I passed through the veil of forgetfulness, isn't ignorance bliss to behold...

Brainstorms weathered my spheres cerebral, dementia came with it hold, just to lack understanding, the story had to be retold...

That what it feels like when the writer's head on the block, guillotine swift with beheading, only for half a job done, against the clock....

Blood trickled down a lot, the damn head still attached, ain't a clean death to steer, better clear wipe the cache....

Frustrated with the executioner,
I strangled him within the hood,
sacked him on the spot, and forced the guillotine down on wood...

I'm merciful this mind block needed an end, just like a story has an intro, I used the body' as parts to send...

The conclusion' became apparent I was getting ripped off by the hem, left on the out-skirts dishevelled, violated by the pen....

Enslaved by this system of mental fluctuation, left my mind in a coma' it was speechless punctuation..

nice one adanna. . .cn i still drop a rap freestyle here?
#YOLO

richommie:
nice one adanna. . .cn i still drop a rap freestyle here?

#YOLO

Rap freestyle is for the rap section bro.

@Adanna28 Bloody! And too much gore. Death is always an easy feat for the hang man.

joseph1832:
Rap freestyle is for the rap section bro.

@Adanna28 Bloody! And too much gore. Death is always an easy feat for the hang man.

It twas thee season LOL

richommie:
nice one adanna. . .cn i still drop a rap freestyle here?

#YOLO

Joseph answered that dear, guess we have to abide by the rules. I personally dont mind, but I'm still a newbie on nairaland.

Thank you by the way.

Adanna28:


It twas thee season LOL

The season? Season of death, blood and gore? Wow!.

joseph1832:
The season? Season of death, blood and gore? Wow!.

Nice write up dear.I know a good writer when I see one.Señorita bien hecho.

goodheart02:
Nice write up dear.I know a good writer when I see one.Señorita bien hecho.

Thank you dear

Adanna28:

Thank you dear

You're welcome.

Ada this is for u. Sent it thru ur email but I feel uv not gotten it. Get well soon..


Everything is Nothing Without U(Modified Version)

Some people want diamonds
some cherish gold
some want expensive rubies
others want everything
but everything is nothing if I don't have u

After d rain comes d sunshine
d sun ushers in d sweet colours of d rainbow
which represents beauty
sometimes patience and sometimes love
the beauty of winter is not just about d heat from fire place
but every word that represents u
and every inch closer to u
everything is nothing without u

Ur sweet smile
ur charming eyes
ur sweet cherry looking lips
makes my heart melt like hot wax
words indeed cannot express how u make me feel
all d money in d world is worthless without u
Indeed, everything is nothing without u..

dukeolumde:
Ada this is for u. Sent it thru ur email but I feel uv not gotten it. Get well soon..


Everything is Nothing Without U(Modified Version)

Some people want diamonds
some cherish gold
some want expensive rubies
others want everything
but everything is nothing if I don't have u

After d rain comes d sunshine
d sun ushers in d sweet colours of d rainbow
which represents beauty
sometimes patience and sometimes love
the beauty of winter is not just about d heat from fire place
but every word that represents u
and every inch closer to u
everything is nothing without u

Ur sweet smile
ur charming eyes
ur sweet cherry looking lips
makes my heart melt like hot wax
words indeed cannot express how u make me feel
all d money in d world is worthless without u
Indeed, everything is nothing without u..

I don't know why I didn't see the notification for this sooner I'm deeply touched...

DukeOlumde thank you very much, I love it die!

Adanna28:


I don't know why I didn't see the notification for this sooner I'm deeply touched...

DukeOlumde thank you very much, I love it die!

Like seriously, were you sick? I saw the "get well soon" by the poet above.Hope you're good now?

Adanna28:


I don't know why I didn't see the notification for this sooner I'm deeply touched...

DukeOlumde thank you very much, I love it die!

Am glad u love it. Ur 1 in a Billion..

dukeolumde:



Am glad u love it. Ur 1 in a Billion..

So are you!

goodheart02:




Like seriously, were you sick? I saw the "get well soon" by the poet above.Hope you're good now?

So caring Thank you dear I'm still a bit sick but it nothing serious. How far dear? E don tey.

Adanna28:


So caring Thank you dear I'm still a bit sick but it nothing serious. How far dear? E don tey.

Sorry dearie.....Get well soon.Anyway, I dey fine.True true e don tey oo.

Please did you write this?

Adanna28:
I passed through the veil of forgetfulness, isn't ignorance bliss to behold...

Brainstorms weathered my spheres cerebral, dementia came with it hold, just to lack understanding, the story had to be retold...

That what it feels like when the writer's head on the block, guillotine swift with beheading, only for half a job done, against the clock....

Blood trickled down a lot, the damn head still attached, ain't a clean death to steer, better clear wipe the cache....

Frustrated with the executioner,
I strangled him within the hood,
sacked him on the spot, and forced the guillotine down on wood...

I'm merciful this mind block needed an end, just like a story has an intro, I used the body' as parts to send...

The conclusion' became apparent I was getting ripped off by the hem, left on the out-skirts dishevelled, violated by the pen....

Enslaved by this system of mental fluctuation, left my mind in a coma' it was speechless punctuation..

dovetark:
Please did you write this?

Yes of course dear.