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Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by bibe(m): 6:59pm On Aug 31, 2016
Polaris1:
In logo design, simplicity is king.
The modern trend in Logos is 'flat' design.

Your logo looks Elizabethan.

Imagine that logo on a Lapel pin or a Pen.

Follow the best examples. simplify.

Nice observation. @OP I'll encourage you to embrace and apply *flat modern* design in all your works. It leaves a simple uncomplicated and professional feel. Just remodel your logo with flat modern design for instance and see what a difference it'll make.
Also in case something like this comes up again, give it a circular structure like the one that was picked. It's sort of the trend of the day (refer to man city new badge logo for example. It incorporated flat modern and circular design)
Good job nonetheless.
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by Boyooosa(m): 7:07pm On Aug 31, 2016
@op, 'welcoming' who? in a logo. May be u designed an Entrance Gate emblem or something... I dont understand. One guy mentioned; 'a primary school pupil should be able to trace the logo easily'... try to find his comment and meet him in person, he has a lot to offer! Good luck anyway.
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by obstead200(m): 7:30pm On Aug 31, 2016
chrisifeanyi:
You would have tried something serene, yours look like a war logo
One elephant is OK and it shouldn't have been too prominent. All I see is too big elephant and Abia state shouldn't all be about elephant. You should have mildly capture every other thing.
This your emblem should be suitable for Abiriba and Ohafia war dance.
U guys have said it all. No need to add more yabs to the OP's logo.
Simply put, I prefer the other logo which the govt selected. It was simple and it captured all relevant details about the state without being too busy.
Then the motto was the bomb. "Prosperity through enterprise"
OP, go and rest. You were good but other guys were better than u.
It is a big lesson to u. Work harder to become the best.
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by spreado(m): 7:52pm On Aug 31, 2016
The elephants look like they are about to cum
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by Softhands(m): 7:57pm On Aug 31, 2016
yuncka:
How Abia State Government Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics)

The New Abia Logo was unveiled few days ago and I received the news with shock. I pursued this logo for over 2yrs and in the end another logo was chosen.

*August 2013*
There was a call/announcement for submission of prospective state emblems through the BCA (Broadcasting Cooperation of Abia State) radio. I visited BCA and was directed to submit my entry with the office of the Secretary to the State Government, then headed by Dr. Nkpa O. Nkpa. Mine was later chosen and I was assigned to work with the Permanent Secretary of the Ministry of Information, Chief. Nathan Harbour. After a number of corrections, insertions and modifications, Chief. Harbour introduced me to the then commissioner for Information, Dr.Eze Chikamnayo, who took special interest on delivering the emblem; further adjustments were made on the emblem. However, towards preparations for the 2015 elections all matters on the state emblem initiative vanished and this is a bit understandable given the demands of our electioneering in this part of the world.
With a new government in place, I drafted and sent several proposals and reminder on the emblem, in addition with an anthem & a flag. Incidentally, on October 1, 2015 the governor called for entries on a state emblem and anthem and I again submitted mine and followed up, constantly sending reminders to the governor's social media platforms. I also exchanged mails with the Chief Press Secretary C. N. Nwakodo on several occasions concerning the entry.


Disappointed? Maybe

I am a bit disappointed not that my entry missed out on being selected for the state emblem, but that my work in every way can challenge and best the current choice in criteria as quality, interpretation and order. I put in my best with logo standards like that of Lagos and Osun state. But I will let my fellow Nairalanders be the judge.


Dear Mods, help me take this news up..
The Abia Logo beat yours Hands down! Your Logo is a Product of Corel Draw.... The Abia Logo is a Produl of Afobe Illustrator... Illustrations Have Great Power!
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by lilreese: 7:58pm On Aug 31, 2016
To much going on
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by fruitfulBROTHER(m): 8:02pm On Aug 31, 2016
Chai... U re wicked. Lol
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by adisa204(m): 8:05pm On Aug 31, 2016
Im sorry to say this, your version is actually all over the place, its too busy and the one chosen is simple, neat and bold. Nonetheless you should learn a thing or two from this. Simplicity is the key.
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by aluko360(m): 8:26pm On Aug 31, 2016
There is beauty in simplicity.

Your design is too crowded.

Looks at corporate logos around, they are simple and symbolic.

*apple

*diam0nd bank

*bmw

* gucci

*fcmb

And the list is endless
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by fergie001: 8:29pm On Aug 31, 2016
alizma:
you really tried. one thing that captures my attention most in your own logo is that Abia tower, followed by the Igbo cap however, the name Abia state Nigeria, without government, is not enough to give much legal attention to documents carrying such headings m remember that the logo will be made into "stamp" for official document purpose. to make the matter worse, the elephant have their hands on the Abia state pressing it downward when it should have been held up high.
the base lines show something like black white black against the green white green on the other one.
,
I think little modifications and he did a near-perfect job,meanwhile op,d then SSG,is a Professor not a Dr.,tnx
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by Nobody: 8:40pm On Aug 31, 2016
ENEONWO:
Your own version of the emblem is too busy.

