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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by senbonzakurakageyoshi(m): 10:34pm On Jun 03, 2015
so.....after more than one person's correction, the author of this story series refused to modify the title. Na wa.

My dear, the title of a story is pretty much as important as the story itself. If a title is poor, I won't be inclined to read the story, because it gives me the impression that the story would be ridden with errors which, except I'm the story's editor, is not my headache to correct. You might want to take another look at your title and make the necessary correction.
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 12:07am On Jun 04, 2015
senbonzakurakageyoshi:
so.....after more than one person's correction, the author of this story series refused to modify the title. Na wa.
My dear, the title of a story is pretty much as important as the story itself. If a title is poor, I won't be inclined to read the story, because it gives me the impression that the story would be ridden with errors which, except I'm the story's editor, is not my headache to correct. You might want to take another look at your title and make the necessary correction.
senbonzakurakageyoshi, thank you for you lengthy comment... I must let you know that I am quite aware of the said 'error' of using 'lose' instead of 'loss', on the title but I want to believe that you are not a literary person... Coz if you are, you would have heard of some words like LITERARY STYLE, LITRARY LICENSE, or even DICTION... Its not an error, its intentional... Ask Ayei Kwei Armah writer of THE 'BEAUTYFUL' ONES ARE NOT YET BORN... He understands what I did there.

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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 12:37am On Jun 04, 2015
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

CHAPTER 5

The sun was setting as I stared out my
bedroom
window. The sky was a breathtakingly
beautiful shade
of pink as the sun faded out of sight on
the horizon. I
let a loud sigh escape my lips as I
thought about my
day at school. I still couldn't decipher the
mixed
signals Adams had been sending me.
Maybe there was
a man code to crack to understand this
type of
behaviour?
After the little incident in the janitor's
closet and the
verbal warning from the bitch squad, I
hadn't seen
Adams for the rest of the day. He tried
to tell me he
liked me and denied Tiffany and Jessica's
seductive
advances; indicating I was more than just
a conquest.
But then, just when I thought maybe
something could
happen between us, he turned around
and proved me wrong once again.
I walked over to my bed and flopped
down with frustration. Ever since Friday
night, I couldn't seem to get this stupid
boy out of my head. I mean, sure, he
took my virginity away, but that still did
not reserve him a spot in my heart! Any
guy who could treat a girl with such
disrespect deserves nothing more than
to be punched right in the face.
'TICK'
The sound of something hard hitting
glass interrupted my thoughts as I rolled
my head to the side and
looked at nothing but the night sky
through my window. Must of just been
my imagination, I thought to myself as I
went back to staring up at the ceiling;
willing the answers to be written there
or praying for a divine intervention.
'TICK'
The sound came again, causing me to
spring up into a sitting position. I stared
out my window as if expecting to see
something. But, frankly, I was on the
second floor so what was I intending to
see? A blind woodpecker, who couldn't
tell the difference between glass and
wood, perched on my window sill
chipping away at the glass? Yah, I highly
doubt it!
At that precise moment, the sound came
again for a third time.
'TICK'
Only this time, I had managed to see
what was causing
it as I watched a little pebble hit my
window before gravity had taken over
and forced it back down to the ground. I
sat on my bed completely dumbfounded,
staring outside with narrowed eyes. It
took a forth pebble to tap against the
glass; jarring me from my
confused trance.
I jumped to my feet and ran toward the
window, not exactly sure what I was
looking for. At first, for no particular
reason, I looked up to the dark night sky
which was covered in bright stars.
Eventually, my eyes found their way to
the ground, deciding pebbles'
falling from the sky was maybe a little
too far-fetched.
It took a couple of seconds for my eyes
to adjust to
the darkness, while slowly I began to see
the outlines of everything in the yard. I
could see every tree, bush, vehicle,
person, flower-Wait! Back it up a second!
I thought to myself, A person?! What is a
person doing in my backyard?
I looked down again, Oh. My. God!
They're staring up at me!
I forced myself to calm down while
trying to convince myself it was probably
one of my brother's friends.
They, most likely, didn't know that
Richard and I had switched rooms a few
weeks ago. I concentrated harder on the
outline of the tall, wide being before
