kingphilip:
that's great dear

Hope we'll b seeing ur story soon

when will u write ur own?patiently waiting to see ur own so that we will make comments. dont ask me for mine o !

Nmeri17:
accept my condolences bro you're now cruising in the deepest parts of the friendzone

lol dnt worry she will come around

Patiently waitin for chapter 2, more mb 2 ur device..

Jollyjoy:
Wow!thanx 4 d wondaful update larry

Thank you, ma'am. I'm only trying my best.

Mourin:
finally got here, what a nice story so far, more mb 2 ur data

Wow! Mourin is here! You're welcome, ma'am. Your signature gives me some serious thoughts about you.

JeffreyJamez:
wow......this could as well be the beginning of a notorious crime syndicate......nice one larry.

It could be the beginning of a terrible scorn.

seyitanhep1:

She writes!, good, I have searching for more stories to read. Kizzy expect me soon.


Thanks for welcoming me.
But wait, I like Black o. How can you tell someone you want to steal from him? Chai, bad pikin. I guess that is his trademark ™, because this ain't the first time he's using this kinda distraction. Kudos to you Larry boss

He's gradually growing a repertoire of criminal intelligence. Thanks for the text message.

zyzxx:
Ameen

Wow, where u picking dis words from larrysun
Wow, u are really Gud

I believe u can play all role in real life

more wisdom bro

LOL! I'm just a small cog in a large literary wheel.

stuff46:
Nice one sire! More Wisdom to you.

Thank you so much, brother from another mister.

Nickymezor:
Nice as always ...Hapi Easter mr Larry

Thank you so much, Nicky! I'm so sorry I'm replying this now.

I hope you had some splendid Easter celebrations, too.

God bless you, ma'am.

oghenekome51:
Lol! Ugo fear thief brain! Thanks a bunch for d update, larry!

Thank you, ma'am.

Your siggy keeps me smiling.

zinylizzy:
Larry,Happy Easter...kudos

Thank you, Izzy. You're awesome, ma'am.

hisbae:
am your biggest fan Larry.

Wow! Thank a lot, ma'am. I saw your PM.

Flakeey:
LarrySun LarrySun...hmmmm you are killing the story softly...

*still reading*. I'll be back

Thank you so much, ma'am.

rapmike:
Larrysun, you no dey try. Since the day I ask you make you come check my story, you no pass comment. Hmnn... its not good oh!



There is God oooh!

I am coming over.

tohero:


I am already in love with what you've begin with, definitely following till the end.

As a suggestion, the past and present actions could have been written simultaneously. Having two genres interwoven. The love for one genre will keep one going with the other.

I should do that, but the storyline would not allow that. For after the Prologue, only very little sufficed.

Thank you so much, sir, for following.

LogoDWhiz:
ohh damn!

Black is about to be caught.

Seems basket will come to the rescue!

You're a wizard, sir.

JeffreyJamez:
fantastic!!!!! ...basket the hulk

Lol! The brute without much brains. He might learn a lot from the small boy.

akejujoe:
*Enters thread , spreads mat and sips her zobo* Larrysun I hail o

You're welcome, ma'am. You can read as you sip that cold 'zobo'.

Dyoungstar:
Larrysun where have you been?

Seen mama Repogirl? she's looking for you.

She seems to be busy at the moment.

adeh39:
Larry!!!, i dnt knw wat to say........., i thought u wouldn't write in NL again cos of dose useless pple copying stories. i'm so happy to stumble on dis interesting story of urs, so many twists nd turns, it's really nice of u 4 nt forgetting us in NL. Just keep it rolling.

Thank you so much, Adeh. It's your encouragement that keeps me going. God bless you, ma'am.

Sleekyshuga:
It was a jolly ride with you Larry on Chapter 1 ..

Awaiting Chapter 2..


More grease to your elbow..

Chapter Two shall come up very soon.

kingphilip:
Wow it's really good been associated with the best around here

U r really good in what u r doing LarrySun
Keep up d good work

Thank you, sir. You're an awesome reader. Writer whose works are read by you should consider themselves blessed.

Larrysun,u're an amazing and gifted story-teller.I've been reading ur work since ystaday and here I am.I must say I'm not disappointed I drop by to enjoy myself in ur paradise.

U made everything looked real. C U @ DA TOP-MOST TOP my brother.

oga lary cum nd update

lenmafon:
thanks larrysun for the explanation. keep doing the good work and thanks for the update.
pls check the last chapter u posted, chapter 1 -IX, the second line, shouldn't that be '...Black tried to slip ...' instead of '...sleep...'?

Modified. Thanks for noticing the error. God bless you.

Deeeebie:
****Walks into thread cat-walking****

**Brings out my pop corn and sobo ***

***Covers screen with my head ****

Thumbs up

Deeeebie! You're welcome. Come and sit with me.

jayhaywhy:
finally caught up wit u guys,its bin a great write up since,,,dis is my first tym commentin on a write up in nairaland,happy 2 b part of dis thread,
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thumbs up bro,,,ur head dey dia
oya wia ma seat dey

You're welcome. A VIP pew is already provided for you by the air-conditioner.

kizzykeziah:
So we're finally done with chapter one, yay!

And Basket's fists must be really big like a bouncer's, lol.

He really looks like a bouncer. I wonder how huge he's going to get when he grows older.

ZUBY77:
Keep it up.

Zuby is here! Wow! I am glad! God bless you, sir.

PBeni:
Nice update Larry, keep up the good work.
I've missed your wonderful stories

PBeni? Is this really PBeni? Wow! You're welcome, bro. Where've you been? I've missed you a bunch!

yindamola:
Wow!! Mr Larry is at it again...well done, more ink to your pen. Eagerly waiting for chapter 2 .

Having you grace my threads with your presence is like dancing in the rain. Thank you so much, ma'am.