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Re: Accidental Victim by BeeBeeOoh(m): 2:51pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
Abeg no let dis sunday pass by without update...@ OP |
Re: Accidental Victim by hfinest1(m): 3:29pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
wow... there's someone in d sss giving info to d Taliban group.... what could be worse...... Staci Samuel don spoil show I swr.... dioxidane baba, you're d best bro.... I wish to write like u one day o.... 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Accidental Victim by Ipheyemmy01(m): 4:57pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
Your are doing great bro, more grease to your elbow. The story line is the true reflection of our society where the cabals have their agents planted all over government ministries and agencies to dish out secret information. 1 Like |
Re: Accidental Victim by Rich4god(m): 7:06pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
Dat Mr Daniel dey very useless.... How can he be this foolish... 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Accidental Victim by eunisam: 9:54pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
seunmsg: Honestly,I was wondering why a police officer will be running his mouth like pipe-line.even me an ordinary civilian can;t give vital information like that.anyway she did a good work by retrieving that infor from the officer. 1 Like |
Re: Accidental Victim by eunisam: 9:55pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
most of the time we do what we do without knowing the implication of it. Rich4god: |
Re: Accidental Victim by eunisam: 9:58pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
Dioxidane:Dioxidane Dioxidane Dioxidane Dioxidane You have called me back to literature section by opening this story.I like it pls ride on |
Re: Accidental Victim by bronich: 10:07pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
Dioxidane: |
Re: Accidental Victim by zimoni(f): 10:37pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
Mr Daniel is nothing but a puzzi. The Sup should have given them fake name and different gender(female). What an interesting story, this story would make an interestibg movie if shot into movie. Let me call The Mama of Nairaland to help us move this story to Literature Section. Ishilove Mama, ejorr please move this story to the Literature Section. The OP has changed his mind. Thanks Ma'am. Dioxidane, you are The Man. Would love to meet you someday. Still, I follow patiently. 2 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Accidental Victim by Hawlahscho(m): 10:38pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
bronich:You quoted the long update This is why they banned gabazin080 on Onihaxy's thread Try this one more time and experience what is called [size=35pt]ban[/size] 1 Like |
Re: Accidental Victim by Nobody: 10:47pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
Babe tracking mode |
Re: Accidental Victim by Nobody: 11:25pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
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Re: Accidental Victim by SexySapphire(f): 11:42pm On Jul 26, 2015 |
How could Mr Daniel be so stupid and gullible? Imagine how he just blew up a covert mission by being so careless with his talk. Poor Mustapha's underground works just went down the drain and his life is even at a risk now. I'm so mad at Daniel. Good job Dioxidane. At least this story will continually bring me to the lit section that has gone cold for a while now. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Accidental Victim by Onemansquad(m): 8:38am On Jul 27, 2015 |
seunmsg:and that is the problem we have wit our security agents even in 9ja here ''deceit and lack of intelligence'' |
Re: Accidental Victim by Onemansquad(m): 8:41am On Jul 27, 2015 |
dioxidane u need to change some plots in this your story cox it's jst like u ar narrating what we are facing in nigeria presently |
Re: Accidental Victim by Joenyam(m): 10:47am On Jul 27, 2015 |
Meenah15: May God protect u and all of us!! |
Re: Accidental Victim by Rich4god(m): 12:00pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
eunisam:This man at his level should know that even if he coughs, it has an implication. The man shld hv smelt something fishy immediately Staci asked for the name of the under cover agent.... 1 Like |
Re: Accidental Victim by Hawlahscho(m): 12:41pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
Rich4god: even me suspected 1 Like |
Re: Accidental Victim by Niwdog(m): 3:00pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
I just hope they have many mustafars in the taliban camp..