realizing right away who it was.
Adams? I stared down at him with a
wide-eyed gaze.
My heart skipped a beat as I gazed down
at him lustfully. Although I wanted so
badly to hate him and wished so deeply
that he didn't have this power over
me, it was impossible. No matter what I
wanted, or what I wished, every time I
saw him he always managed to leave me
breathless and wanting him.
I shook that feeling off as I considered
my options. My first thought was to shut
my bedroom light off and go hide in my
bed, under the covers until he gave up
and left. I would have done it too if it
weren't for the fact that he had already
seen me and was waving fiercely
like a caffeine-crazed crack head. Plus, I
had a few not-so-nice words I wanted to
confront him with.
I opened my bedroom window and stuck
my head out as I began to whisper loudly
down to him.
"What do you want?!"
"Come down here!" He whispered back.
"Why?!"
"Because I need to talk to you!"
"Well what if I don't want to talk to you?"
"Please just let me explain!" He was
looking up at me with pleading eyes.
If it had been any other guy, or if the
past couple days hadn't happened, I
probably wouldn't have even went to my
window in the first place. And I definitely
would
never even think about doing what I was
just about to do. Except it wasn't just any
other guy, it was Adams.
And the past couple days had happened.
Plus, as much as I hated to admit, I
couldn't say no because Adams already
had me wrapped around his finger;
ready to pursue any wish he
commanded. I rolled my eyes before
sticking my hand out and
pointing my index finger at him in such a
way of saying, 'one second'. I looked up
at the large tree which towered over our
house. I wondered how my
brother managed to scale it in order to
sneak out on countless occasions. This
tree was actually the reason as to why
Richard and I were forced to switch
rooms in the first place.
My brother repeatedly snuck out of the
house using the tree and ran off to
parties and other forbidden places,
according to my parents. They had
decided that the room with the latter-
like-tree would be better suited for me,
seeing as I was a loner anyways.
Where was I going to run off to, the
library? Or out for a midnight slurpe?
I saw a branch that was only inches away
from the left side of my window and
decided that would probably be
the easiest escape route. I climbed out
my window and crawled onto the branch,
finding my way to the bottom
of the tree with ease. I was about three
feet from the ground when I felt Adams'
arms grasp my waist. My stomach
fluttered the same way it always did
when he touched me and my heart sped
up. He lifted me up in the air and then
placed me gently on my feet. I still
stumbled a little bit, but that was
because my knees had gone weak and
rubbery from being near him.
The second I caught my balance I turned
around to face him, anger from this
afternoon still lingering inside me.
Suddenly, without any second thoughts, I
pushed him hard in the chest with every
ounce of strength that I had. He must
have been expecting it because, even
with all the strength I had in me, he had
barely even flinched.
I tried again and again, and then one
more time. Each time I got the same
result, which was nothing! A half smirk
had taken over Adams' face as he
watched me in amusement. I huffed
loudly as I finally gave up. I folded my
arms against my chest and glared at him.
The smirk finally faded from his face as
he took a step closer to me.
"Look Jane-"
I cut him off before he could go any
farther,
"Stop Adams!
"Just stop."
"But-" he tried again.
"But nothing!" To my surprise my voice
was stern,
"You did it to me again! You just left me
sitting there; you left me with those
bitches!"
"I know...and I'm-"
"Sorry?" I asked. "You're always sorry,
well guess what Adams!
"Sorry is mean nothing if you don't
actually mean them!"
I watched his eyes lower from looking at
me to staring at the ground. He occupied
his hands by playing with
the hem of his shirt. I had so many other
things I wanted to say to him. I wanted to
keep yelling at him and telling him
exactly how all of that made me feel. I
wanted to so badly, but as I stood there
watching him a knot had formed in my
stomach and all I wanted to do was
comfort him.
Wait! I shook my head, confused by my
own thoughts.
Comfort him?
He was the one who was supposed to be
comforting me and yet there I was, near
seconds away from apologizing to him.
Seriously, how did he manage to
turn all this around on me and make me
feel like the bad guy?
I walked up to him and placed my hand
on his shoulder as I watched his head
slightly lift up. We both just stood there;
staring into each other's eyes.
We stayed like that for a while until
Adams finally broke the silence.
"Look Jane, I know I messed up..." he
said before adding, "Again. But I want to
make it up to you and that's why I came
here."
"Oh yah?" I removed my hand from his
shoulder, once again folding my arms.
"And how do you plan on doing that?"
"It's a surprise..."

