sinizia:
Perreia should never replace Memphis on the wing no matter how poor Memphis is. Memphis was 100% better than Perreria. He came in and killed that wing. No speed, skill or intensity to match Young or Memphis at all. Bad sub!!
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llaykorn:
To the Pastors in the house:

Where in the bible, can we find the songs o' Solomon in/ thanks, bro, Mathew Chapter 4 to John three/ and where can we find Moses river crossing/ Daniel Chapter 8 to Job six/ hehe, the way I 'came with bible verses'....shows I'm here to 'destroy Sin'

First, Deaconess Gladyys trampled o'er Sin, she was born again/ then faithful brother Lay left the innards of Sin torn away/ it's amazing how much the church did to end Sin's vicious reign....like he was science in Newton's age...

Someone's gonna regret ever slighting Corn/ cos I have all weapons ready to fight this scum/ Folks wonder why I used haste in sharpening swords/ it's cos I need Sin maimed by this dawn/ so even if he were the 'tallest man in Biafra-land', he still wouldn't see 'the rising sun'....

We knew that Sin was fake when he claimed to be Hitler kid/ he's Badoo Omo Mushin while I'm Killer Bean/ Like Jericho walls his rhymes fall off when they see armies/ see, Lay is here; his rhymes won't be in United State...if they were the Statue Of Liberty...

I'm pitilessly spilling your gravest secret, Sinizia!



Why was he jilted by his lover/ the girl couldn't take it when she discover/ that he's a Man-U Stan, he self-services at pictures of Reds' ballers/ he changed his name to Memphis, but kid black like Drogba/ so he couldn't get Deepay....like Osun state workers..

*the pay

Sin can pretend to us that he rides in cool car/ but all his rants don't faze me like he's toddler/ you can shout all you want Sin/ you can brag all you want, but you 'can't shake me'.....like 'women in burqa'!

Don't beg me Sin, it's too late, sir/ I brought bars flammable; so Lay will raze ya/ Daggers sharp enough; so Lay will slay ya/ but I go shook am with safety pin first to hear 'Sin gap awww'....like we battled in Asia..

*Singapore

Sinizia, I swear your stay no dey Rap music/ you should be doing backup for Fatai Rolling Dollar or singing Fuji/ but if news reach you say 'sin is star'...then topic must be an 'American horror movie'

He'll call me Daddy when I beat the fool/ My punches too fast he can't see the hook/ wait, let Sin count while I hit the crook/ But I'll swing so fast you'll lose a'count....like the vet who bet on Elmax to beat the Coog

No one should feel mercy for Sin, it's typical/ Lay was an agbofinro and Sin was a criminal/ This is how Lay Corn put an end to sin...like the second coming of Christ was digital
Hello,
This is how Lay 'compute' an end to sin...like the second coming of Christ was 'digital'

captainflash:
smh! yeye match..

liricyst:


who got which crit was obvious.....nice brawl. Me sef dey take notes. Sini.zia please lock down the rhyming art...it would really help you. You had the greater ideas but llay.korn looked more polished.

obainojazz:
Since its clear its a tie...lemme state this I noticed in sinizia's opener.... Since were going to use "Reason his plants couldn't bear fruits
was coz like a dickless farmer. . . He couldn't lay
corn/" as your final punch.....you should have rhymed to connect with it...not husbandry...den lay corn....it killed d flow...nice one...crazy concept

GIYAZZ:




Personals - 1 point Null (Didn't feel both. If you wanna do personals, you dig up your opponent's dirt and bring something fresh that can sting. Personals are punchlines that touch the heart )

Opener - 1 point llaykorn (Though nice ideas from both sides. But llaykorn triumphed because he was consistent with the rhymes. While Sinizia at the other hand destroyed his opener with his weak rhymes. A bar shouldn't come with two different rhyme schemes. If you wanna do "coming" you should flow with rhymes like "popping" "jugging" "shocking" etc . . . You don't just switch and bring something like "biscuit" to the table, It'd ffuck up your rhymes. Unless you're doing double rhyming like popping/ more cash/ ffucking/ your ass/ . . . . Get it?

Rhymes - 2 points llaykorn (I give this to llaykorn not because he was perfect. But he was more consistent and polished compared to his opponent. They both had fall outs, but Sinizia's was more noticeable. Y'all got some work to do here o)

Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points Sinizia (He brang more to the table. But llaykorn brang some nice similes though. That 'shake me' line was nice.)

Punchlines - 3 points TIE (Punchlines aplenty. All they lacked were rhymes, build-ups and the right words to finish work. Sinizia and llaykorn. Y'all know about ebonics? Sometimes you gasto scrap the big grammars, correct english and sound like a street ninja. Rap battling requires street-knowledge, wittiness and book knowledge. Put all this in a script and your punchlines will sound sleek.)

Flow - 1 point llaykorn (Sinizia, stop stop stop! Just stop with the stretching!! You are not learning right at all!! If you keep stretching like that, you will lose battles through out your stay here! That sshit ain't cool at all.)

Wordplays - 2 points Null (Like Max said: "Wonky wordplays"

Closer - 1 point Null (Didn't feel both. Two wonky wordplays.)

That's llaykorn 4 Sinizia 2

MVGT: llaykorn


PS: llaykorn: work on your choice of words, filter your ideas, work on your build-ups and do a little fine-tuning on your rhymes and you are on your way.

Sinizia: COMPRESS YOUR LINES, work on your choice of words, work on your rhymes, filter your ideas, work on your build-ups and you are on your way.

#Peace