Don't Give Up - Poems For Review - Nairaland
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| Don't Give Up by Laveda(f): 8:12am On Nov 01, 2015 |
Life is not smooth sailing With bells always ringing It has its ups and downs And it smiles and frowns Not all days are sunny and bright Few things are achieved overnight To attain what is good and right You need to struggle with your might When things turn out wrong Don't think all is gone When things become rough Its time you turn tough There is no success without failure Hardship and pain you have to endure When you fall or get hit DO NOT GIVE UP OR QUIT  15 Likes 9 Shares |
| Re: Don't Give Up by danbrowndmf(m): 10:51am On Nov 01, 2015 |
It as if your talking to me, there is something am about giving up on,earlier on... Thanks though,nice poem.  2 Likes |
| Re: Don't Give Up by 2dice(m): 12:54pm On Nov 01, 2015 |
Hmnn...how do I get here?  |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Laveda(f): 2:26pm On Nov 01, 2015 |
2dice:  1 Like 2 Shares |
| Re: Don't Give Up by 2dice(m): 2:49pm On Nov 01, 2015 |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Laveda(f): 7:18pm On Nov 01, 2015 |
2dice:Hmm Thanks anyways. . 1 Like |
| Re: Don't Give Up by noble4d(m): 8:13pm On Nov 05, 2015 |
Laveda:Keep on writing them Sis, thumbs up 1 Like |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Laveda(f): 8:15pm On Nov 05, 2015 |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Nobody: 5:51am On Nov 07, 2015 |
I think people have mistaken poetry for ryhmes . 3 Likes |
| Re: Don't Give Up by oscarlloyd(m): 11:17am On Nov 09, 2015 |
TheAgba:and what's the beauty of poetry without rhymes |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Nobody: 4:46pm On Nov 09, 2015 |
oscarlloyd:You just made what I stated earlier on more obvious . 1 Like |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Lovechyld101(m): 12:18am On Nov 11, 2015 |
Laveda:What ever rocks your boat hun am ready to sail thru for u. Laveda *winks* |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Laveda(f): 6:10am On Nov 11, 2015 |
Lovechyld101:lol thank you. . Goodmorning. |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Lovechyld101(m): 9:19am On Nov 11, 2015 |
Laveda:My pleasure !! Top of the morning 2u hun ... Hav u any new write up . |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Laveda(f): 11:27am On Nov 11, 2015 |
Lovechyld101:Yeah, maybe I should post before the week runs out.. How you? |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Lovechyld101(m): 7:45pm On Nov 11, 2015 |
Laveda:hmmm am subscribing then, I actually had a nice time today and you !! Wonder what give's you inspiration to write all this stuff. |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Laveda(f): 8:03pm On Nov 11, 2015 |
Lovechyld101:My day was great! Inspiration? I aint really into it though, yeah but I write it with things that happens around around me 1 Like |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Lovechyld101(m): 11:09am On Nov 12, 2015 |
Laveda: Thur 12 Nov 2015. Hello diary ,Hi Laveda. well I write leisurely too but mine is more of imaginative writing. aside that I like to just have good time's with friends. I also enjoy eating out good food I like cooking too and finally some good music. See my life ain't so difficult. So do we have anything in common ?? Write me a little about u. |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Tolulove26: 11:20am On Nov 12, 2015 |
To all my lovly brothers and sisters, atlast i made it, my song is out,Titled ejakajo, pls download and help me share it to ur loved ones, God bless u all. One love http://www.datafilehost.com/d/fa3d7638 |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Laveda(f): 12:22pm On Nov 12, 2015 |
Lovechyld101:Yeah, the we have, the music aspect. . Anyways, lol I just love being myself,writing and chatting when I'm bored, yeah hanging out with friends but not always, its done once in a while, I'm more of an indoor person. . Lol |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Lovechyld101(m): 10:12pm On Nov 12, 2015 |
Laveda: Well am trilled its quite as I expected. as opposed to you am an outdoor enthusiast I feel like I'm caged being indoors. hope u had a swell time today ? . |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Laveda(f): 10:25pm On Nov 12, 2015 |
Lovechyld101:lol...my day was great, yours? |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Lovechyld101(m): 12:19am On Nov 13, 2015 |
Laveda: Well can't complain its nice just reading posts on here can we rendezvous somewhere else away from the public lol would need ur email or pin. |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Laveda(f): 12:36am On Nov 13, 2015 |
Lovechyld101:Not yet  I just checked your profile now, nice pic. |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Lovechyld101(m): 1:04am On Nov 13, 2015 |
Laveda: *smiles* l0ol Laveda u never sleep anyways can't seem to ask personal/direct question down here just keen on getting intimated with u on a more personal note Hmmm thanks you look waaay nicer ur front view thou |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Laveda(f): 6:23am On Nov 13, 2015 |
Lovechyld101:hehe question? Like you got them enough?lol thanks, lol what's it with my front? Lol Good morning |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Lovechyld101(m): 5:19pm On Nov 14, 2015 |
Laveda: *smiles* lol ur front side bad can make any bobby Fan go mad !!Let's chat now Laveda privately ! Besides how's ur weekend going ?? |
| Re: Don't Give Up by Laveda(f): 5:33pm On Nov 14, 2015 |
Lovechyld101:cool. Can you mention me somewhere else? Don't want my thread totally derailed. |
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