CHAPTER 6 FOLLOWS IMMEDIATELY...
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 12:47am On Jun 04, 2015
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

CHAPTER 6

"Don't peek!" He said for the hundredth
time.
"I'm not..." I whined. Even if I attempted
to open my eyes I couldn't see anything,
there was a blindfold covering them.
"How much longer?" I asked. I was
starting to get a little impatient.
"Not much farther, just keep walking."
"It's kind of hard to stop when you're
pretty much dragging me behind you!"
About an hour earlier...
When I finally gave in to , we got into his
2009 GMC truck and he put a blind fold
over my eyes before we drove away
from my house. Well not exactly my
house, seeing as he parked a block away
in an attempt to keep my parents
oblivious to him coming over and
kidnapping me in the middle of the
night. My parents were never around and
yet the one night they did come home,
Adams had decided to show up at my
house. Although, I highly doubt they
would even notice my disappearance
because, even though they were home at
the moment, they were still completely
caught up in work.
We drove for about half an hour before
we finally came to a stop. I listened to
him as he got out of the truck
and came over to my side; helping me
down to the ground. Now, for the past
twenty minutes we have been walking
along a trail and up a hill. Well, I figured
so anyways because that's what it felt
like; I could tell we were walking up a hill
and I could also feel the dirt under my
shoes.
Adams' fingers were wrapped around
mine while his
other arm was wrapped around my waist;
helping me to dodge all of the obstacles
in our path. I was still so
frustrated with him because he didn't
only leave me once...but twice and yet it
was impossible to stay mad at him for a
long period. By rights, I should have
been callous with him and his random
mood swings.
"Okay, now stop here." He interrupted
my thoughts.
"And whatever you do, don't move!" His
voice was so urgent and so serious that I
knew it wasn't a good idea to even think
about moving. I heard the sound of
something solid hitting the ground on a
lower level than where I was standing.
"Adams!?" I held my breath.
"I'm fine," he chuckled; although his
voice came from somewhere below me.
"I had to jump and I didn't think my feet
hitting the ground were going to be so
loud." I felt his arms wrap around my
waist as he lifted me into the air. I still
couldn't see anything but the blackness
of the blind fold and it sucked! I mean,
did he honestly find it necessary to
blindfold me? I hated not being
able to see.
I felt my feet begin to touch the ground
as Adams turned my body around so that
he was standing behind me. His arms
were still tightly wrapped around
my hips and my waist. I felt his breath on
my neck which sent a shiver up my spine.
He began to whisper lightly into my ear
as the shivers escalated throughout my
entire body.
"Okay Jane..." he began, "Before I show
you this, you have to promise not to tell
anyone about it."
I tried to speak, but when I opened my
mouth no words came out so instead I
just nodded. He was still breathing
against my neck, making it impossible to
pay attention to anything else other than
the way it was making my body feel. I
could feel his breath inching closer to my
neck before his lips pressed
gently against my skin. Fireworks
instantly erupted inside my head.
A soft moan escaped my lips as he
continued to kiss my neck. I felt him
remove his arms from around my
stomach as they made their way up to
the back of my head. He pursued with his
mouth, grazing his lips against my neck
while his fingers untied the blindfold.
I can't tell you the precise moment the
blindfold fell off my face because, even
after it was gone, my eyes stayed closed.
I was so caught up with the way Adams'
lips filled my body with pleasure that I
no
longer cared about the surprise. I turned
around to face him as my arms wrapped
around his neck. His arms then snaked
around my waist and his hands
rested on my behind.
He glanced over my head at what, I'm
assuming, was the surprise he brought
me here for.
"Aren't you going to look?" He whispered
to me,
staring down into my eyes.
"No...I don't care...I just want to-" I
stopped talking as I stared up at his full
set of perfect lush lips. He pulled
me hard against his body as if knowing
exactly what I was about to say. I
tightened my arms around his neck
and our lips connected fiercely. We
stayed embraced like this for awhile,
although it still felt too short
before he pulled away. I groaned in
protest, trying to pull him back to me,
but he seemed pretty content on
that being the end of the kiss.
"Jane, just turn around and look." He
begged.
I sighed loudly, not wanting the kissing to
end and definitely not caring what it was
he wanted me to see so badly. I rolled
my eyes at him before finally turning
around. I froze the second I looked
around at the incredible, stunning sight
before me.
We were standing high, high up on the
cliff of a huge hill, staring down at the
Town of McLasgidi. We were
so high up; McLasgidi looked like nothing
more than a city for Polly Pockets. The
moon was shining brightly,
reflecting off the ocean that surrounded
the small town. The most astonishing
thing about it all was the stars. Being so
far away from town, so far from
civilization, the stars shone so brightly
that we didn't even need any sort of light
source to see each other. It was magical.
I felt Adams shoulder rub against mine
as he came to stand beside me. I stood
still, staring out at the beautiful sight
before us.
"What do you think?" He asked.
"How...How did you find this place?"
"I went for a hike one day and stumbled
across it, I come here a lot...You know, to
think and what not. It's kind of like my
secret place, that I wanted
to...Um...share with you." He spoke
lightly. I didn't reply to him, there was
no need to. I knew he could tell exactly
what I was thinking just by the look
on my face. I was stunned speechless as I
peered out into the beautiful night sky,
knowing nothing in the world would ever
compare to this moment; this exact
moment in time.
I looked down and saw a big fluffy
blanket that was laid on the ground and
beside it was a small stereo.
"What are you planning to happen here?"
I looked upward from the little set up
and eyed him curiously.
"You know, just a little romantic
getaway..." He smiled as he walked over
to the Stereo and turned it on. A
song that I instantly recognized began
playing out of the speakers. 'All of you'
by John Legend.
The soft lyrics echoed through my ears as
I stared at him in shock, 'this was one of
my favourite songs, how did he know?'
He walked over to me, offering me his
hand. "Would you like to dance, my
lady?" He faked an English accent trying
to sound like a man from the 1800's.
"I...I don't know how to..." I admitted.
"I'll teach you." He said as he wrapped
his arms around my waist and pulled me
against the hardness of his body. I then
wrapped my arms around his neck
as he pulled me in even closer. I rested
my head against his chest and we began
to sway back and forth, slowly, to the
beat of the song.
"So, am I forgiven yet?" Adams
whispered in my ear as we continued to
dance.
"You're getting there." I lied, knowing in
my heart I had forgiven him the moment
he came to my window tonight.
Adams bent down and pressed his lips
against mine as the song came to an end.
We ended up moving over to
the blanket and lying down. The rest of
the night we sat there staring up at the
sky and talking. Just talking! We talked
about everything; from our families
to books to past memories. Weirdly
enough, we had a lot in common; from
music preferences to different novels
we've read.
"What?! Adams reads comics?!" I almost
yelled as I erupted into laughter.
"What's the big deal? You just admitted
to reading them too!" He looked
insulted.
"Yah, but that's me. I mean, it's expected
from me." I laughed louder.
"Whatever, you're just mad because
Superman could take Batman any day."
He folded his arms across his
chest as he looked over at me.
"You wish! Honestly, how many times has
Batman kicked Superman's ass?!"
"Yah...Only when Batman uses Kryptonite
and that's pretty much cheating!"
"Well what is Batman suppose to use? He
is only human after all." I stated as I
looked up into the sky finally realizing
that the sun was beginning to rise. I
jumped up into a sitting position.
Adams quickly turned to look over at me
with worried eyes. "What's wrong?!" He
asked.
"I need to get home...Like now! My
parents are going to kill me if they notice
I'm not home!" I quickly got up off the
ground.
Adams muttered, 'crap,' under his breath
as he gathered everything up off the
ground before we scurried off the cliff
and down the hill.
We managed to make it to my house
within twenty minutes this time. I turned
toward Adams and quickly gave him a
peck on the cheek. I was just about to
run off when he grabbed my arm and
pulled me back toward him. Our lips
connected and at first I didn't
kiss him back, but soon his kisses became
more urgent. Our lips began to move in
unison as I grabbed
his shirt and pulled him closer to me,
deepening the kiss. A couple of seconds
later I pushed him away and
my breath came in short, shallow gasps
as I ran off toward my house. I quickly
climbed back up the tree
and stumbled into my bedroom. Relief
washed over me when I noticed my door
was still shut, indicating my parents
hadn't come looking for me yet.
I flopped down on my bed, breathing
deeply as I thought about my completely
perfect night with Adams

TO BE CONTINUED...

