[b]Prolo.

Ok

Following thread.waiting for next update

Nice! Catchy prologue. Keep it coming, sir.

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Nice work, sir. But I think their dialogues sound too western. And the mail shouldn't have been placed in quotes, it should rather have been italicised. Placing the message in quote makes it sound like a direct speech. Lest I forget, in your prologue, you used the word 'cop'; I think that's a misnomer. We don't use 'cop' in Nigeria, we use 'policeman' or 'officer'.

There is no dull moment in the story. Well done, sir.

Nice update though short.still following

nice update......following

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