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. by LifeIsGuhd(f): 10:55pm On Aug 20, 2015
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Re: . by Intrepidone(m): 11:05pm On Aug 20, 2015
Nyc rhyme : pathetic and not sympathetic.
Good job keep it up
Re: . by LifeIsGuhd(f): 11:09pm On Aug 20, 2015
Intrepidone:
Nyc rhyme : pathetic and not sympathetic.
Good job keep it up
Thanks smiley
Re: . by joseph1832(m): 12:05pm On Aug 21, 2015
LifeIsGuhd:

Thanks smiley
Failed marriages and divorce are part of life. Nobody deserves to spend eternity being in a relationship that doesn't work any more.

Your poem is nice. The message is clear, but a little bit cryptic. Keep it up.
Re: . by LifeIsGuhd(f): 1:35pm On Aug 21, 2015
joseph1832:
Failed marriages and divorce are part of life. Nobody deserves to spend eternity being in a relationship that doesn't work any more.

Your poem is nice. The message is clear, but a little bit cryptic. Keep it up.

True @ Failed Marriages and thanks for your comment smiley
Re: . by joseph1832(m): 5:33pm On Aug 21, 2015
LifeIsGuhd:

True @ Failed Marriages and thanks for your comment smiley
You're welcome.
Re: . by llaykorn: 6:27pm On Aug 21, 2015
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Re: . by JibrilJunior: 8:36am On Sep 18, 2015
LifeIsGuhd:
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You removed your poem?
Re: . by LifeIsGuhd(f): 11:05am On Sep 18, 2015
JibrilJunior:


You removed your poem?

Yes lipsrsealed
Re: . by llaykorn: 11:38am On Sep 18, 2015
LifeIsGuhd:

Yes lipsrsealed
I have it in quotes. Should I edit it?
Re: . by LifeIsGuhd(f): 1:19pm On Sep 18, 2015
llaykorn:


I have it in quotes. Should I edit it?

Yes please smiley
Re: . by llaykorn: 2:01pm On Sep 18, 2015
LifeIsGuhd:

Yes please smiley
Done...

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