Ghostlady:
its going quite well....but am not really In the christmas season,I don't know why
How was your day? I guess you ve made your christmas hair already

Looooool @christmas hair...... I have something on but it's for everyday...

My day was good, ran some errands and it was quiet after that...

Try try try.... Shake it off!! Feel the season

kika23:


Looooool @christmas hair...... I have something on but it's for everyday...

My day was good, ran some errands and it was quiet after that...

Try try try.... Shake it off!! Feel the season

lol I will try to..... thank you dear
Havnt even made my hair sef
and I m suppose to go for a christmas parry tomao

Ghostlady:
am done updating for the year
Thanks for all theses accolades,abeg no dey deceive dem guys with all these ur accolades o

Se mo paro ni

Ghostlady:
lol I will try to..... thank you dear
Havnt even made my hair sef
and I m suppose to go for a christmas parry tomao

You're welcome honay!! You could doughnut it... That's an emergency style saving ladies since 1700...
You'd still be beautiful anyway Have fun..

kika23:


You're welcome honay!! You could doughnut it... That's an emergency style saving ladies since 1700...
You'd still be beautiful anyway Have fun..

thanks sweety
Its nice knowing you here.*big hug*

Ghostlady:
thanks sweety
Its nice knowing you here.*big hug*

My pleasure sweets *bear hug*

Funjosh:


Se mo paro ni

we won our match

Yes o. Nothing do us KTBFFH

Ghostlady:
we won our match

SEASONS

by Jill Lemmin

There comes a season in our lives
when we look at what we've done...
and wonder how we'll be received
when this race on earth is won.

We start to look at life through faith
and we search to know God's plan...
material things begin to fade,
when we place our trust in Him.

We long to make a difference
and find reason for our birth...
we can't rely on earthly things
to determine our self worth.

I'm thankful for this season
that has given me such peace...
God has taught me who I am
and I'm happy being "me."

This poem is for all my friends,you are all appreciated

MY CHRISTMAS WISH FOR YOU

by Ruth Kephart

My Christmas wish for you, my friend.
Is not a simple one.
For I wish you hope and joy and peace.
Days filled with warmth and sun.

I wish you love and friendship too.
Throughout the coming year.
Lots of laughter and happiness.
To fill your world with cheer.

May you count your blessings, one by one.
And when totaled by the lot.
May you find all you've been given.
To be more than what you sought.

May your journeys be short, your burdens light.
May your spirit never grow old.
May all your clouds have silver linings.
And your rainbows pots of gold.

I wish this all and so much more.
May all your dreams come true.
May you have a Merry Christmas friend.
And a happy New Year, too ..
Cc:
Misshoree
Marieolae
Missberrypop5
Kika23
Missmossy
Cocolav
Karchisbarbie
Ireneony
Jennimma
Mzgracie
Babe2sure
Mayapop
Texanomaly
Jamean
Laykorn
Tiwosho
Horlarwoomey
Nabsprada
Samguine
Herald9
Naijaboiy
Emusmith
Chistar01
Lero15
Beennkumar
Smallpeepee
Funjosh
Scrypt
Akerry
Levuls
Taiye4christ
Divepen
Jarus
Seun
Standd
Tosyne2much
And everyone,I might have forgotten there monickers..please no vex....I LOVE YOU ALL
Happy holidays

Ghostlady:
This poem is for all my friends,you are all appreciated

MY CHRISTMAS WISH FOR YOU

by Ruth Kephart

My Christmas wish for you, my friend.
Is not a simple one.
For I wish you hope and joy and peace.
Days filled with warmth and sun.

I wish you love and friendship too.
Throughout the coming year.
Lots of laughter and happiness.
To fill your world with cheer.

May you count your blessings, one by one.
And when totaled by the lot.
May you find all you've been given.
To be more than what you sought.

May your journeys be short, your burdens light.
May your spirit never grow old.
May all your clouds have silver linings.
And your rainbows pots of gold.

