Good day everyone. I have always had a thing for song writing but have never done any before this one. Free to correct me. Lets go

It's titled suicide,written from a real life experience


Verse1
Oooh Oooh yeah
We've been fighting for too long
Like soldiers at war
We burnt bridges
And we've broken down walls
Now almost everything is gone
With my hands in the sky
Raising a white flag high
Don't wanna fight anymore
You can have it all

Chorus;
But if they ask you
How we ended
Look them straight in the eye
please don't tell a lie
Tell them it was suicide
You killed me and you died
Nobody survived,nobody left alive
It was suicide... Oooh suicide

Verse2
How did we get from that to this
We used to love,hug and kiss
You were the rhythm my heart sings
They say the devil you already know
Is better than the angel you don't know
But you're the devil I already know
Wish you were the angel I don't know
Won't fight anymore
You can have it all


Chorus;
But if they ask you
How we ended
Look them straight in the eye
please don't tell a lie
Tell them it was suicide
You killed me and you died
Nobody survived,nobody left alive
It was suicide... Oooh suicide