.Coker is embarking on a wasteful journey |
Re: Accidental Victim by virtuedagirl(f): 6:12pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
Dioxidane Wow! wat a beautiful story u've got here. More inspiraton& plenty mb to ur phone, pls sir keep d updates coming.. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Accidental Victim by Dioxidane: 6:37pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
Chapter Eleven Deep within the Taliban camp, Mustapha Danladi was worried. He sat in the dining stall but he lost his appetite due to the events he feared were about to occur. Several hours before, the video had been transmitted and he wondered the kind of uproar it would have generated. So many thoughts ran through his head as he slowly tried to munch the food in his mouth. "What if the government doesn't bulge in releasing the prisoners?..." "Would the hostages really be beheaded?..." "They obviously must have seen the video..." "What plans are they making?..." "Would there be any rescue operation?..." "The charade of these terrorists have continued for far too long..." "It has to stop!" 'I need to know what they are doing about this!', he muttered as he stamped his fists on the table in front of him. He was shocked at the noise it made and he looked around to see if anyone noticed. He saw some men clustered in groups, some eating, some laughing at jokes being told and some polishing their weapons. He was unnoticed. He was alone. He got up, picked up the rifle he placed on the table earlier and went out of the stall into the sun. The sun was biting really hard, so he squinted his eyes and adjusted his turban to prevent the sun from touching some parts of his face. He looked around and noticed everyone was going about their normal activities. No one noticed him. He saw some men passing by with their rifles slung around their shoulders and he greeted them. They responded and continued their way. It was midday and it was time for a change in shift. The men who were on morning duty were being replaced by those on afternoon duty. He was on night duty so he was free to do whatever he liked till it was night, except of course if there was an attack or any other emergency arose. Mustapha walked some paces towards the end of the northern part of the clearing in the forest. He stopped to look behind him several times to know if anyone was following him. No one noticed. No one even cared. At least not until they were ordered to. When he got to the end of the clearing which led to the path where he hid his box, he looked behind him to check if anyone concentrated their gaze on him. No one did. But he didn't want to take chances, so he slung his rifle over his shoulder and made the act of loosing the rope of his trousers. He looked behind him, but no one still cared so he went into the forest with the thought that anyone who caught sight of him might think he was going to respond to the call of nature. The marks he made on the trees leading to his hideout were made more visible only to him by the penetrating rays of sunlight through the top of the trees into the forest and it made locating the point easier. But he still didn't want to take any chances. After walking several paces, he bent down behind some shrubs, pretending he was taking a leak, while still looking around to know if anyone was watching or following him. He didn't see anyone so he got up and continued on his way. When he got to the tree, he scanned around to see if anyone followed. He was satisfied no one did, so he crouched and moved the dry leaves he used in covering the small box containing the device. He opened the box, connected the device to the phone and pressed a button. He waited for several seconds before he heard a voice. 'Mustapha Danladi', the voice said. He was shocked! That was not his handler's voice and he had never spoken to anyone except him. 'What the hell is happening?', he thought. 'Who is this?', he asked with frown on his face. "This is Superintendent Ridwan. I'm sure you must have heard about me..." "Yes sir..." "You are on with Col. Coker, the DG of the State Security Services... What's the situation over there?" "The situation here is dicey sir. I'm sure you must have seen the video." "Yes we have. In fact we are currently in Mangali prepping for an incursion before the deadline." "You are in Mangali right now?" "Yes we are. How's the security situation over there? Vulnerable?" "Can't say for now sir. Would have to carry out feasibility studies of all security stations to determine exact points of vulnerability." "Noted. How are the hostages?" "They were still holding up the last time I saw them..." "Did you identify with them?" "I did with the male..." "Ok. Do all you can to make sure they are safe no matter what." "I understand sir..." "When do we hope to get the report?" "In two hours sir..." "Two hours? Make it an hour thirty minutes..." "I'll do my best sir..." Suddenly Mustapha heard a rustle of leaves behind him. He looked back and he was shocked.... 7 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Accidental Victim by guntranno(f): 7:07pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
Oh FTC 2 Likes |
Re: Accidental Victim by Nobody: 7:14pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
This is a great story bro, it reminds me of 24. 1 Like |
Re: Accidental Victim by Hawlahscho(m): 7:26pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
Dioxidane: Yeh! iku de !!! 3 Likes |
Re: Accidental Victim by Mekky05(m): 7:57pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
Damn! Mustapha has been made. All thanks to Mr Daniels "covert" Secretary,Staci samuels. Dioxidane,keep it coming bro. 1 Like |
Re: Accidental Victim by onuwaje(m): 8:09pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
Am fearing... |
Re: Accidental Victim by Nobody: 8:21pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
this your girlfriend make sense oo@ur profile pix#lol. |
Re: Accidental Victim by Mickeysho(m): 8:22pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
OP, am waiting anxious. |
Re: Accidental Victim by Hawlahscho(m): 8:27pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
Re: Accidental Victim by Dioxidane: 8:32pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
So sorry ladies, guys, something just came up... Wouldn't be able to drop more updates tonight. Would continue tomorrow... Goodnight. @Merikims, **clears throat** she's not my girl friend... I'm not even her friend, yet... Still hoping to be... |
Re: Accidental Victim by Nobody: 8:36pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
Dioxidane:lol I guess u are just colleagues with benefit of taking pix. |
Re: Accidental Victim by nastyd(m): 9:45pm On Jul 27, 2015 |
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