I wish this all and so much more.
May all your dreams come true.
May you have a Merry Christmas friend.
And a happy New Year, too ..
Cc:
Misshoree
Marieolae
Missberrypop5
Kika23
Missmossy
Cocolav
Karchisbarbie
Ireneony
Jennimma
Mzgracie
Babe2sure
Mayapop
Texanomaly
Jamean
Laykorn
Tiwosho
Horlarwoomey
Nabsprada
Samguine
Herald9
Naijaboiy
Emusmith
Chistar01
Lero15
Beennkumar
Smallpeepee
Funjosh
Scrypt
Akerry
Levuls
Taiye4christ
Divepen
Jarus
Seun
Standd
Tosyne2much
And everyone,I might have forgotten there monickers..please no vex....I LOVE YOU ALL
Happy holidays

Thanks sweetie....all the best as you celebrate too

Just went through the last class now and here is my assignment mr laykorn:
MURDER STORY
Stanza 1:
Vulnerable in the dark alley,at nine in the night.
Eve heard another hard voice behind her.
She tried to imagine it was a dream just,she'd wake up.
But the assassin's blow,to the middle of her forehead,jerked her out of the dream,and brought her to reality.
A dangerous reality,the pistol stared at her,with eagerness to make her birthday her lastday.

Stanza 2:
The smell of blood,as it dripped down her forehead.
Was this going to be her death?
She felt the anger in the voice of the assassin as he spoke to her.
He was all drunk as if he was coming from a bar.
You are Eve? He asked with a wicked smile.
She just looked up without giving an answer.

Stanza 3:
The slap the assassin gave her was enough to make her nod her head.
Suddenly,they were not alone anymore as she spotted a nigger coming towards there direction.
She looked at the assassin with the hope that he would be afraid and run away.
But his face was blank as he loaded a bullet into the gun and shot into the night.
And then there was a scream and silence.

Stanza 4:
With the pain on her head still throbbing,she thought she had finally died.
She opened her eyes only to find the assassin gone,she was finally free.
But a murder has been committed and she has being left at the scene.
Suddenly,she heard police sirens,and she knew she was in a lot of trouble.
She couldn't even remember the face of the assassin due to the blow on her head.
The only thing that saved her was that,she wasn't with the murder weapon.

Cc:
Laykorn
Donifez
Texanomaly

laykorn:

My birthday is on June 3. Promise me one too.
Ayamlaykorn

for real June 3?

Girlie, keep it up... your diction is simple and comprehendable

Ghostlady:
Just went through the last class now and here is my assignment mr laykorn:
MURDER STORY
Stanza 1:
Vulnerable in the dark alley,at nine in the night.
Eve heard another hard voice behind her.
She tried to imagine it was a dream just,she'd wake up.
But the assassin's blow,to the middle of her forehead,jerked her out of the dream,and brought her to reality.
A dangerous reality,the pistol stared at her,with eagerness to make her birthday her lastday.

Stanza 2:
The smell of blood,as it drips down her forehead.
Was this going to be her death?
She felt the anger in the voice of the assassin as he spoke to her.
He was all drunk as if he was coming from a bar.
You are Eve? He asked with a wicked smile.
She just looked up without giving an answer.

Stanza 3:
The clap the assassin gave her was enough to make her nod her head.
Suddenly,they were not alone anymore as she spotted a nigger coming towards there direction.
She looked at the assassin with the hope that he would be afraid and run away.
But his face was blank as he loaded a bullet into the gun and shot into the night.
And then there was a scream and silence.

Stanza 4:
With the pain on her head still throbbing,she thought she had finally died.
She opened her eyes only to find the assassin gone,she was finally free.
But a murder has been committed and she has being left at the scene.
Suddenly,she heard police sirens,and she knew she was in a lot of trouble.
She couldn't even remember the face of the assassin due to the blow on her head.
The only thing that saved her was that,she wasn't with the murder weapon.

Cc:
Laykorn
Donifez
Texanomaly

I love this piece,very nice..the way you gave the pistol life was awesome..however in the stanza (3) you wrote clap instead of slap..Keep it up.

youngcrysta:
Girlie, keep it up... your diction is simple and comprehendable

thank you
You are really good

donifez:

I love this piece,very nice..the way you gave the pistol life was awesome..however in the stanza (3) you wrote clap instead of slap..Keep it up.

thank you..mr donifez..
And for that clap,thanks for the correction,I ll modify it now....

Ghostlady:
thank you
You are really good

thankz... that your murder story is cool, I wish I could copy and paste for my own assignment but Mr laykorn is everywhere

youngcrysta:

thankz... that your murder story is cool, I wish I could copy and paste for my own assignment but Mr laykorn is everywhere

thanks...lol you are right,but he hasn't visited my thread in a while though..

