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Re: Waiting . . . by MrCrackles(m): 11:41pm On May 15, 2009

St☆rStruck:

I know how Sauron writes and that is definitely his work.

Continue wallowing in tank full of moronic juices grin

Re: Waiting . . . by MrCrackles(m): 11:42pm On May 15, 2009

TOPE2000!:

I have verified it. . . . . .the poem is sauron's original
dont hate

Me hate? Sauron is my brethren and i know he didnt write that shit!

Kid yourself, oxymoron! grin

Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 11:42pm On May 15, 2009

stillwater:

My long dead hormones are suddenly alive.

Which of them?
Adrenalin or Oestrogen? wink

I will be chuffed if it's the latter.
It seems a nun is about to commit. grin

TOPE2000!:

WoW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sauron just got me HOT N WET . . . . . . . .

Please discuss. cheesy

St☆rStruck:

YES!!!! You've given all I needed today!

Thank ya.

Alright now

Be patient. wink

Re: Waiting . . . by TOPE20001(f): 11:45pm On May 15, 2009

MrCrackles:

Me hate? Sauron is my brethren and i know he didnt write that shit!

Kid yourself, oxymoron!

Yes he did cool

~Sauron~:

Please discuss.

Its better if i show u. . . .words cant describe it cheesy

@starstruck
Honey stop kidding urself. . . . boy is mine cheesy

Re: Waiting . . . by MrCrackles(m): 11:46pm On May 15, 2009

TOPE2000!:

Its better if i show u. . . .words cant desvribe it

Holly Molly? shocked

Re: Waiting . . . by StrStruck(f): 11:48pm On May 15, 2009

Will you be saying that after you see him "dripping with our love"?

I've got evidence

Re: Waiting . . . by TOPE20001(f): 11:49pm On May 15, 2009

MrCrackles:

Holly Molly?

Are u a virgin? grin

@starstruck
I will wait tell sauron break the news to u himself. . . . . . .we r having a baby tongue

Re: Waiting . . . by Nobody: 11:49pm On May 15, 2009

~Sauron~:

Which of them?
Adrenalin or Oestrogen?
I will be chuffed if it's the latter.
It seems a nun is about to commit.

Commit what? shocked

Please o Father Francis would be disappointed. tongue

_{*recites the lord's prayer*} tongue

Re: Waiting . . . by StrStruck(f): 11:51pm On May 15, 2009

TOPE2000!:

@starstruck
I will wait tell sauron break the news to u himself. . . . . . .we r having a baby

Congratulations to you and Sweet T lol. Hopefully the kid occupy him long enough for him to keep his eyes and mind off me.

Re: Waiting . . . by MrCrackles(m): 11:52pm On May 15, 2009

TOPE2000!:

Are u a virgin?

E no go better for your landlord tongue

Topic

Waiting for what?

Keep waiting till thy kingdom come! grin

Re: Waiting . . . by TOPE20001(f): 11:55pm On May 15, 2009

St☆rStruck:

Congratulations to you and Sweet T lol. Hopefully the kid occupy him long enough for him to keep his eyes and mind off me.

tee hee hee. . . . u r still in denial dear cheesy

u n sweet T belong together n sauron n i belong together tongue

MrCrackles:

[font=Lucida Sans Unicode]E no go better for your landlord

ROTLMAO

Re: Waiting . . . by Nobody: 11:57pm On May 15, 2009

MrCrackles:

E no go better for your landlord

Topic

Waiting for what?

Keep waiting till thy kingdom come!

I'm very patient, Mr. Crackles.

Re: Waiting . . . by StrStruck(f): 12:03am On May 16, 2009

Stephen better put up a new poem cuz I can feel myself drifting. . .

TOPE2000!:

tee hee hee. . . . u r still in denial dear
u n sweet T belong together n sauron n i belong together

lol

Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 12:07am On May 16, 2009

stillwater:

Commit what? Please o Father Francis would be disappointed. _{*recites the lord's prayer*}

The awakening of your hormones may trigger you to commit.
U know me number when u feel like popping the cherry . . . . . wink

TOPE2000!:

Its better if i show u. . . .words cant describe it

Show me what exactly.
Can u take pictures of it? tongue

Re: Waiting . . . by TOPE20001(f): 12:08am On May 16, 2009

~Sauron~:

Show me what exactly.
Can u take pictures of it?

Too explicit for the net grin

Re: Waiting . . . by Nobody: 12:18am On May 16, 2009

~Sauron~:

The awakening of your hormones may trigger you to commit.
U know me number when u feel like popping the cherry . . . . .

Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 12:30am On May 16, 2009

Continuation. . . . .
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
ELEMENTS OF DESIRE
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Fire(For Her)

Sweat winds down my skin, I’m dripping with our love
Droplets collect on my chin, licked off by your tongue
Our flames lick the sky, stretching up to the heavens
Worries evaporate, from the heat in our possession
The windows are steamed, concealing our desire
Your warmth calls to me, several logs in your fire
Bodies rubbing together, the friction is shocking
Our chemistry is electric, no signs of sparks stopping
Your face is flushed and waiting, hips gently swaying
Blush with anticipation, from the rush of copulation
The air is hot and humid, your curly hair flys
Boiling together fluids, i’m stirring your insides
We reach a feverish pace, prod the coals to ignite
Explore every devious place, every hole grips me tight
Your moans echo off me, burning impressions in the sheets
An orchestra of sounds, gasping screams and bed squeaks
One last final thrust, we both shudder in unison
You squeeze out every last ounce, as we reach the conclusion
Our bodies glimmer shadows flicker, innocence surrendered
The blaze allowed to simmer, down to glowing embers.