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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 12:52am On Jun 04, 2015
Thank you all for all ur encouraging comments... Believe me, they mean a lot...
Up dere is chapter 5 & 6... Chapter 7, 8 & 9 will follow at 2pm 2moro... Good morning everyone.

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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by senbonzakurakageyoshi(m): 7:41am On Jun 04, 2015
Kelvin3028:

senbonzakurakageyoshi, thank you for you lengthy comment... I must let you know that I am quite aware of the said 'error' of using 'lose' instead of 'loss', on the title but I want to believe that you are not a literary person... Coz if you are, you would have heard of some words like LITERARY STYLE, LITRARY LICENSE, or even DICTION... Its not an error, its intentional... Ask Ayei Kwei Armah writer of THE 'BEAUTYFUL' ONES ARE NOT YET BORN... He understands what I did there.

Okay, let's believe that's the case. You could have pointed that out when the first person corrected you. Even Ayi Kwei Armah explained his use of spelling.

Besides you used "lost" not "lose"
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by princesssusan(f): 11:22am On Jun 04, 2015
A nice story u got here, kip it up Kev
Ama follown u till da end
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Opracus(f): 5:16pm On Jun 04, 2015
nice update,just as if am watching a movie ,am so carried away,more ink 2 ur pen bro
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Missmossy(f): 9:18pm On Jun 04, 2015
Interesting, following.
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by pheranmyy(f): 9:45pm On Jun 04, 2015
nyc story,kip it up
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by whitemosquito(f): 8:09am On Jun 05, 2015
senbonzakurakageyoshi:


Okay, let's believe that's the case. You could have pointed that out when the first person corrected you. Even Ayi Kwei Armah explained his use of spelling.

Besides you used "lost" not "lose"
@kelvin3028. Oh for fucc's sake!! Literary license has to do with SPELLING not TENSE!! Do not make this embarrassment worse. Accept your error and CORRECT it. Explain how 'lost of virginity' makes any sense!!
Msstcheww.

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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Essyprity(f): 10:07am On Jun 05, 2015
Can't help wondering where this is leading to. Following.

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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by ihedinobi2: 10:33pm On Jun 05, 2015
whitemosquito:
@kelvin3028. Oh for fucc's sake!! Literary license has to do with SPELLING not TENSE!! Do not make this embarrassment worse. Accept your error and CORRECT it. Explain how 'lost of virginity' makes any sense!!
Msstcheww.

Biko, what is "literary license"? embarassed
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 11:45pm On Jun 05, 2015
ihedinobi2:

Biko, what is "literary license"? embarassed
Artistic license (also known as dramatic license, historical license, poetic license, narrative license, licentia poetica, or simply license) is a colloquial term, sometimes a euphemism, used to denote the distortion of fact, alteration of the conventions of grammar or language, or rewording of pre-existing text made by an artist in the name of art.
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Essyprity(f): 8:22am On Jun 06, 2015
ihedinobi2:


Biko, what is "literary license"? embarassed
my dear am as afloat as u. Whitemosquitoe abandoned a beautiful story since last year. Funny to see how she likes to argue about certain things and she's been here since. Leave this writter alone biko. Eru ti fe will need more attention than what u are doing here.
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by whitemosquito(f): 8:30am On Jun 06, 2015
ihedinobi2:


Biko, what is "literary license"? embarassed
Apparently, a handy talisman some lazy writers have invoked to justify glaring and unforgivable mistakes, instead of eating humble pie and admitting their errors.
Originally however, it is a term used to denote the distortion of fact, alteration of conventions of grammar and language Or rewording of pre-existing text made by an artist in the name of art.

Btw, how you dey, bubba?
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by whitemosquito(f): 8:34am On Jun 06, 2015
Essyprity:
my dear am as afloat as u. Whitemosquitoe abandoned a beautiful story since last year. Funny to see how she likes to argue about certain things and she's been here since. Leave this writter alone biko. Eru ti fe will need more attention than what u are doing here.
*yawns* Oya, you pipul should pay my sub na, lemme finish the story..
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by princesssusan(f): 8:43am On Jun 06, 2015
Essyprity:
my dear am as afloat as u. Whitemosquitoe abandoned a beautiful story since last year. Funny to see how she likes to argue about certain things and she's been here since. Leave this writter alone biko. Eru ti fe will need more attention than what u are doing here.
Bless you!
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by ihedinobi2: 10:29am On Jun 06, 2015
Kelvin3028:
Artistic license (also known as dramatic license, historical license, poetic license, narrative license, licentia poetica, or simply license) is a colloquial term, sometimes a euphemism, used to denote the distortion of fact, alteration of the conventions of grammar or language, or rewording of pre-existing text made by an artist in the name of art.
Ah yes! Thought it sounded familiar, lol. Ok, carry on, you guys. smiley
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Essyprity(f): 10:45am On Jun 06, 2015
whitemosquito:
*yawns* Oya, you pipul should pay my sub na, lemme finish the story..
sweetheart, inasmuchas ur story has a captivating title and beautifully structured,try to give d other guy some space to do what he likes. U want sub,u will get it then.
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by ihedinobi2: 10:56am On Jun 06, 2015
whitemosquito:
Apparently, a handy talisman some lazy writers have invoked to justify glaring and unforgivable mistakes, instead of eating humble pie and admitting their errors.
Originally however, it is a term used to denote the distortion of fact, alteration of conventions of grammar and language Or rewording of pre-existing text made by an artist in the name of art.

