teddybiyasi, I'm sorry it's past the deadline and beyond. You can't drop now, I respect your penmanship, and I must not underestimate you. . . Hence I'm afraid if you dropped, you may best mine cos you've already taken few ideas from it. So sorry. Thanks

GIYAZZ:
Teddybiyasi, I'm sorry it's past the deadline and beyond. You can't drop now, I respect your penmanship, and I must not underestimate you. . . Hence I'm afraid if you dropped, you may best mine cos you've already taken few ideas from it. So sorry. Thanks

lol kk bro

Closed.

Giyazz wins via no show

free moi moi

007Bruce:
free moi moi

You no well