Crazy me in the crazy world

I am alone with my thoughts.

Life seems to be tempting.

But my thoughts always show me the way out.

When the world is conquering

I am quickly conquered by my thoughts to save me from the tormenting conqueror.

The thoughts of mine is lovely..

I'm seduced by its beautiful voice when it whispers to my ears.

Captured me from the addictive world

Made me allergic to the negative impact of the world.

The world is in collosal wrath

But has nothing to do with the Victor.
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Note : World in this poem means Evil.
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