Btw, how you dey, bubba?

I see. I was thrown momentarily when I saw the term. In any case, one thing about artistic creativity is that the rules don't hold indefinitely. That's why the English language, for instance,sounds and looks way different today than it did even only last century alone. Shakespeare whom we practically worship today pretty much obliterated conventions in his day, inventing whole new words and even manners of delivery for poetry and whatnot.

For another example, "betterment" was not a word at all until Soyinka (I think, or was it Achebe?) used it in his works and had to defend it to literary authorities too. Today, it's common language.

So I think we should probably cut literary artists some slack. If the overall effect is brilliant then perhaps the questionable details are pointing to new realities.


Not that I've read the work involved here. Just my two cents.

I've missed you, darling. And what's "bubba", biko? I hope we hang out again soon. If it doesn't happen soon, the day we do, I wee come and carry you myself and anybody who says a word will sleep in the trunk of my car that day.

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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by ihedinobi2: 11:01am On Jun 06, 2015
Essyprity:
my dear am as afloat as u. Whitemosquitoe abandoned a beautiful story since last year. Funny to see how she likes to argue about certain things and she's been here since. Leave this writter alone biko. Eru ti fe will need more attention than what u are doing here.

Ngwanu, sweetness, you've heard it. Go and finish "Eru ti ife" for your readers. You have a responsibility, woman. And it's not to the god of English language. @whitemosquito.
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Calmdove(f): 1:09pm On Jun 06, 2015
Kevin we ar expecting an update 2day ooo
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Nobody: 2:42pm On Jun 06, 2015
Calmdove:
Kevin we ar expecting an update 2day ooo
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Same here!
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 7:53pm On Jun 06, 2015
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

