Cutehector:
lol ok i'll draft out a concise critique on it since u asked..

Thank you.

bibijay123:



Lol. I lost today' s update oo

Eeyah, sorry o. As your inlaw don show for lagos i tink say you dey wit am ni.

Epilogue

A Greater Path






REMOVED!







TBC

johnwizey:
Eeyah, sorry o. As your inlaw don show for lagos i tink say you dey wit am ni.

Lool he go come my house instead. Updated now!

Bibi, I enjoyed your story from the beginning to the end. I also admired your writing skill. Indeed you are a very good writer. I learnt a lot from it "There's never a short cut to one's destiny". May God bless u.

Dazzlinggem:
Bibi, I enjoyed your story from the beginning to the end. I also admired your writing skill. Indeed you are a very good writer. I learnt a lot from it "There's never a short cut to one's destiny". May God bless u.

Thank you. May God bless you too

What a life; I am glad Kojo finally gave his life to Christ in spite all his wrongdoings.
That's the fact of life. God will surely save whomever he wants to save no matter his/her past.

OP: you are bless........This is more than mere story to me, it's a lesson that teaches us not to follow the wrong part for wealth.

I pray that God in His infinite mercy will bless our hustles in Jesus name.


Amen!

Bibijay123 I'm enjoying your story like sweet pvssy!
kip em' cumin

Frozeen:
Bibijay123 I'm enjoying your story like sweet pvssy!

kip em' cumin

Loool thank you boss!

hmmm. Bibi all I can say is God bless you!

femid1st:
What a life; I am glad Kojo finally gave his life to Christ in spite all his wrongdoings.
That's the fact of life. God will surely save whomever he wants to save no matter his/her past.

OP: you are bless........This is more than mere story to me, it's a lesson that teaches us not to follow the wrong part for wealth.

I pray that God in His infinite mercy will bless our hustles in Jesus name.


Amen!

Amen oooo, may God bless our hustle. There's no short cut to wealth, cos there will always be a repercussion. Thank you boss, God bless you

jacy67:
hmmm. Bibi all I can say is
God bless you!

Amen. God bless u too dearie

Wow... This detailed story held me spellbound, from the start ... Thanks bibi...

In nigeria u will do ritual money &still buy tokunbo car or buy 1 0r 2 mint.
But u will never reach the dangotes,otedolas,or the really rich.
Money without happiness is a disaster.
Babalawo wey dey give you millions but dey charge you close to nothing, still dey feed im children and wives food without meat or better oil.
Abi im be imbe.cile?
My pple really perish for lack of knowledge.

Big ups gal!

I've been following this post since u started but what more can I say...keep the good work up ma'am. The lord is ur strength

Icemany:
In nigeria u will do ritual money &still buy tokunbo car or buy 1 0r 2 mint.
But u will never reach the dangotes,otedolas,or the really rich.
Money without happiness is a disaster.
Babalawo wey dey give you millions but dey charge you close to nothing, still dey feed im children and wives food without meat or better oil.
Abi im be imbe.cile?
My pple really perish for lack of knowledge.

Big ups gal!

loool thank you boss!

remiseyi:
Wow... This detailed story held me spellbound, from the start ...
Thanks bibi...

Thank you too

* Continues*

A year later


A round of applause resonated in the beautifully decorated and lit hall as i was called by the MC to the poidum. My eyes scanned round the hall and settled on the front row.The front row was occupied by those dear to my heart, the first lady, Pam, now six months pregnant was glowing beautifully and full of smiles, seated beside her was his excellency the president of our great nation. Next was Chantelle, my beautiful daughter who had flown in from France where she had gone to continue her studies. Next was Ama, the vice president of my life changing foundation and Bibi the founder of ' How it all began'.





The only people absent were Mami and Npa(father) who insisted they were too old to be moved about. I have come a long way, from a hungry and desperate boy to an inmate and now an author of the best selling book ' The Devil has the money', also the founder of life Changing foundation and a motivational speaker.


The crowd continued clapping, so many of them held my book in their hands. The book with the help of the intelligent founder of ' how it all began' was a huge success. It became one of the best selling author biography to sell millions of copies in a week! Our gathering today is to premier another life changing book written by me.

My heart swelled with happiness, there is truly fullness of joy in the presence of the lord. When you are for God, nothing and no one can battle with you and win. If not for God' s mercy where would i have been? i remembered the herbalist i had gone to see when i was only fifteen. His words to me " You have been called unto a greater path, your purpose in life is not this way". It might take long but it will be worth it in the end. There is truly no gain or fulfilment in quick riches. How i wish my beautiful Nma and Efo Albert were here to witness this day. I know they were both happy for me and it was truly time to let go of the past.



" Good evening ladies and gentleman, please stand up for the national anthem" i said into the mic.
















THE END





Thank you all for reading, another wonderful one premiers soon.

God bless you

Happy ending,truely God's time is d best.Bibi thanks for this wonderful piece,more grace&inspirations to u.

virtuedagirl:
Happy ending,truely God's time is d best.Bibi thanks for this wonderful piece,more grace&inspirations to u.

Thank you too

michaelolayinka:
I've been following this post since u started but what more can I say...keep the good work up ma'am. The lord is ur strength

Amen. Thank you sir.

Wow... A beautiful end to a beautiful story.

Nice work bibi....(my future big sis

Na so we end am o, lesson learnt!! Kudos bibi, more blessings. Hopefully u will continue to burst our brains

johnwizey:
Na so we end am o, lesson learnt!! Kudos bibi, more blessings. Hopefully u will continue to burst our brains

Loool. Na so we end too. Sent u a mail.

mhiz:
Wow... A beautiful end to a beautiful story.

Nice work bibi....(my future big sis

Lool future sis ke?you are already my sis o

Thank you for the likes and shares n motivating comments! You guys rock!

chrisosi:
God bless you

God bless u too.

U are great girl. I have read 2many stories on nairaland whch are very interesting and captivating by great authors of nl, but urs is so so out of dis world. Neva read a story dat makes me wanna cry....makes me so emotional. This piece is so gr8 emotionally, spiritually, educationally, i could go on and on. U are talented girl. cant put down all my expressions here cos they are 2 many. Just in diz words "U ND ARE AWESOME"

bibijay123:


Loool. Na so we end too. Sent u a mail.

I've replied sis

This is one of the best story i have read here on NL, you're just too good bibijay123 and i see you going places!

I will be waiting for your next package, pls do mention me once you start another story. Thanks

Frozeen:
This is one of the best story i have read here on NL, you're just too good bibijay123 and i see you going places!

I will be waiting for your next package, pls do mention me once you start another story. Thanks

Thank you bro will def give u a mention when i post anoda story.