Well this is a little short story I wrote this morning please writers in the house rate me up its from my heart about how I feel right now!!!

[b]Love is a gift share it that's what I grew up learning but later on in life I learned that it's all a fairy tale, it all started like child's play but later on feelings were hurt and shared it's not a blame game rather an expression of a sad dude with pain.
No gain saying I have been noting short of loyal to you someone you can rely on everyday and night but you failed me you have never given me a sign that I could rely on you even though you know I could go to the moon for you, we have had fights like everyone else but we always makeup and continue our relationship which I value much,
I have never loved someone in my life like I love you which you clearly know cuz I have said it a thousand times and showed you in a million ways, my love for you has no bounds
we've known each other for two years now and counting and my love for you kept growing, we have a lot in common and deep inside I know you love me but then again why not just show it? Are you ashamed of been seen with me? If so just let me know.
Every morning I wake up with the hope of you saying those three words but I guess now it will never come, what pains me alot is that you show a fling of affection towards my friend my friend of 8 years I see how you pay attention to him he calls you pick he ask you out you oblige but anytime I ask it comes with a lot of excuse...
What you should know is that I don't share cuz it seems like that's what you want to do but what you should know is that you have thought me a great lesson which is never trust a friend,I won't have felt this way if it was another guy but him? Common give me a break!
I don't smoke I don't drink and I don't follow random women if I do I won't have written this but the love I have for you blinded me to wait for you make up your mind but to no avail!
If you said you want to study me before you will fall in love with me by you could have gotten a diploma on me! But then again you have your reasons which I don't know, if only you know how much i love you I don't see you as a girl I want but a girl I need, I see you as someone who I can spend my life with which you know i can, I am financially capable of takin care of you and your needs which you can testify to that, but what will I get in return pain?
You have humiliated me a dozen times but I always over look it cuz it's you but then again am I been just to my self? I will sacrifice alot to call you my girl but will you?I can't keep on lying to myself that one we will be together.

Some might say there are alot of girls in the world must it be you, to me you are prize less and I want you but there comes a time where a man will decide what's good for him I am so young to kill my self because of love and that's why I want to move on I have taken my time and I have waited patiently but it seems you don't need me in your life,so why continue to pursue what I can't get?
 I have tried my best and now I hang by boots I can't continue to be a scapegoat and a plan b the day you decide to love me  you know where I stay and you have my contacts but for now I will go my way and trust me I will continue to love and support you from afar! ![/b] Written BY AMINHO

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Pple er loving too much dz days

Bros.... Shebi na u be chinua achebe.... Continue to dey compose poem.... One sharp guy dey knack her. Na Jet age we dey oo.... Even babalawo Don dey stock exchange... U dey compose poem.

My advice.... Hustle.... Women chase men who chase money.

moneybag4411:
Bros.... Shebi na u be chinua achebe.... Continue to dey compose poem.... One sharp guy dey knack her. Na Jet age we dey oo.... Even babalawo Don dey stock exchange... U dey compose poem.

My advice.... Hustle.... Women chase men who chase money.

money is not a problem we are both very sound financially

@ aminho:

My observations:

1. U need paragraphs
2. Some spellings aint correct eg fiery(fairy), childs play (child's play), etc.
3. Punctuation marks aint used correctly.

Work on that.

Aint easy to right. Big ups!

Tattooboy:
@ aminho:

My observations:

1. U need paragraphs
2. Some spellings aint correct eg fiery(fairy), childs play (child's play), etc.
3. Punctuation marks aint used correctly.

Work on that.

Aint easy to right. Big ups!

I just wrote dis one down here can you pls go thru it
26th July 2006 a day I will never forget for the sorrow that came that day was not a joyful one, it was a day a comet blazed out of the orbit, a day five children cried of grief and a thousand adults felt and shared their pains, I could still remember when Dr ogunbiyi of Nakowa specialist hospital came into the house around 3 am and knocked I was surprised to see him not knowing what he was doing at our house by midnight, he came in with Aunty uwani and she was crying, Mary and Aunty Amina joined in the crying spree while my dad was told about the lost of his wife and friend I couldn't believe what I was hearing at that time my dad went out to meet his neighbor Baban auwalu and told him about the news,I could remember shouting at him saying that's not possible because I just saw her four hours ago I was stopping from following the good Dr thinking it was just a dream I couldn't believe it until around 10am I saw a blue station wagon owned by Mallam Ari with my dad and Uncle mabs (yadodo) holding my mum in a white shroud, My dad saw me standing With Ba Musa Zannah and fresh tears rolled down his tears that was when I felt that change has really come!!!I and my brothers became the center of attention as everyone was just pointing at us saying and I qoute (GA Yaranta Nan) I could remember Uncle Sokoto (Ya massa Zannah) coming in the house he saw me sitting around the mini round about and the first question he asked me was (Aminu kachi a bin chi? I said no he said go to my palour Yakura tayi Dan wake!) He was one of her favorite person as he called her Chairlady and she always replies with "Turakin karakara " eveyone is so fond of her I remember her calling Uncle Yakubu mushen kifi,uncle hamza as takelberry, and she was called Fasbag by  close friends ie:aunty amita aunty niema Mummy kundus,and a host of others I haven't mentioned.
 I still can't find one living soul that will talk evil of her as she was a mother friend and sister to all, her Favorite sura from the Holy Quran was Surutul Rahman (the mercyful) after every prayer I could remember her telling me to say (Allah ya rufa mana asiri, Allah ya Bude ma daddinku hanya,Allah ya Baku ilimi) she was a strict person who knows her eggs well,  she doesn't hesitate in correcting anyone, she does not take below per results kindly she was an educationist to the core.Did I forget to brag that she's a lawyer? Yes I did she has an LLB in law, A Bsc in English 2 diplomas  in law Two from the University of maiduguri and 1 from Bocolis and one from the Nigerian law school bwari abuja am proud to Say that my  Mother was a legend.She was buried on a cloudy Wednesday around 2pm the ceremony was attended by almost eveyone in maiduguri and its environs notably the whole government of Borno State headed by Sen sherrif, Governor of yobe state Abba Ibrahim, The current president of the federal republic of Nigeria Gen Buhari, it was a day we will never forget as It's a day My heroine answered the call of the Most High All I can say is that May you continue to rest in perfect peace you shall be loved forever!!!
Your son forever Aminu(Lazy)

aminho I only read the first post..

let us see the picture of the girl that stole ur heart b4 I comment on ur story