CHAPTER 7

The lunch bell rang, awakening me from
my dreamless sleep. I was never one for
sleeping in class, even as much as I
disliked history I would never take
advantage of a chance to learn something
new.
Though, as hard and uncomfortable as
my seat and desk were, I couldn't
manage to keep my eyes open or
my head off the desk as I slept all the
way through Mathematics class. I guess I
have nobody to blame, but myself, it
wasn't exactly smart of me to stay up all
night with Adams on the cliff and then go
to school without the tiniest bit of sleep.
I probably could have faked sick and
slept half the day away, but I was far
too excited to go back to school and see
Adams.
The only problem was that it was nearly
lunch time and I still hadn't seen him
once. Although that is understandable,
seeing as he is a senior and none of
our classes are remotely the same. I
pulled myself out of my desk before
stretching my arms up high in the
air and yawning. I grabbed my books off
my desk as I headed for the door; trying
to make a quick exit.
Obviously, I wasn't fast enough as Mr.
Ogazie came to stand in front of me and
blocked my path.
"Miss Blaze" he folded his arms across
his chest, looking at me with impatience.
"Did my class bore you?"
"Oh, no Mr. Ogazie. Not at all." I lied, "I
just, well, I'm just a little bit tired today
and I apologize for that. I promise it
won't happen again."
"Very well," he replied. "Don't let it
happen again because I will not tolerate
that kind of behaviour in my
class. You are excused." He waved his
hand dismissively.
I ran out the door before he could
change his mind and send me to
detention. I went to my locker to drop
off
my books. I decided I was going to do a
little tour around the school in search of
Adams. It took awhile, but I finally found
him standing outside the front
entrance of the school. He was standing
under a tree talking to Kevin and Tabitha.
Tiffany and Jessica were lying on the
grass, soaking up the sun.
The butterflies in my stomach fluttered
as my eyes fell on him; his perfect lean
body was standing up with such straight
posture. His dark brown hair was a
perfect mess on top of his head and his
dark brown eyes looked almost black
from so far away. He also wore that sexy
half smirk on his face. The kind that
made a person look stuck up and yet it
could melt any girl's heart; this girl's
heart.
All morning I couldn't stop thinking about
how extraordinarily flawless my night
had been. Every little detail about the
night was beyond perfect. It was like a
little fairy tale coming true in my own
life. The handsome prince and the poor
lonely girl, finally breaking out of her
shell, as their love for each other
continuously grew stronger. I couldn't
wait to picture my happily ever after!
I looked back up at Adams as my smile
grew wider. I had never felt so happy in
my life, actually feeling like I belonged
somewhere and that someone cared
about me. I began to wave at Adams as I
continued to walk toward him while
wondering how he hadn't noticed me
yet.
I narrowed my eyes as I watched Adams'
pearl-white smile vanish from his face as
his eyes fell upon me.
Right away he turned his gaze away,
looking back at his friends and trying to
pretend like he hadn't seen
me.
I was only a few feet away from them
when I froze on the spot, staring at
Adams in utter disbelief.
'After everything that happened last
night, after me forgiving him for the
second time, he was doing this
again?' I tried to comprehend the
illogicality of the situation, 'He was
honestly going to act as if nothing
happened?'
I felt a sharp pain in the bottom of my
gut as my whole body began to heat up, I
could honestly feel sweat begin to rise
out of my pores. I stood there, staring at
them while holding my breath. Well, not
exactly holding my breath, it was more
like I couldn't breathe altogether.
"Hey Dude...Why is Richard's little sister
smiling and waving at you?" I heard Kevin
ask Adams. I was still
frozen motionless; watching and listening
to them.
"Dude, she has some mad crush on me
or something...It's kind of cute..." Adams
lied, trying to laugh it off.
"More like creepy!" Tabitha cut in and
turned toward me, shooting darts at me
with her eyes. "I mean look at her,
staring at us like that...Creepy!" She said
as she wrapped her arms around Adams'
neck and pulled him closer to her. "Too
bad for her though...you're mine!" She
exclaimed as she pressed her lips against
Adams'.
That's when I finally turned my head
away. I couldn't bear to see any more of
this lewd display! It was weird
how one second you could be the
happiest person in the world and then in
that exact second you could feel
the complete opposite. I felt like a
crashing ball had came flying down at
me, smashing me into tiny bits
and pieces. I always thought physical pain
was bad; like it hurt, it really did...But
physical pain was nothing compared to
this. I couldn't breathe, my chest was
burning and my stomach was clenching
and causing me so much pain.
I began to repeat the same five words in
my head,
'I'm Not going to cry...'
'I'm Not going to cry...'
'I'm Not Going..........'
But, I failed as I watched all my
surroundings begin to grow blurry while
my eyes filled up with water. I heard
Tabitha, Tiffany and Jessica's laughter
behind me as I began to run away.
Waterfalls of hot angry tears rolled
down my cheeks, making it impossible to
see anything. I felt like I was going to
pass out from the lack of oxygen. I
couldn't breathe, but I continued to
run anyway. I was just about to reach the
steps that headed up to the school as I
clenched my jaw shut, trying to force my
cries down. I knew I couldn't stop
the tears from flowing but I wasn't going
to let the loud sobs escape my lips; not
yet at least. Not until I was hidden
somewhere away from everyone else.
I felt my left foot hit the back of my right
heel as I tumble to the ground; my
knee's sliding across the
hard concrete walkway. I could feel the
concrete ripping through my jeans
before pealing the skin off of
my knees. At that moment, I shouted a
loud cry of pain from the fall, the
embarrassment, the betrayal and,
ultimately, the heartache.
I felt someone's arms wrap around my
waist before pulling me up to my feet.
"Are you okay, Jane?" A deep, sexy voice
came from the person behind me. A
voice I had never heard before and yet it
made me forget all of my problems for
that millisecond. I turned around to face
him and, even though he was just a
blurred image, I knew I didn't recognize
him. My would-be saviour had short
brown curly hair with sensitive dark
brown eyes. He had a
square set jaw and his face was
completely clean cut.
He wasn't anywhere near as muscular as
Adams; I could tell he wasn't really into
sports and just one of
those naturally skinny guys with a little
muscle tone.
Tears were still flowing out of my eyes,
which only made me that much more
embarrassed. I could feel
blood oozing out of my knees as I turned
quickly away from the boy. I finished
running up the stairs and into the school.
I sprinted through the hallways, pushing
anyone out of my way as I did so. I heard
a few rude
comments about how weird I was and
how me and Richard were so different,
which only caused me to cry harder.
Finally, I made it to the girl's bathroom! I
swung the door open and ran into a stall,
slamming the door shut and locking it.
There were a few girls in the bathroom
doing their make-up in front of the
mirrors.
"Oh...my...God..." I could hear a girl
whisper to her friends, "Did you see her
pants, all full of blood? Poor
girl, maturing a little late, ain't she?"
"Eww!" One of her friends yelled as they
all erupted into laughter.
'Oh Great!' I thought to myself, 'Things
couldn't get any worse.'
I stared at the stall door as the
overwhelming feeling of depression
began to set in. Not only did I have to
deal with rumours going around school
about me being 'Adams crazy stalker.'
But, now everyone would be going
around; saying that I got my period
and that it leaked through!
'Honestly the blood is on my knees and
legs, how would that be possible!' I just
wanted to yell out, but I didn't.
Just last week I was a 'nobody' and no
one ever noticed me. No one talked
behind my back and everything was fine!
Now, I was pretty much in love with
Adams and yet I meant nothing to him.
Soon, there would be horrible rumours
going around the entire school about me
and I couldn't prevent it.
'I just wish everything would go back to
normal!' I thought to myself as I put the
toilet seat down and sat on top of it.
I pulled my knees up to my chest and
wrapped my arms around them. I rested
my head on top of my bloody knees as
my tears continued to flow down my
face. Finally, I allowed my bitter sobs to
escape my throat as I tried gulping down
air between each cry.
My tears leaked down my cheeks and I
could taste the saltiness of them as they
slipped into my mouth.

CHAPTER 8 TO FOLLOW IMMEDIATELY

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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 8:04pm On Jun 06, 2015
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