Ghostlady:
thanks...lol you are right,but he hasn't visited my thread in a while though..

dont wanna believe that, maybe his keypad got seized... just wait and see

youngcrysta:


dont wanna believe that, maybe his keypad got seized... just wait and see

lol....keypard
Hmmm I don't think so.....well,anyways cha...have got you here

*clears throat.
Ghostlady. I'm here to check !
Ayamlaykorn

laykorn:
*clears throat.
Ghostlady. I'm here to check !
Ayamlaykorn

just to check
Hian

Ghostlady:
just to check
Hian

No, to check your assignments sweetie
Ayamlaykorn

laykorn:

No, to check your assignments sweetie
Ayamlaykorn

still waitn for your grading,if its bad,just tell me hian

Ghostlady:
still waitn for your grading,if its bad,just tell me hian

Awesome
There was an example of grammatical inaccuracy in the first line of stanza 2. It should have been 'dripped'. I'm awed by your simple narrative style.

Since you've gotten your hands into it, I advise you do some 'googling' on narrative poetry and see more of it. Reading will make you so much better at it.

And your storyline too, awesome sweetie!
Ayamlaykorn

laykorn:

Awesome
There was an example of grammatical inaccuracy in the first line of stanza 2. It should have been 'dripped'. I'm awed by your simple narrative style.

Since you've gotten your hands into it, I advise you do some 'googling' on narrative poetry and see more of it. Reading will make you so much better at it.

And your storyline too, awesome sweetie!
Ayamlaykorn

ok I ll correct that...thanks
But what took you so long to read it
Are we quarelling

Ghostlady:
ok I ll correct that...thanks
But what took you so long to read it
Are we quarelling

My 'keypard' seized
Ayamlaykorn

laykorn:

My 'keypard' seized
Ayamlaykorn

if you say so....

*modified*Misshoree I hope am the first to wish you a happy birthday happy birthday sweety

A brand new day is dawning.
And as it gets its start,
I want you know I am thinking.
Of you with warmth in my heart.

I hope your birthday is special.
No one deserves it more than you!
You are such a kindherted person,
It shows in everything that you do.

So, have a perfect morning.
And an even lovelier day...
May happiness surround you.
Always.... not just for today!
Hope you like it
Enjoy your day dear...
Cc:misshoree

Solution to my assignment:
1.What makes free verse different from all other styles of poetry?
Answer:
a. free verse does not have a set structure,its up to the writer to make the poem and make up the rules for each poem.
b. Because of lack of pre determined form,free verse poems have the potential to take truly unique shapes.
c. The poet possesses more license to express,and has more control over the development of the poem.
d. It allows for a more spontaneous and individualized product.

2.what is a stanza in poetry?
Answer:
In poetry,a stanza is a grouped set of lines within a poem,usually set off from other stanzas by a blank line or different indentation.
It can also be defined as a division of a poem created by arranging the lines into a unit,often repeated in the same pattern of meter and rhyme through out the poem. The stanzas within a poem are separated by blank lines.

3.Explain how a stanza arrangement will make your poem better?
Answer:
Stanzas are used in poetry for structure. Unlike prose writing which is written in sentences and paragraphs,poems are written in lines and stanzas. choosing how to arrange those lines is part of the craft of poem writing. poets consider how to situate words,lines and spaces in order to create rhythm and tempo. These poetic devices help to create a mood which supports the theme of the poem.

4.Write a poem in free verse on free verse with title "free verse".
Answer:
FREE VERSE
Life is like a free verse,
Everyone living as they please,
Some pleasing there parents,
Some pleasing friends.

Just as a free verse has no rhythm and structure.
Life has no need for scripts.
You live your life,just as it comes at you.
And try to please yourself.

In a free verse,the poet is in control.
As we are in control of our life.
We have a choice to be a success or a failure.
And a choice to choose between heaven or hell.

But sometimes I don't like the free verse.
Cause I need some type of structure and rhythm.
Like the couplet,the ballad and the haiku.
Cause Life also needs balance.
Cc:
Laykorn
Texanomaly
Herald9
Youngcrysta
Missberrypop5
Donifez

copied.
Marking in progress.
Ayamlaykorn