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Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by trippleKAY(m): 1:18am On Aug 24, 2015 |
blessedvisky:lolz who knw me ooo? Lemmi guess vicOfmoto? |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by blessedvisky(m): 1:20am On Aug 24, 2015 |
trippleKAY: Supreme's bro? Omo, this world is a small one oo. Internet to so aye dero!!! |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by trippleKAY(m): 1:22am On Aug 24, 2015 |
blessedvisky:ahhhhhhh! So u sef b costumer 4 here? Chaii nawa ooo , so ure d 1 always making trouble vic? I hail thee oo |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by blessedvisky(m): 1:25am On Aug 24, 2015 |
trippleKAY: Me ke! Trouble maker?? I be gentle boy oo!! I be Seun's customer oooo . He be like say Na jazz he use tie me for here |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by trippleKAY(m): 1:38am On Aug 24, 2015 |
blessedvisky:guy d jazz na currect 1 ooo, in an hour I fit enter here 1000 times lolz. Nd yesterday was year NL birthday ooo |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by fizziea(m): 1:49am On Aug 24, 2015 |
seriously dahz love not lust
anyway nyc write up |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by Nobody: 2:22am On Aug 24, 2015 |
Nice & short, just the way we want it served. Not all those one update per month writers. |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by siddymight: 3:25am On Aug 24, 2015 |
this is the best Article I have read in years. Thank you for making the moment a great one! |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by zicoraads: 4:32am On Aug 24, 2015 |
This was sweet. I woke up and decided to check out nairaland before sleeping back a bit. This story just made it impossible. A very short, nice piece. If it were true, I would have called the guy a dumbass. But then who am I to judge? 1 Like |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by zicoraads: 4:35am On Aug 24, 2015 |
Quick question though, why did his mom think he was under a spell because he was seeing a Kogi girl? My mom also made the same assertion some months back. Are Kogi girls diabolical?? 1 Like |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by Oyecute(m): 6:37am On Aug 24, 2015 |
Popflair:@op, sorry for saying this, make thunder fire ur left yansh. U con comment now sey u dey share anoda person's story ni. Wen e don mak some people cry already. anyway, nice write-up once again. |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by mya1: 8:22am On Aug 24, 2015 |
Very touching story. As opposed to many people's opinion though, it's not an easy decision to make. Of course, we can all conveniently say " I'd have picked Tope" but in reality, I can bet many would be stuck. Think about it... Ella had done absolutely wrong, she was a very good woman in her right too. He was already engaged to be married to her. In fact a date had been fixed and he cared deeply for her also. So how easy would letting all of that go? In the case of Tope, I get why the writer felt it was lust and not love. He did care for Tope but wasn't actually in love with her. If he ever genuinely loved Tope, he would have made an attempt to reach out upon his arrival in the country. Besides, he had no long term plans for her while leaving Kogi. He was caught up in the moment with her, he saw someone that had and expressed interest in him and got struck by that. His love for Tope was never genuine. |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by moski5(m): 9:15am On Aug 24, 2015 |
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Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by moski5(m): 9:15am On Aug 24, 2015 |
mya1: I feel its love he didnt have plans cos she was 16 I was surprised she didnt reach him sooner yu know he had no way 2 reach her saying he didnt sleep with Ella is surprising |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by Kenzico(m): 10:31am On Aug 24, 2015 |
Did this truly happened! Am intrigued with this piece! Its a true love story. OP u made ur best decision...Never you regret |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by Abbey2sam(m): 10:42am On Aug 24, 2015 |
Bro you've got some serious talent I almost cry, you can imagine |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by gozzlin: 10:45am On Aug 24, 2015 |
I hate the ending. He could have married Tope and be happier in life. Anyways, maybe the story hasn't ended. |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by Popflair(m): 12:00pm On Aug 24, 2015 |
Oyecute:lol...make thunder from ur villa fire ur left ball, re-read it from the beginning and u will see it there....it aint mine |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by golddeejay(m): 1:27pm On Aug 24, 2015 |
Adaeze003:I believe creative writing should not be hindered by sentiments like moral. He is trying making a fiction look real, which it is one of the point of writing fiction. S.ex is part of real life situation and there will be a lot of holes in dat story if the se.xual actions were left out. That is why creative stuffs are rated, maybe he should have rated it 18. I only have issue with writers putting s.ex actions in their stories when it could completely left and would not take anyth away from the story. @ op, nice piece of work. |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by Nobody: 1:34pm On Aug 24, 2015 |
Hmm im so touched |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by Swissheart(f): 1:35pm On Aug 24, 2015 |
Oh Myyyyy......wow.....I kinda lyk d Tope character...... |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by Abayor7: 1:53pm On Aug 24, 2015 |
Jwhizzy:. U didn't even read the story from the begining, he told us it wasn't his story but would like us to learn from it. |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by Adaeze003(f): 2:16pm On Aug 24, 2015 |
golddeejay: Leaving out the details wouldn't take anything away from the story... buh then, that's my opinion, I'm not going to argue. |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by golddeejay(m): 2:41pm On Aug 24, 2015 |
Adaeze003:and I sure respect ur opinion, though I don't agree with it. I don't argue also. |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by anelta(f): 2:42pm On Aug 24, 2015 |
Cheers to the originator of this story and thanks to the Op for promoting the story....nice write up. What Thomas had for Tope might have been lust buh maybe Tope really loved him... |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by ladygudhead(f): 2:58pm On Aug 24, 2015 |
very touching and am almost in tears. I wonder how can someone live the rest of their life with somebody they don't love. u see Wat a silly mistake of not using protection had caused, being carried away by pleasure. o God may my future husband not make such mistake waiting for me. But ur story has not ended oo.wen its time to claim daddy's property am sure it will continue, but dat time with another writer. am waiting till then. |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by nervorum: 4:10pm On Aug 24, 2015 |
Popflair: Well done!! You made my day. Great story. One of the finest i have read in an insanity-infested forum. Read all through, every single line, for the first time. Well done again. |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by nervorum: 4:21pm On Aug 24, 2015 |
Popflair: What is 'true love' between a man and a woman without lust. What happened between you two was not a mistake, and was not lust, in my view. You love Tope genuinely. You can learn to love Ella but not a fraction as much as you do Tope, and you would live every day of your life knowing this, and being tormented by this consciousness. Nothing Ella would do can reset you, as long as Tope is still alive. If i was Ella, i would break the relationship with you except i would be content with having a 'bit' of you. Gosh. Life can be complicated. Ps: this me addressing the writer not the op. I believe this is fictional thgh |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by tonero230(m): 5:37pm On Aug 24, 2015 |
Popflair: How did you finally get the condomm you used to pop her cherry |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by Ghost01(m): 5:43pm On Aug 24, 2015 |
Lovely! Just lovely!! Haven't enjoyed a story this long on NL in a while. Thanks, OP. |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by Stellaenefa(f): 6:44pm On Aug 24, 2015 |
zicoraads: A friend of mine wanted to marry a kogi girl. His first visit to the girls family house, he realised her father was a native doctor. End of love story. He broke up with her. |
Re: Love Story: I Wish I Had Held Back ( Very Touching) by Donemc(m): 7:01pm On Aug 24, 2015 |
You just made me starting reflexn on my life |
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