Topic: Best Among The Rest!

Instruction: It's a 100% hype topic, and you can diss anybody you like on this one, but make sure you stick to topic

Criteria

Creativity-- 2 points

Punchlines- -3

Flow- - 1 point

Swag - - 3 points

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points

Vocabulary-- 2 points


Rules (must be strictly adhered to)

- 8bars/16Lines...

- Deadline is Sunday Dec 14th 7pm

- Verses should be posted by both contestants on
or not later than deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or
recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- No dissing of opponent

- No unnecessary comments

Goodluck!

check...make una no confuse me biko..which one is you can dis anybody...den in the rules.. u can't diss ur opponent ....

obainojazz:
check...make una no confuse me biko..which one is you can dis anybody...den in the rules.. u can't diss ur opponent ....

Your opponent is Iceskidd. Diss anybody else but stick to topic

Checks

swag

I stand tall amongst this nation's vets/
bobybaged jig and made him a baby who craves for stealth/
i'm the nigga who fell so siq and remained in a good state of health/
everybody wants a 'piece' of me, cos i'm soveriegn/
and they try to piss me off, but i see them suffering/
so i urinate on them, in order to make a 'peace' offering/
with my artileries, i'mma killer/
a thriller/
you'd die quicker than the career of that ice vanilla/
cos nemesis could bring nL down, like an 800 pound gorilla/
i'ma wolf in a sheep's clothing/
i'm d0pe, still this beast's growing/
teddyb hides from brawls, but when she's ready to be fücked by me, you'll see the biitch showing/
gosh1kid i'm your daddy/
you would stay sonned/
keep riding my d1ck like caddy/
the only time you could say 'i got my mojo back, is when you watch gay p0rn/

obainojazz
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the niggar that has/ 10 hummers & 34 cars/...
I swung my fish hook up and caught a star/..I'm a star...I take my haters to abattoirs/ have them scarred/ while smoking me Cuban cigar
....I kill lions /with bombs strapped on/...I am Odin scion/ destroyer of nations/ and ruler of ancient Greeks and Persians/ I could easily get coogar blown off/ to the sea shore..
I'm like a designer shirt labelled hoodlum/..coz when thus rude boy/ comes with big guns/...
its worrisome/..I could slice mikuz scrotum...make the dude burn/ faster dan fire and petroleum/ and when I swing my knife like a pendulum/ the aftermath is gruesome
....I can easily take the crown/ even ibime can't stop my shine/ if he tries...i'mma attack him at night/ severe his thighs/ pull out his skull from his spine/ and make sure his wife/ reads about his demise....early...in London times
....now darkrebel having baby talk./ that his chick very fine coz he ain't seen my lady hawk/ with heavy curves/ someone tell dat shady boy/ that this gladiator/ killer of many gods/ gat the baddest chick ...like Missy Elliott/
...let me end this quick/ I don't need no win this s hit/...coz no one holds a candle stick/ against this mighty king.../so lemme peruse through y'all verdicts... while angels...blowing my dic k..
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peace

IceDaNemesis:
I stand tall amongst this nation's vets/
bobybaged jig and made him a baby who craves for stealth/
i'm the nigga who fell so siq and remained in a good state of health/
everybody wants a 'piece' of me, cos i'm soveriegn/
and they try to piss me off, but i see them suffering/
so i urinate on them, in order to make a 'peace' offering/
with my artileries, i'mma killer/
a thriller/
you'd die quicker than the career of that ice vanilla/
cos nemesis could bring nL down, like an 800 pound gorilla/
i'ma wolf in a sheep's clothing/
i'm d0pe, still this beast's growing/
teddyb hides from brawls, but when she's ready to be fücked by me, you'll see the biitch showing/
gosh1kid i'm your daddy/
you would stay sonned/
keep riding my d1ck like caddy/
the only time you could say 'i got my mojo back, is when you watch gay porn/

goodluck..
(I no mean am sha)

obainojazz:
goodluck..
(I no mean am sha)

goodluck to you too (i mean am)

Open For Votes

Mikuz
Emaprince
Elymaxiimus
Guykhena
Loonat11kk
Krone

Creativity-- 2 points
Nil

Punchlines- -3
Nil

Flow- - 1 point
Icekid

Swag - - 3 points
Obainojaz

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points
Tie

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points
Tie

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points
Icekid

Vocabulary-- 2 points
Obainojazz

MvGt: Obainojazz

Creativity-- 2 points-icekidd

Punchlines- -3-tie

Flow- - 1 point-icekidd

Swag - - 3 points-obianojazz

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points-tie

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points-tie

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points-icekidd

Vocabulary-- 2 points-tie

MVGT icekidd

Creativity-- 2 points - - Nil (as far as I'm concerned)

Punchlines- -3 - - Tie

Flow- - 1 point - - Iceskidd

Swag - - 3 points - - Obainojazz

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points - - Tie

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points - - Tie

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points - -Obainojazz

Vocabulary-- 2 points - -Tie


Mvgt - -Obainojazz

Na wa o. ElymaxCray, Guykhena Mikuz make una vote na

ElymaxCray your verd will be the tie breaker o. But i'd like to gve d W to obainojazz, he's more serious than lime in the tourney