And the Elephant tie belttongue
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by Kassidy90(m): 9:41pm On Aug 31, 2016
@op u did a wonderful job but just as many people has said I love d simplicity of the other one..
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by longerthroat(m): 9:59pm On Aug 31, 2016
is that an explosive belt on the waist of your elephant? or was that logo for Borno state
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by GerogeI(m): 10:04pm On Aug 31, 2016
Wolfbrother:


Lol that logo is wack.....
Thank you.
People who went to school are designing State Emblems,
Governor Obiano paid some schools boys to scrap together some Corel draw clips as emblem cool tongue
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by philemonemenike(m): 10:16pm On Aug 31, 2016
what's the meaning of all this abeg...
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by micmarvellous(m): 10:27pm On Aug 31, 2016
Awwwwwww, so sorry dear
In all honesty, its very beautiful and elegant, but like a lot of people have clearly put it out to you (in all sincerity), your version had a lot going on and that made it too bulky (or busy as they rightly put).
The Governor (or the panel of judges) wanted something SIMPLE but still had that Elegance, Class and Style in it and most importantly The Message its trying to portray.
Once again, I really love your work.. I pray more opportunities would come your way. Don't stop working, don't stop trying like a told one of my boys today, when you flop, try again!
Shallom!

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Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by Jay542(m): 10:28pm On Aug 31, 2016
micmarvellous:
Awwwwwww, so sorry dear
In all honesty, its very beautiful and elegant, but like a lot persons has clearly put it out to you (in all sincerity), your version had a lot going on and that made it too bulky (or busy as they rightly put).
The Governor (or the panel of judges) wanted something SIMPLE but still had that Elegance, Class and Style in it and most importantly The Message its trying to portray.
Once again, I really love your work.. I pray more opportunities would come your way. Don't stop working, don't stop trying like a told one of my boys today, when you flop, try again!
Shallom!
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by Lifestone(m): 10:32pm On Aug 31, 2016
I prefer your design. The choosen one looks inspired by Kwara State

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Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by Lordbrave(m): 10:56pm On Aug 31, 2016
Lol you version is too poor for my state
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by ohmnetwork1: 2:05am On Sep 01, 2016
philemonemenike:
what's the meaning of all this abeg...
Great word.. Nice logo though OP keep the fire burning.

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Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by godwinkessi: 6:32am On Sep 01, 2016
yuncka:
wow! thanks everyone for your judgements and comments..... am starting to see from different angles......

However this wasnt how it looked initially...like I stated, I started with much simpler design but over the period I pushed for the logo, there were so much reverts but in all I tried not to make it look worse.....


How much will u take to do a logo for me

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Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by excel4us: 7:54am On Sep 01, 2016
IS FANTASTIC.FOR ME,U COINED ABIA STATE LOGO FROM THE NIGERIA COAT OF ARM

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Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by yuncka: 8:06am On Sep 01, 2016
I want to specially tank everyone for your wonderful and hilarious comments and contribution. Seriously I have learnt from you guys and I hope to improve on my designs and decision making.

Most of the comments are downright funny and I appreciate all f you. God bless us all.
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by yuncka: 8:13am On Sep 01, 2016
godwinkessi:



How much will u take to do a logo for me


Thanks bro, that will really be an honor. lets talk about it.

my email is: yunckanix@yahoo.com
number: 07045333144

hope to here from you soon, cheers....
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by deb(m): 9:13am On Sep 01, 2016
I prefer the Abia state Logo to your own design.

Good effort on your path though but not just good enough. It is too busy

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Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by Wolfbrother(m): 9:37am On Sep 01, 2016
GerogeI:

Thank you.
People who went to school are designing State Emblems,
Governor Obiano paid some schools boys to scrap together some Corel draw clips as emblem cool tongue

The thing be like shrine logo...the sunflowers.. the star of David..the calabash looking object..the palm trees.. the horn... not to mention the graphics used for the unnecessary flowers and the horn...any anambra people care to explain ?
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by AmbIzuchukwu(m): 2:40pm On Sep 01, 2016
Wolfbrother:


Lol that logo is wack.....

You are really wolf...
Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by vonlogon: 4:09pm On Sep 01, 2016
I would have made neccessary corrections on your logo and accepted it. the other logo looks like a United States template complete with stars. We should be original and i think its the originality I admire in your Logo

Cheers

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Re: How Abia Turned Down My Logo Design, Be The Judge (pics) by Nobody: 12:59am On Sep 05, 2016
both logos are really good.
However yours is old school ....
Clients are more inclined to pick a 2d flat design ... as this is the trend this days

You should creatively merge both designs

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