No much bite just say how it goes  ! i mean what ya think  be a long time in here anyway.

Greeeennn! Nice colour combination.

Good!!!

If only the picture was a little more 'zoomed out'.

It took me a few seconds to recognize what it was.

Posters should always be easy to read in a few seconds, especially when you're advertising something that my life doesn't depend on.

I agree with Kemjisuper. i luv the green theme

Good one Buddie!

Hope we are still on our After Effect Stuff,
Holla ur man!

@smartsoft
Nice colors
@idygurl
Nice profile pic as well. hope dats you

solomon am online ooo i wan see you gan ni oo,  am online now lets chat man, this weekend oo make we run the after effect stuff

Send ur Yahoo Id and let's do it

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@ smartsoft, sincerely i like your color combo, but
concerning the PRAISE text i think next time you should
make it looking ARTISTIK as in the letter A or I should carry a
kind of moving element. some similar to this one below.
i dnt know if am makin any points.

just kip the good job up man,
thanks

well thanks for your input  but i must tell you there are rules when designing  don't know if you know those rules  anyway thnks

smartsoft, nice one but am not totally feeling that design. i think the green is too much.

see make i tell you Tech pros, if every1 likes anything you do i mean when u do something and every finks "wow nice i like it, and 100 % ppl love it and no one to say NO i don't like it, then there is something wrong. ppl will like and dislike even at my agency when we do a job to "WOW'' the client and every1 in the office seems to like it, you will be surprise that your so called client won't even like it all, they will say i don't like this curve part , i don't like this font and all that. so for your point well all good

yes, you are right smartsoft that is the way things works. i printed your design on paper and i noted two things

1. guy u like money too, abeg the money u get is enough . i like the concept of the ur UChe Ugo but i feel u should reduce the font abit

2.

A_K_O:

Good!!!

If only the picture was a little more 'zoomed out'.

It took me a few seconds to recognize what it was.

i think you move somethings abit so that the guy with the white teeth

@ smartsoft, yeah i know there are rules in design, but the rules work better on corporate designs not
on jazzy or crazy stuffs.

always ready to learn!!!

guys, apart from the rules, i think we all different concept of designing, like me i feel jobs more when they have fewer colors, for example, i feel the flier than the magazine cover, so we all have different views, so let us learn to pass our message more constructive and back it up with your reasons,

here is a job i did,

Good one bro, 1 more thing, what is the idea of this GOLF you use?

seriously what is the relation between golf and glo?
besides golf doesnt rule the world

@Aseye, If you don't have any good explanation towards the golf element you use, then your art direction is pretty wack ! seriously that's what Adenuga will ask you, if at all you wanna sell the AD to them.

smartsoft:

No much bite just say how it goes  ! i mean what ya think  be a long time in here anyway.

Smartsoft,  uve don a great job, although in designing we improve day by day so, i know dat next time you make another design d mistake u made on this will not repeat itself.

the adjustment i saw on your design is the way you slant all d text on dat artwork is not proportional so i think u will notice dat. then they way u scatter d text on the space its too much. but ur concept is nice keep it up.

Am also a graphic artist based in Dubai.

@smartsoft i reali dnt undastnd wht u mean but let me first address tin first, 'whack' is quite rude

and again dt design i did is a freestyle, especially when i'm just trying to build myself up and see how i can get better, and if there is a need for me to present to anybody there is always a concept behind my design which might not be known to u and incase u need to for the golf design i did as a freestyle but at d end i knew it could go for a golf competition sponsored by glo which i didnt ve details of, i just did it,

and man, i respect people alot but if u reali dnt need it then i will kip it to myself, enjoy urself,

and again guy, if i have d opportunity to face adenuga, trust me, he will fall in love with even a design have not done,

@ justbones why ask wht is d correlation btw glo and golf? can i ask u wht is d correlation btw mtn and football, the answer is sponsorship and company can decide to take up a game an be d official sponsor and again can i ask u the slogan of glo? if u dnt knw it is 'rule ur world' any more question,

here is another job i did, its just freestyle, no drink like tropicana, it doesnt exist i just did it, in a way to improve on myself and also kind of building my portfolio, so do u still say my art is 'whack',

and again @justbones, whoever told u golf doesn't rule ur world, maybe u need to find out more abt golf and ask people u know dt as played golf, u feel fly when u play golf and is like a one man game, a player plays at a time, the current play rules the green field until he hands ova his turn to the next player, @smartsoft do u see any concept in that?

well good,  would have prefer you use a weight lifter ! anybody can lift a bicycle up, what do u think about those two below

no doubt, u re good, d first job cld be better, we i ve issue is d color, not the color of d background (dts ok) but the d pics in d tape stripe are not blending with d background especially d man and guy in native attire, d pink background there is quite odd and also the first gal too, u cld actually crop them out and give it ur own background since d original background itself its just a plain one, d jobs are quite ok.

and concerning my energy drink design, d concept is not d strength he used to carry d bike but d concept is suppose to be he has riden a long distance all the way thru the hills before he finally halted and lifted his bike probably in victory or just happy with his strength, think dt shld make sense,