CHAPTER 8

The bell rang once again, indicating lunch
was now over as I wiped the wetness off
my face using my long
sleeved t-shirt. I reached down to the
toilet paper dispenser pulling a piece of
paper off before pressing it against my
nose and blowing. I got up from the
toilet seat in attempt to pull myself
together and yet I felt so betrayed, so
used. The exhaustion I felt from my
lack of sleep mixed in with the heart
shattering events that had just occurred
now left my body in shock.
I felt weak as I stood there reaching for
the lock with a shaky hand. It took a
couple tries before I could manage to get
out of the stall and into the empty
bathroom. Everyone was now in class -
everyone except me and I intended to
keep it that way. There was no way I was
going to go back to class, at least not for
the rest of the day. A decision I was quite
content with and yet it was something
that I would have never considered doing
just a mere week ago.
I managed to make my way through the
school completely unseen, the hallways
were deserted and eerily quiet, the only
sound coming from the classes beyond
the doors. Within a couple seconds I was
outside the front doors, down the stairs,
across the parking lot and walking down
the sidewalk. I turned a corner as the
school disappeared out of sight, leaving
all my problems behind with it.
I pulled my cell phone out of my pocket
before scrolling through all three of my
contacts and then clicking on my
brother's name and pressing 'send a
message'.
'Don't need a ride after school, I'm
walking.'
After I was done writing the message, I
pressed 'send' and continued walking
down the street in silence.
Well, of course in silence, who else was I
supposed to talk to? Myself? Yeah then
they'd really have
something to talk about! I have no
friends, I've never had friends...and the
first time anyone remotely my age
even paid any attention to me it turned
out to be some huge lie.
Okay, stop thinking about Adams!
I could tell myself that a million times
but no matter how many times I think it,
say it, or wish for it, it's not going to
happen. He was on my mind, is on my
mind and always will be on my mind.
"Skipping school? That's kind of unlike
you." The deep voice rang through my
ears as the image of the guy who helped
me up earlier flashed in my mind.
I turned around to see a black SUV idling
a couple feet away from me, a curly
haired boy had his head stuck out the
window looking at me. A cute smile was
plastered to his face as he eyed me up
and down.
"Jump in." He said, waving his hand
towards passenger's seat. "I'll give you a
ride."
"I don't know where I'm going..." I
replied, because it was true, I didn't
know where I was heading also I didn't
know him and I couldn't just jump into
anyone's vehicle. I paid attention to
those after school specials
'Stranger Danger!'
"Neither do I."
"Yah but it's not just that." I folded my
arms as I watched the SUV move slowly
towards me, stopping .once I was
standing right beside his driver's side
door.
"I don't know you and I'm not just going
to jump in your car just because you
helped me up from my fall this
afternoon."
"OH, you mean you actually noticed me
helping you up." He spoke sarcastically
with his dangerously sexy voice.
"What's that supposed to mean!" I was
offended by his tone of voice, even if
every time he spoke I got goose
bumps.
"I mean, I've gone to school with you
since grade one, Jane. Today was the first
time you have ever acknowledged my
existence!" This time he sounded
offended, maybe even a little upset?
I stared at him in disbelief as he began
to speak again.
"...and you still don't even recognize
me." He shook his head and then
continued. "Just jump in Jane...I promise
I don't bite. Plus I'm pretty sure you
need a good distraction right about now."
I was hesitant at first, yet his voice was
so inviting and he was right, I did need a
distraction - something to get my mind
off Adams and everything else that
happened at school today. I shrugged my
shoulders before walking around the SUV
and jumping into the passenger's seat.
I looked over at the boy as a smile of
accomplishment appeared on his face.
"I'm trusting you." I said while tossing
my schoolbag in the backseat. "So don't
try murdering me because I promise I'll
come back to haunt you." I teased.
"You...haunt me?" He chuckled, "Jane,
you wouldn't even hurt a fly."
"And how would you know?" I folded my
arms across my chest and scrunched my
face up trying to look insulted though I
probably looked more constipated.
The boy shifted the SUV into drive as we
sped off down the road. The further we
got away from the school, the better I
began to feel but still I didn't ever
want to go back.
"I already told you, I've known you since
grade one."
His voice broke through my thoughts.
"Yah, But I've never even talked to you,
nor do I even remember ever seeing
you around."
"No, you haven't ever talked to me but
that doesn't
mean I've never tried to talk to you..."
I was staring at him completely dazed as
he just looked out the window, not even
glancing at me as he spoke. Seriously,
there is no way I've gone to school
with this boy for so long and never
noticed him. He was breathtaking with
his cute smile, charming personality,
captivating looks and arousing voice.
"When...When have you tried to talk to
me?" was all I could choke out.
"When?!" He laughed, "All the time, for
years I've tried to talk to you, but it was
like you never noticed me, like you tried
to block everyone and everything out.
The only people in the whole school who
have ever been able to get your
attention were the teachers and your
brother. If anyone else tried to talk to
you...it was
like you never noticed..."
I shook my head, not allowing myself to
believe him.
"No..." I said, "People never noticed me.
No one has ever even talked to me, they
all just ignore me..."
"Are you sure?" He asked, testing me.
"Or was it you who was always ignoring
other people...so focused on your books
and school work that you just blocked
everything else out."
I sat there just staring at him, wondering
if maybe he's not lying, if maybe that was
true.
"Here...I'll help refresh your memory."
He said, while pulling into a parking lot
to Trophy Mart and parking. He turned
toward me obviously thinking the
conversation had become too intense for
driving. "Grade one - it was lunch time,
and you pulled a peanut butter and
jelly sandwich out. You stared at it in
disgusted before saying, "EWWW. I hate
P.B and J!" You got up from your desk all
angry and I turned to you with my
sandwich in my hand and said, "Here
Jane...You can have my Baloney and
mustard." But you walked right
by me, like you hadn't even noticed,
went and threw your sandwich in the
garbage."
I had no clue what he was talking
about...at first, but then the memory
came back to me. I remembered that
was the day my parents had decided to
try giving me a different kind of
sandwich, but I hated P.B and J, at
the time, I love it now. But anyways I
remember stomping off to the garbage
to throw it away, I heard a voice in the
distance but I figured they were talking
to someone else.
"There were so many times I tried to talk
to you Jane, there's a few times that
really stick out." The boy continued. "Like
in grade five - you cut your finger
on a piece of glass while we were outside
during recess. For some reason I always
had a bunch of Band-Aids in my pockets,
curtsey of my parents. I tried
to offer you one but you ran to the
teacher, completely ignoring me."
Again the memory came to me and yet I
figured the distant voice was being
directed to someone else.
"Then in grade eight - I noticed you were
reading a batman comic, one of my
favourites from the Hush volume. I was
so surprised you read comics and that
you were actually into that kind of stuff.
You were sitting on the floor beside your
locker, I was standing right next to you,
trying to talk but you never even glanced
up at me. I felt like I was talking to a
wall."
"Oh..." Was all I could say, I mean all
these years, this boy had tried over and
over to talk to me and I had never
noticed. All these years I thought people
just ignored me because I was different
because I didn't fit into their groups and
yet the whole time it was me who was
ignoring them? "So...If I have been
ignoring you all these years, then why
did you keep trying to talk to me?" I
asked him.
"I don't know, I guess I just figured
sooner or later
you'd finally notice...and you did."
I looked up at him with an arched
eyebrow. I never noticed, he just told
me.
"Sort of..." He continued, "I mean today
you actually acknowledged me when I
helped you up...I think it's because of
Adams, I mean ever since you and him,
you've seemed to finally came out of
your shell."
"Me and Jane?" I laughed, "Don't you
remember...I'm his crazy stalker." I said
with annoyance.
"No you aren't, I thought you two were
hooking up...weren't you out all night
with him last night?"
My eyes bulged out, "How did you
know?!" I pretty much yelled at him.
"Are you stalking me?" I felt the need to
jump out of the SUV and run away...fast.
His
next words left me frozen.
"No...But Jane is my older brother."

