nice story....dunno wat to write self...pls tag me too in ur next story.

cho25bc:
Amen sir. Thanks alot

u welcome..

Short,simple,educative & wonderful story...I pray that those who are victims of such circumstances wil be heal & they wil live their life normal

Nyc one dear, keep it up

iampistis:
[color=#770077][/color] nice one

Thanks dear.God bless u

emsco:
Lovely story. Why not turn this into visuals.. Am a film maker/ director if. Call me if yo need my service 08131501631

Hmmm.2 make films cost ooo.

Amen, u too dear

cooluc:
Beautiful piece dear..keep the passion alive..you will go places.

Thanks dearie

ebudera:
Nice piece,still glue 2 my phone

D story has ended. Thanks 4 dropping by.God bless u

easydrizzle:
You got a nice piece, please keep it going. Would be awaiting new update soon.

Thank u very much

Otth:
Weldone

Lol!I'm so sorry abt ur beans.I'll replace ur burnt beans with one bag of honey beans. God bless u.I don't know wen another story will come up bt I'll notify u wen I av one 2 post.

laikas:
wow, wow, dis is so gud, what a brain 4 a gr8 story, u rock ma'am. my beans had 2 burn because i ws reading ur story. whn is d nxt 1 coming up.

Thanks dear. However,making a movie out of dis piece go costs o,lolz

laikas:

yeah, nice idea, like writin script 4 african magic 1/2 hour film, dis story wil make a nice film.

SPDAZZY:
I enjoyed this. Thanks for the story. More ink to your pen.

Amen.God bless u

stlouiz:
The story is really interesting and the way you assemble the narative makes it captivating. I will love to watch the storyline in a movie someday. Keep it up sis.

Thanks a lot. God bless u

ysekina:
Nyc one dear, keep it up

Thanks dear

Amen. God bless u sir

Twinkle004:
Short,simple,educative & wonderful story...I pray that those who are victims of such circumstances wil be heal & they wil live their life normal

shukrawberry:
nice story....dunno wat to write self...pls tag me too in ur next story.

I will. Thanks dear

ganiyheart:
wow !! Wow!! wow,!! from the beginning to the end was CAPTIVATING.... #Bravo..... Nice write up.. These are things that happens in real life situations but victims of such circumstances can't come out boldly to fight for there rights and be vindicated, because the "Society" we live in is not ready to give them listening hears, no proper body/institution is put in place to fight this menace.. God help us...

Will really love to see it in movie form..

Lesson learnt.
well done cho25bc

U are 100% right Ma'am. Most victims are usually intimidated by dier oppressors 2 silence dem. May God give us d confidence 2 speak out wen in distress. God bless u Ma'am.

Cool

You can do a short film.i will help you manage your buget and bring out something great

You must be a Christian. The way you interwoven the story suggests this. I love the piece. Expecting more!

@Insight2013.Yes,I am. Thanks 4 reading. God bless u

Lovely story I learnt from it thanks for the good work

cho25bc:
Lol!I'm so sorry abt ur beans.I'll replace ur burnt beans with one bag of honey beans. God bless u.I don't know wen another story will come up bt I'll notify u wen I av one 2 post.

k. thanks waiting patiently

waoh weldone

@Adikij,thanks 4 reading Ma'am
@Ozila,thanks 4 honoring my invitation

This story is very interesting. Ride on! am behind u

@nkemdave,thank u very much sir.God bless u

cho25bc:

never knew this piece was as lovely as this and I've been pushing the reading forward

Well crafted piece and also nice lessons to learn by all and sundry except taking laws into your hands for whatever reason/s

Keep up the writing and probably delve into more lengthy ones from your next

Thanks for sharing..


Missmossy u never invited me to partake I'm this wonderful piece n u enjoyed it all alone.. Isoright

kingphilip:
never knew this piece was as lovely as this and I've been pushing the reading forward

Well crafted piece and also nice lessons to learn by all and sundry except taking laws into your hands for whatever reason/s

Keep up the writing and probably delve into more lengthy ones from your next

Thanks for sharing..


Missmossy u never invited me to partake I'm this wonderful piece n u enjoyed it all alone.. Isoright

Lol thanks a lot sir. Abt d lengthy stuff 4 d next story,well,I will try. God bless u

cho25bc:

Lol thanks a lot sir. Abt d lengthy stuff 4 d next story,well,I will try. God bless u

so when should we expect your come back

kingphilip:
so when should we expect your come back

I don't know 4 now.I will mention u wen I'm back