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Story lacks finishing. I'm surprised you sent it in for a contest like this.

Writeditor:
Story lacks finishing. I'm surprised you sent it in for a contest like this.

And that's the wonderful aspect of writing,freedom,dynamism and uniqueness.All stories are not meant to have an ending or end in the general known or traditional manner.This one actually does have an ending.Re read it,It's left to the reader to envisage how it ends....That's the quality of writing,you engage your readers...Thanks for the observation tho

Badirukehinde:

And that's the wonderful aspect of writing,freedom,dynamism and uniqueness.All stories are not meant to have an ending or end in the general known or traditional manner.This one actually does have an ending.Re read it,It's left to the reader to envisage how it ends....That's the quality of writing,you engage your readers...Thanks for the observation tho

Sure. But I meant finishing as in crossing t's and dotting i's. Word placing, punctuation and co.

Writeditor:

Sure. But I meant finishing as in crossing t's and dotting i's. Word placing, punctuation and co.

Thank You...It ended with an elipsis

Can this work be moved to FP dear moderator