TO BE CONTINUED... TOMORROW AT 8PM

NOTE: I wanna appreciate every comments I have gotten ever since I started updating this story here on nairaland, all the praises, insults, corrections and indifference(s)... They are the reason why you are still reading this story.
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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Nobody: 10:16pm On Jun 06, 2015
Kelvin3028:
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

"Me and Jane?"I laughed, "Don't you
remember...I'm his crazy stalker." I said
with annoyance.
"No you aren't, I thought you two were
hooking up...weren't you out all night
with him last night?"
My eyes bulged out, "How did you
know?!" I pretty much yelled at him.
"Are you stalking me?" I felt the need to
jump out of the SUV and run away...fast.
His
next words left me frozen.
"No...But Jane is my older brother."

TO BE CONTINUED... TOMORROW AT 8PM

NOTE: I wanna appreciate every comments I have gotten ever since I started updating this story here on nairaland, all the praises,insults,corrections and indifference(s)... They are the reason why you are still reading this story.
Pls note that no part of this story should be copied or saved for future use without proper consultation... In one sentence, all right to this is reserved to me.


Think it should b Adams not Jane


@whitemosquito, he is thanking u for d insults grin tongue


Good job, keep it up! Can't wait for d next update

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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by whitemosquito(f): 10:26am On Jun 07, 2015
ihedinobi2:


Ngwanu, sweetness, you've heard it. Go and finish "Eru ti ife" for your readers. You have a responsibility, woman. And it's not to the god of English language. @whitemosquito.
Nein, "sweetness". If you call yourself a writer-regardless of whether you're worthy of the title Or not- you take upon yourself the responsibility of upholding the tenets, ethics of Literature. So, Yes. I do have a responsibility to the god of English language. First. Before my readers. And part of that is making sure that I do not tout rubbish as literature.. It's also about precedence... I hoped you of all ppl would understand. What If some fan becomes inspired by my work and decides to start writing too, using my poor grammar as standard?
So Im sorry If Im being hard, But writers must be held to higher standards.

And Yea, you should hurry up and take me out again o before someone beats you to the cinema thing...Bubba.
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Nobody: 6:43pm On Jun 07, 2015
whitemosquito:
Nein, "sweetness". If you call yourself a writer-regardless[url][/url] of whether you're worthy of the title Or not- you take upon yourself the responsibility of upholding the tenets, ethics of Literature. So, Yes. I do have a responsibility to the god of English language. First. Before my readers. And part of that is making sure that I do not tout rubbish as literature.. It's also about precedence... I hoped you of all ppl would understand. What If some fan becomes inspired by my work and decides to start writing too, using my poor grammar as standard?
So Im sorry If Im being hard, But writers must be held to higher standards.

And Yea, you should hurry up and take me out again o before someone beats you to the cinema thing...Bubba.


Do u speak German?

Wenn ja, cool ich auch!

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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Luckygurl(f): 8:02pm On Jun 07, 2015
*Sits gently in anticipation of tonight's update*
You're the best @kelvin smiley smiley
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Essyprity(f): 9:26pm On Jun 07, 2015
Put down your rules of engagement here so we know when to expect an update. Am already vexed with coming for an update an seeing none. Also,after u have written long on one page move to the next and don't make a page too long for comfort. Finally,will there be an update tonight or shud I go ahead and sleep?
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Luckygurl(f): 11:04pm On Jun 07, 2015
Essyprity:
Put down your rules of engagement here so we know when to expect an update. Am already vexed with coming for an update an seeing none. Also,after u have written long on one page move to the next and don't make a page too long for comfort. Finally,will there be an update tonight or shud I go ahead and sleep?

Hey!! Take a chill pill, alright cheesy cheesy
I was expecting an update too bad it turned out this way.

As for the pagination, it's not of his own making. Before a topic enters a new page it must have gotten a minimum number of replies, so you see it's non of his fault.

I have a suggestion though, comment more so the number of replies will be on the increase. Once the page has the required number of posts, a new page springs up automatically.

I've got popcorn here, care to join me as we wait smiley smiley

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