Welcome, Guest: Register On Nairaland / LOGIN! / Trending / Recent / New
Stats: 3,149,970 members, 7,806,812 topics. Date: Wednesday, 24 April 2024 at 01:39 AM

Truth Gone Sour - Poems For Review - Nairaland

Nairaland Forum / Entertainment / Literature / Poems For Review / Truth Gone Sour (631 Views)

The World Has Gone - A Poem And A Brief Commentary (2) (3) (4)

(1) (Reply) (Go Down)

Truth Gone Sour by Redoil: 4:39am On Jan 23, 2015
Where is truth
lie, some called it white some called it black
Lie predate man and every living thing on earth.
Lie, the stock in trade of our politicians.
Lie, underestimating its power over fellow human is stupidity.
Lie, dont tell it to greedy women and girl they won't come near you.
Lie, always tell it will put smiles on the face of people arround you.
Lie caused the problem we are in today.
Lie makes politicians having 6 private jet to the detriment of its people.
Lie from a certain holy book makes terrorist to slaugther milions of people hoping to be compesated with 72 virgins..
Lie, tool of the poorest man use to marry the most beautiful woman
.
Oh Lie why are you like this
.
We lie about our financial status
we lie about our wealth
We (men) lie to get into women's pants
we (women) lie to get into men's pocket
we lie to get what we want at no cost
we lie about our age
We lie to ganner public vote and sympathy.
As for pastors own i will leave that to God's judgement.

1 Like

Re: Truth Gone Sour by spark4daz(f): 6:46am On Feb 05, 2015
very lovely but it's bin along time I started taming ma tongue to always speak the truth tho am not yet perfect at it
Re: Truth Gone Sour by Nobody: 8:35pm On Feb 10, 2015
The content of the poem is very essential; however it is poorly constructed.

It's almost as though you were writing out an essay, no rhythm.

I guess you're trying out your hand in poems ?
Re: Truth Gone Sour by Redoil: 1:57am On Feb 11, 2015
MzNelly:
The content of the poem is very essential; however it is poorly constructed.

It's almost as though you were writing out an essay, no rhythm.

I guess you're trying out your hand in poems ?
organising a poem is not an easy thing to do as we all know the first step of writing a poem is to get the idea of what we are writting about. I will try and organise it whenever i have the chance to do that and invite you again.

(1) (Reply)

:::All I Get From Life::: / All For But A Little / Addiction

(Go Up)

Sections: politics (1) business autos (1) jobs (1) career education (1) romance computers phones travel sports fashion health
religion celebs tv-movies music-radio literature webmasters programming techmarket

Links: (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10)

Nairaland - Copyright © 2005 - 2024 Oluwaseun Osewa. All rights reserved. See How To Advertise. 11
Disclaimer: Every Nairaland member is solely responsible for anything that he/she posts or uploads on Nairaland.