Arinze The village boy


Arinze woke up with a splitting headache. His mouth felt sore and coated with repulsive tasteless material. His entire being felt terrible. Several weights was tied to his body and fixed to the bed. The sunlight stung his eyes, so he kept them shot against the sunlight; against the thuds of ache in his head. His stomach was sown with thistles of wild oats. For a long time he lay supine, making little effort to arrest the dizziness in his head. Finally, he forced his body to obey him. He swung his feet violently off the bed and immediately fell back to the bed clutching his head with both hands. He lay motionless for a time, then more slowly, he lifted his legs off the bed, all the while, holding his head with his palms. Every joints in his body ached, but he................ Continue Reading by clicking on the link below:
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Hahahahahaha, op, there is no way you are gonna attract traffic to your site. You know why? Becos on the first place you are doing a very bad job, the story is nt even thrilling, no intrique,no suspense, all you want is for that link to be click, secondly,your story is not well polished so no point wasting my data, you ought to work harder... I pray make i even click that link o.

Jollyjoy:
Hahahahahaha, op, there is no way you are gonna attract traffic to your site. You know why? Becos on the first place you are doing a very bad job, the story is nt even thrilling, no intrique,no suspense, all you want is for that link to be click, secondly,your story is not well polished so no point wasting my data, you ought to work harder... I pray make i even click that link o.

With all due respect, this isn't the nicest comment to make.
I agree it's too early to put up a link, you know why? Because we don't know where the plot is going yet, but the op's descriptions and diction were on point, but your comment goes along way in dampening his/her spirit.