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I do by Tinkybabe(f): 8:44pm On Feb 24, 2015
Grateful we were more than a tad close
Glad it was you I chose
For with us,everything just flows
Cupid must have been fierce with his bow and arrows
cuz the hit left us an unending dose
Love like water gushing out of a hose
To friends it's undeniable and very clear to foes
Our love is almost perfect,it feels like we are pros
Even in disagreements you never fail to bring me a rose
Little wonder our bond still grows
And I still feel a tingle when you kiss my nose
I have to stop cuz this is already looking like a prose
But this isn't our best,God knows
There's a coming a day I'll be with you clad in white dress and gold stilettos
Saying "I do" before hundreds of souls

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Re: I do by joseph1832(m): 12:28am On Mar 11, 2015
'I do' will do just fine.
Re: I do by ecksplizit(m): 6:29pm On Mar 28, 2015
Joseph1832 is on the right track, "I do" sounds right.

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