ALL ALONE

All alone I wait,
All alone I lay,
All alone I cry,
In my room without none,
Thinking of nothing, but you.

All I can hear is the cock,
Alarming me of dawn,
For prayer to not let my faith down,
To fathom my grievances.

Sigh! That's how my heart was,
When I suddenly formed your image,
but clearly in reality,
You're still not here,
But forever, I'll be here,
Waiting all alone.

Ycmia, this is a very cool piece. Extremely simple, and yet extremely striking. Good job!

Have you thought about punctuating your poetry just like you would punctuate your prose?

Ilaykorn..thnks a lot, n for d observation I'll try and work on it...thnks once more!!!

Ycmia:
Ilaykorn..thnks a lot, n for d observation I'll try and work on it...thnks once more!!!

Welcome, bro.