Water(For Him)

You run up to me, like a quiet river of love
Sweet words flowing, like rain droplets from above
Captivating me with those dark pools you call your eyes
It’s more than you realize how you leave me hypnotized
Your love so divine as you begin to part my sea
Sending waves of sensation as you touch and enter me
Holding my body as we engage in rhythmic motions
You are my safety net, drowning in orgasmic oceans
Exploring the depths of my deep, sweet abyss
Letting the liquids flow with one single kiss
We float up like buoys, down like sunken ships
Tasting the salts as they linger on my tender lips
You roll my hips east to west like the soft flowing wind
Your anchor sinking deeper, causing the very best of sin
Juices trickle down us and romance fills the air
Soaking my body with you, especially "right there"
Our bodies mix together into a solution of passion
Icy chills run up my spine as i fulfill my obsession
Lust seeping through, i scratch down your chest
Rubbing softly over your heart and all of the rest
Moving so swiftly on these rapids of desire
Decide to change pace and allow you to light my fire.

Re: Waiting . . . by Nobody: 12:37am On May 16, 2009

Hmm fire and water

Who knew the magic they could create when meshed together. grin

Sweet . . .

Re: Waiting . . . by TOPE20001(f): 12:38am On May 16, 2009

~Sauron~:

Water(For Him)

You run up to me, like a quiet river of love
Sweet words flowing, like rain droplets from above
Captivating me with those dark pools you call your eyes
It’s more than you realize how you leave me hypnotized
Your love so divine as you begin to part my sea
Sending waves of sensation as you touch and enter me
Holding my body as we engage in rhythmic motions
You are my safety net, drowning in orgasmic oceans
Exploring the depths of my deep, sweet abyss
Letting the liquids flow with one single kiss
We float up like buoys, down like sunken ships
Tasting the salts as they linger on my tender lips
You roll my hips east to west like the soft flowing wind
Your anchor sinking deeper, causing the very best of sin
Juices trickle down us and romance fills the air
Soaking my body with you, especially "right there"
Our bodies mix together into a solution of passion
Icy chills run up my spine as i fulfill my obsession
Lust seeping through, i scratch down your chest
Rubbing softly over your heart and all of the rest
Moving so swiftly on these rapids of desire
Decide to change pace and allow you to light my fire.

Goshhhhhhhh!!!!!!! shocked

*Fainted* Somebody help me, sauron is killin me hia kiss

Re: Waiting . . . by Sauron1: 12:41am On May 16, 2009

TOPE2000!:

Goshhhhhhhh!!!!!!!
*Fainted* Somebody help me, sauron is killin me hia

Tope2000, go and wear PAMPERS before your siblings see you wetting your bed.
U have been warned. grin

stillwater:

'

Hmm fire and water

Who knew the magic they could create when meshed together. Sweet . . .

Hissing sound. . . . . . .Xsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss kiss

Re: Waiting . . . by StrStruck(f): 12:41am On May 16, 2009

I'm thinking I have way too many clothes on

~Sauron~:

Water(For Him)

You run up to me, like a quiet river of love
Sweet words flowing, like rain droplets from above
Captivating me with those dark pools you call your eyes
It’s more than you realize how you leave me hypnotized
Your love so divine as you begin to part my sea
Sending waves of sensation as you touch and enter me
Holding my body as we engage in rhythmic motions
You are my safety net, drowning in orgasmic oceans
Exploring the depths of my deep, sweet abyss
Letting the liquids flow with one single kiss
We float up like buoys, down like sunken ships
Tasting the salts as they linger on my tender lips
You roll my hips east to west like the soft flowing wind
Your anchor sinking deeper, causing the very best of sin
Juices trickle down us and romance fills the air
Soaking my body with you, especially "right there"
Our bodies mix together into a solution of passion
Icy chills run up my spine as i fulfill my obsession
Lust seeping through, i scratch down your chest
Rubbing softly over your heart and all of the rest
Moving so swiftly on these rapids of desire
Decide to change pace and allow you to light my fire.

My favorite lines

Re: Waiting . . . by TOPE20001(f): 12:44am On May 16, 2009

St☆rStruck:

I'm thinking I have way too many clothes on

Rofl . . . . it is getting hawt in here cheesy

~Sauron~:

Tope2000, go and wear PAMPERS before your siblings see you wetting your bed.
U have been warned.

LOL . . . . This one is good wetness oh cheesy

Re: Waiting . . . by StrStruck(f): 1:00am On May 16, 2009

@Tope,

the truth is here: https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-271739.0.html

Re: Waiting . . . by bluespice(f): 1:25pm On May 18, 2009

hmmmmm

i find myself drifting like star. . . . tongue

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